Elora’s Tast of Black Magic is finished. CreamCadet and I will need a new project to collaborate on. She wants to work in a fantasy setting, so please make pitches in the high fantasy Rawly universe: also known as Mothers & Monsters.
What will be the premise of our new story? That’s going to be up to you. In forty words or less, pitch your idea for a new running story in the comments below. We’ll pick out our favorite suggestions and hold a poll to select the winner in a few days.
A mother and son wake to find themselves in a strange land. They soon discover the land is ruled by a ruthless king and a devoted loyal queen. Turns out the king is the boys father and queen his sister.
How did the family get here why and who.
And why does the son and mother remember the past but the husband and sister don’t. So many questions. Can the son and mother find answers before the king and Queen kill them. And before they all spiral forever into sexual madness.
Pushed to breaking point by his father, Daystar performs his biggest act of rebellion by sullying the first family. He manipulates Cain and Abel and uses them to corrupt their mother Eve, resulting in his fall from heaven. A Lucifer origin story.
Hades is bored in Summer when his wife Persephone is staying with her mother Demeter. He seduces a mother 36 daughter 18. Both get preggers and Hades makes them fall in love so no man will raise his kids.
A lot of people did not read the message: FOURTY WORDS OR LESS people. Majority here fails that condition which means they will not be even considered.
(Though I agree that <40 is very limiting and should be raised to at least 60 as it hardly gives space to describe the setting, characters and conditions.)
War torn land, two mysterious and pregnant young women (twins) are sent to live in a distant forsaken nunnery. To one, born a boy and girl, the other a girl. In adulthood, the boy’s desires start to grow out of control. The sisters attempt to keep his supernatural desires and strength.
Inspired by FX’s Shogun – a Porugese merchant is tasked by the crown to strengthen their trade foothold in feudal Japan. The merchant, his 18 year old son, and his devout Christian wife become guests of a powerful Daimyo and his cunning wife. The son quickly finds himself pulled into the schemes of court intrigue by the Daimyo’s wife and other wives of the court, with only his mother to shelter him in this strange land.
My bad – didn’t see the fantasy theme of the suggestion request. I’ll revise my suggestion to:
A young man is just starting out at a wizarding school where his mother is the stern headmistress, his twin sister is a magical prodigy, and his older brother is handsome, popular, and dating the most beautiful girl in school. In an attempt to prove he isn’t the magical dud of the family, he attempts a forbidden ritual that horribly backfires – or does it?
A group of high school boys makes a secret pact: draw girls’ names from a hat and win them over, no matter what. But as friendships strain and real feelings spark, their reckless game threatens to ruin everything they value. Oh yeah and one of them draws his prudish, teacher Mom. Who would have put her in there?
A mother, son, and daughter trio have been abducted and enslaved in an orc tribe’s mine. The orcs use the women additional as sex slaves, and the mother is horrified at the thought of becoming pregnant by one of the brutish creatures. In desperation, she pleads with her son to take her place and impregnate both her and her daughter, to ensure that they are not made to bear orc children. Can the son succed? Or will the woman break before he can accomplish his task? Its a race against time.
A son worries that his mother is acting oddly ever since she started seeing a doctor.
She is distant and a little out of it. He decides to follow her to the doctors. When he looks into the room via a window he sees the doctor hypnotising her with a strange looking pendant. She is naked and ready for the doctor to have his evil way with her.
Before things get too out of hand the son calls the cops and the doctor is promptly arrested.
However he leaves the pendant behind which the son is strangely drawn to.
The pendant turns out to be magical and possesses the son. He is soon compelled to hypnotise and control the female members of his family. Mother, aunt, sister and grandmother. The pendant feeds of the sexual energy of its enslaved person.
Meanwhile two paranormal investigators are on the trail of the pendant.
Can they rescue the son and his family before the whole town is under the pendants thrall.
A family of four 2 parents and 2 children go for a camping trip to a Lake, a meteor drops to the Lake an explosion follows, and then the family wakes in another realm. Father is missing, mother is transformed to an elven sorceress, son to a half orc/half elf hybrid (size matters) and daughter to a powerful, shapeshifting dragonness. All nice till we discover father is their nemesis and arch villain of the realm!
