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Hiya, I do not see the link to show me chapter three to read it?
Your membership expired. You’ll need to renew your membership to see the chapters.
Hiya Rawls, I have update it again. I get a message that says it was successful.
this is the second time it has happened. Here is hoping it will this time.
I checked my account. It shows you were paid last on 08-Apr-2025 with “RAWLS 840 14.00 VISAXR 1.28558 CD ####”
Okay, I’ll clear this up. Please check your email for the details.
Just adding to previous comments that I would prefer to see open projects completed before starting anymore new.
I am going to double down on the previous comments.
It is the start of a good story.
And I do wish that you would keep on with the stories that you have instead of adding new stories
I’m not planning any other new stories. I wrote Heath from the prompt that won the last poll, but it didn’t work for Lexx, so I had to writhe The Traveling Tower instead.
Eronautics approached me and asked to illustrate Heath. He wanted to work on two projects. I said yes. That’s why Heath is around. I’m not planning on starting any other stories until I finish the incomplete ones.
Hey Rawlys took me a bit to read this because life got in the way. I enjoyed it. I wish you did the little notes on top of each chapter like Dune like how princess Irulan was writing. That would’ve been cool. But regardless still good. One thing if you find a illustrator for this please hold off on this because I want you to finish the short stories you have. I don’t want you to add new stuff until your done. For me I want you to finish and get back to main stories and you adding new stories gets in the way. I just wanted to share my thoughts. Good stuff Rawlys
Looking forward to the start of the new story! This one seemed pretty fun though… I was hoping for him to have to put his dick into the Gom Jobbar 🙂
What do you mean by pirates? People posting your stuff illegally?
Yup, every time people leak Rawly’s stuff there is a decline in membership numbers = there is less money for art.
Yep, this is 100% correct.
Loved it and absolutely loved the callbacks to dune with fantasy twists
Pretty good start!
Has kind of a Dune-like feel to it.