A brother and sister are accidentally pulled into a magical murder mystery board game. Inside, they must solve the puzzles of the cryptic Palmer Lodge. The game starts on Christmas Eve in 1938 as a company of unexpected relations are brought to an isolated island. Each person has a motive for the resulting slaughter. But only one commits murder at Palmer Lodge. Can you spot the killer?
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I like it, even when it feel a little short.
Enjoyed this story a lot! Would’ve been great to have a scene with Clarissa and her mom, but we did get lots of M/D with the cousin, so I can’t complain. I know you like to reference some of your stories in other stories, and was wondering if “Day Star” was a reference I just didn’t know? Or maybe a potential sequel set up?
Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it. Yes, Eloise and Day Star show up in lots of other stories. Day Star is in Palmer Mansion, Palmer Legacy, and The Wicked Tower.
Loved this story. The mystery was a fun thing to keep on the mind as the Palmer effect took place on everyone. Love that the main character was kind of a goof😂
Thanks 🙂
This is one of the best of your writings. It is original ,twisted, sexy and supercreative.
I can’t wait until the next chapters.
I have asked several times that you not add more but finish some of the good stories that you have. This would be one of them.
Thank you
Short stories like this one are written at the pace of the illustrator.
FYI, I noticed a typo on page 76.
“Copesetic? should be “Copacetic?”
Thanks for the note. I’ll fix this.
Another small one on page 80, second to last paragraph of chapter 15.
It says “but how knows”, I think with the sentence context it should be “but who knows”
Thank you. The fixed version will appear when the next chapter is published.
Really looking forward to this story going forward
Love this story. Can’t wait for the rest.
interesting story! i hope they will remember after the game. Will they keep the body change when they come back? Will see…
Yes! Moar Eloise Palmer and her shenanigans, please!
More on the way! 🙂
I posted more on the discord, but up to chapter 5, I’m quite enjoying the vibe as Clarissa and Austin get into their respective roles, as we’re seeing more of the quirks of the NPCs wearing their various family members’ faces.
I like possibilities. This storyline is full of them!
From who gets murdered to sudden awareness of “real world” relationships after their game characters have had carnal relationships in the game.
POSSIBLITIES ABOUND! Great stuff
PS: S and W should be out of bounds as murder victims.
Just my opinion of course.
I like how the game is played. But here’s hoping some consequences roll over, too.
Maybe …
Hell yea. Eloise Palmer gonna start another lovely sordid tale. I can’t wait for the overly seeded crinkum crankums!
🙂
Beauiful beginnings…. so looking forward to this new spin on Palmer Legacy 😍
Thanks! But it will be very different than Palmer Legacy. Pretty much only the Palmer part will be here 🙂
As this is a Who-Dunnit story, did you plan out the whole mystery in advance or did you take a different approach?
Yes, the victim and the murderer are mapped out.
Nice. Will there be pregnancies and psychological thrills?
There might be pregnancies. If a murder mystery has psychological thrills, then yes!
This is your most interesting plot since enki, the serum, and the stone novel.
I would maintain my membership for regular updates of this story.
Glad you like it. The plan is a new chapter every month.
Ah another story with the Palmers, can’t wait to see what they are upto now.
The Palmer storylines are my personal favorites.
They’re up to … murder 🙂