A family of dragon riders return from a flight to far lands. Their son and daughter have always been close but something happened during their trip and now they have been separated by their mother. To get back to his sister the son will do anything, even steal an object that makes people more open to… suggestion. Even when there doesn’t seem to be any suggestion there. The son ends up closer to more than just his sister…
A family begins playing a magical board game that blends our world with a mystical realm fueled by magic. The challenges in the game get riskier and the characters from the other realm really don’t want the family to leave.
How bout a rif on Neverending story? An 18-year-old misses stories before bed with his mom when he was young so he begs her to join him. His mom wishes he would mature more but says this will be the last time. The book magically transports them to a fantasy world. Using the book as their guide, they come across many monsters and maidens and his mom finds herself drawn to him. Another twist could be that the dad finds the book and reads it himself to discover what could be happening between his wife and son and tries to get them out before they perish or go too far.
A succubus falls in love with a farmer. Unable to have children directly with him, she uses/possess his family/relatives/village to have offspring. He gives in to “save” everyone.
Last suggestion post had quite a few interesting ideas, I hope they get reposted. The polotus2328, ReadRawls69 and NegativeEnergy (though his pitch needs trimming) were my favourites.
A story about an adventure son who wants to become an adventure like his mom so she decides to train him as they take quest. But on this journey the son will discover a different side to his mom that’s more promiscuous than he thought also the son will adopt his mother promiscuous lifestyle as well.
Centuries ago a comet crashed and erupted a Red Stone Storm that sweeps across the land.
Now in the present two warring factions fight over the nature of the storms. One that breeds the queen and her son to create a daughter and future queen who will help quell the storms destruction.
The princess is abducted and her brother/father gathers allies of fae, elves, and exiled aunt/ half sister must venture to rescue her before the next storm comes
An evil king is attacking a nation with eyes on world conquest. In order to fight them, the princess needs to use the power of her bloodline which is that of a succubus. The more she uses it to fight the evil king, the more horny and depraved she becomes.
In a magic world where there is there is war raging with a great evil… magic humans are very important to to fight it.
The matriarch of a one of the noble families a powerful magic woman calls her son a powerful magic warrior to spend the summer with her and his 5 sister with the objective of breeding them and creating more powerful magic beings on the family to help fight this great evil.
Each sister has a different personality and the story develops around him breeding his mother and sisters, while getting closer to the more distant sisters.
A mother and son wake to find themselves in a strange land. They soon discover the land is ruled by a ruthless king and a devoted loyal queen. Turns out the king is the boys father and queen his sister.
How did the family get here why and who.
And why does the son and mother remember the past but the husband and sister don’t. So many questions. Can the son and mother find answers before the king and Queen kill them. And before they all spiral forever into sexual madness.
Pushed to breaking point by his father, Daystar performs his biggest act of rebellion by sullying the first family. He manipulates Cain and Abel and uses them to corrupt their mother Eve, resulting in his fall from heaven. A Lucifer origin story.
Oops. I should have read the top of this thread first. My story idea was not a fantasy setting and way over 40 words. Apologies.
Hades is bored in Summer when his wife Persephone is staying with her mother Demeter. He seduces a mother 36 daughter 18. Both get preggers and Hades makes them fall in love so no man will raise his kids.
A lot of people did not read the message: FOURTY WORDS OR LESS people. Majority here fails that condition which means they will not be even considered.
(Though I agree that <40 is very limiting and should be raised to at least 60 as it hardly gives space to describe the setting, characters and conditions.)
War torn land, two mysterious and pregnant young women (twins) are sent to live in a distant forsaken nunnery. To one, born a boy and girl, the other a girl. In adulthood, the boy’s desires start to grow out of control. The sisters attempt to keep his supernatural desires and strength.
Inspired by FX’s Shogun – a Porugese merchant is tasked by the crown to strengthen their trade foothold in feudal Japan. The merchant, his 18 year old son, and his devout Christian wife become guests of a powerful Daimyo and his cunning wife. The son quickly finds himself pulled into the schemes of court intrigue by the Daimyo’s wife and other wives of the court, with only his mother to shelter him in this strange land.
My bad – didn’t see the fantasy theme of the suggestion request. I’ll revise my suggestion to:
A young man is just starting out at a wizarding school where his mother is the stern headmistress, his twin sister is a magical prodigy, and his older brother is handsome, popular, and dating the most beautiful girl in school. In an attempt to prove he isn’t the magical dud of the family, he attempts a forbidden ritual that horribly backfires – or does it?
