The Talk Ch. 1 to 8

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This is The Sex Talk, but the title has been changed so NGTV can post on all his platforms. Naomi Suzuki decides to give her college-bound eighteen-year-old son “the talk”. But her explanation of the birds and the bees gets twisted around on her. Soon, she finds herself in new, compromising positions. Will she be able to escape his training? Will she want to?

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  1. Jdoggg

    This comic is perfect. I love ❤ the Art and Story.

  2. ElPescador

    Nice, this is my favorite story on the site

  3. Anteater

    Chapter 7, a pretty good read. I could read a look or annoyance on Naomi’s face when she answers her husband’s beer inquiry with “Just a sec.”

    Repetition of image panels are becoming a bit of an annoyance though. Might need to talk to the artist about that.

  4. Zack.flux

    I just don’t like the art on this story. I enjoy the story itself, but the repeated panels *really* bug me. It also bothers me that the character descriptions don’t match the characters very much. The surnames of the main characters are clearly Asian, but neither Naomi nor David look remotely Asian. So many of your stories feature Caucasians as the main characters; it would have been nice for a change.

    1. Rawls

      Yes, I agree with the issues you bring up. Unfortunately, I can’t always change projects once they’re underway. I will be mindful of these issues in the future, for sure.

  5. Maximusthemad

    One thing, he cums in her face and she’s supposedly worried about getting it in her eye… but the illustration has her with glasses on… words don’t match the pictures.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for pointing this out. We try to catch inconsistencies, but they sometimes slip through.

  6. JTass

    Love the story and the artwork, but the format needs some tightening up.
    There’s no reason to have a 50-page document that has multiple pages with only one paragraph and no image, or to repeat the same image on multiple pages with only one sentence below it.

    1. Rawls

      I agree. Working with this artist on A Mother’s Secret Identity, and I’ll do my regular formatting for that one (I’ll put the finished chapters together myself).

  7. MtnDewVolt

    Chapter 6 was great! Love the mothers reactions. I hope she enjoys her newfound trick and expands on it further, learning more and more~ 😌

  8. Anteater

    Why wasn’t her selfie-taking picture with the text of her doing it? It is at the end which does not make much sense in that regard.

  9. OvergearedLegendaryMechanic

    Chapter 5 has some errors. On page 7 you might want to repaint the ring, page 12 the sentence with Mrs N’s twins has a weird sounding “had”, page 23 and 24 need recropping. Is there a place that is meant for mistake reports?

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for pointing those out. I read all the comments, so this is a good place to point out mistakes. This is one of the only stories formatted by the illustrator, so I’ll contact him and see if he wants to publish an updated version with some fixes.

  10. Anteater

    I sincerely hope this was not the final chapter. I am sure the story will improve. The repetition of the same image twice in a row when it did not need it. The fact that an image was used a second time when it did not match the words does bother me a bit.

  11. Czoftw

    This is your only story that I didn’t like. The build-up was almost non-existent and I had some issues with the art work as well.

    It’s ok, I still love you!

    1. Rawls

      Haha, you can’t win them all. Thanks for the feedback.

  12. Anteater

    Chapter 3 is awesome. It looks like Naomi is getting closer to her lusts. I would love to read chapter 4.

  13. Anteater

    Chapter 2 was not disappointing. I enjoy how cute Naomi is.

  14. Tblot

    Loving these art style, would love to see more from them.

    1. Rawls

      You’re in luck 🙂 I’ll be working on Something in the Water with him in addition to The Talk. First chapter should arrive late June.

  15. Simon S.

    The more comicbook style is fantastic!

  16. Kuanyang

    I like this so far – it’s a different framing style and he reuses images but it’s still effective at carrying the narrative. The only distracting thing is when the text description doesn’t match the image.

    Example 1. Page 7 “He enjoyed how his physical presence dwarfed hers.” The image is surely the opposite…
    Example 2. The wedding ring sometimes disappears from the left hand, and never has a diamond on it.

    Don’t get me wrong, I like the drawing style and I know I’m picking nits here, but it does pull me out of the story when that mismatch between text and image happens.

    FWIW.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for the feedback. It’s helpful. We’ll work on including the ring going forward. That’s a big one for me, too.

    2. Zack.flux

      I agree about the relative sizes. I’m also disappointed that a woman named “Suzuki” and who is described as small (albeit buxom) doesn’t look remotely Asian. Neither of them do, really.

  17. Holyx

    I was actually hoping for the journey of the mother ship to be next story to be illustrated.

  18. Anteater

    This is pretty good, it has gotten me to look forward to chapter 2. Where are the other 7 volumes?

    1. Rawls

      The other volumes aren’t my writing. That’s just how he labels his projects. You can check out all his stuff at his site.

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