A group of high school boys makes a secret pact: draw girls’ names from a hat and win them over, no matter what. But as friendships strain and real feelings spark, their reckless game threatens to ruin everything they value. Oh yeah and one of them draws his prudish, teacher Mom. Who would have put her in there?
A mother, son, and daughter trio have been abducted and enslaved in an orc tribe’s mine. The orcs use the women additional as sex slaves, and the mother is horrified at the thought of becoming pregnant by one of the brutish creatures. In desperation, she pleads with her son to take her place and impregnate both her and her daughter, to ensure that they are not made to bear orc children. Can the son succed? Or will the woman break before he can accomplish his task? Its a race against time.
A son worries that his mother is acting oddly ever since she started seeing a doctor.
She is distant and a little out of it. He decides to follow her to the doctors. When he looks into the room via a window he sees the doctor hypnotising her with a strange looking pendant. She is naked and ready for the doctor to have his evil way with her.
Before things get too out of hand the son calls the cops and the doctor is promptly arrested.
However he leaves the pendant behind which the son is strangely drawn to.
The pendant turns out to be magical and possesses the son. He is soon compelled to hypnotise and control the female members of his family. Mother, aunt, sister and grandmother. The pendant feeds of the sexual energy of its enslaved person.
Meanwhile two paranormal investigators are on the trail of the pendant.
Can they rescue the son and his family before the whole town is under the pendants thrall.
A family of four 2 parents and 2 children go for a camping trip to a Lake, a meteor drops to the Lake an explosion follows, and then the family wakes in another realm. Father is missing, mother is transformed to an elven sorceress, son to a half orc/half elf hybrid (size matters) and daughter to a powerful, shapeshifting dragonness. All nice till we discover father is their nemesis and arch villain of the realm!
A mother and son get trapped in a book and must survive by fulfilling certain tasks that bring them closer.
A family of dragon riders return from a flight to far lands. Their son and daughter have always been close but something happened during their trip and now they have been separated by their mother. To get back to his sister the son will do anything, even steal an object that makes people more open to… suggestion. Even when there doesn’t seem to be any suggestion there. The son ends up closer to more than just his sister…
A family begins playing a magical board game that blends our world with a mystical realm fueled by magic. The challenges in the game get riskier and the characters from the other realm really don’t want the family to leave.
How bout a rif on Neverending story? An 18-year-old misses stories before bed with his mom when he was young so he begs her to join him. His mom wishes he would mature more but says this will be the last time. The book magically transports them to a fantasy world. Using the book as their guide, they come across many monsters and maidens and his mom finds herself drawn to him. Another twist could be that the dad finds the book and reads it himself to discover what could be happening between his wife and son and tries to get them out before they perish or go too far.
A succubus falls in love with a farmer. Unable to have children directly with him, she uses/possess his family/relatives/village to have offspring. He gives in to “save” everyone.
Last suggestion post had quite a few interesting ideas, I hope they get reposted. The polotus2328, ReadRawls69 and NegativeEnergy (though his pitch needs trimming) were my favourites.
A young man attends a family trip to the local crystal dig site. He finds an amethyst with a tome inside of it.
The tome has inscriptions of the Fae. Things begin to change. Once ancient becomes new.
A story about an adventure son who wants to become an adventure like his mom so she decides to train him as they take quest. But on this journey the son will discover a different side to his mom that’s more promiscuous than he thought also the son will adopt his mother promiscuous lifestyle as well.
Centuries ago a comet crashed and erupted a Red Stone Storm that sweeps across the land.
Now in the present two warring factions fight over the nature of the storms. One that breeds the queen and her son to create a daughter and future queen who will help quell the storms destruction.
The princess is abducted and her brother/father gathers allies of fae, elves, and exiled aunt/ half sister must venture to rescue her before the next storm comes
An evil king is attacking a nation with eyes on world conquest. In order to fight them, the princess needs to use the power of her bloodline which is that of a succubus. The more she uses it to fight the evil king, the more horny and depraved she becomes.
In a magic world where there is there is war raging with a great evil… magic humans are very important to to fight it.
The matriarch of a one of the noble families a powerful magic woman calls her son a powerful magic warrior to spend the summer with her and his 5 sister with the objective of breeding them and creating more powerful magic beings on the family to help fight this great evil.
Each sister has a different personality and the story develops around him breeding his mother and sisters, while getting closer to the more distant sisters.
Son gets turned into a troll by a witch,
To break the the curse
Mother must have sex with him until she develops a true desire to do so.