The queen and her prince seek refuge in a magical tower. But they don’t find the safety they sought. The building has a mind of its own, and other nefarious creatures share the long halls and disapproving rooms with them.
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Chapters 5 & 6 are my favorites so far, but I’m really anticipating Chapter 7. Maybe soon we can get Hestia and Rian to lose to magical and physical needs.
13 and 14 are the best for me… I understand that sometimes the story goes around not in a coherent storyline… maybe if got a little bit of knowledge of the cocks motivation we will stich better the chapters
13 + 14 ? The story is up to 7 at the moment. Perhaps you are thinking of another story by Rawls?
I mixed comments from my mother’s secret identity… lol
Time travel confirmed!
I don’t know, but this chapter did not worked for me. Maybe is the pacing or the lack of illustrations; i am puzzled really, but let me see with the next one.
the slow start to all these stories is tiresome. these chapters don’t satisfy anything.
I hear you. I’m glad that many readers seem to have an appetite for the slower burning stories. I like writing them. But I understand that a slow burn doesn’t work for everyone, so there are plenty of stories on the site that get right to it. 🙂
hi Rawls, this story is off to a good start and looking for more soon. let the artist know the dog says great work. can i ask how many chapters are in marooned and something in the water?
I’m not sure what you mean by how many chapters are in those stories. The chapter numbers are listed for each story in the illustrated and text-only sections.
I want to say again and again. Enough new stories. I would definitely like to see some of the older stories with more chapters. The McAllister Method and the Palmer Murder lodge. And what happened to Under Fire. I have complained for many months and still we get new stories. My frustration really subtracts from my enjoyment.
I don’t know Lexx and why Rawls feels obligated but this has been going on for a long time
I work in a collaborative way with the illustrators and voice talent. I don’t ever tell them what story they must work on. I give them choices. In Lexx’s case, I gave him choices from all the incomplete stories that needed a new artist. None of those stories worked for him. So, we created a new story. This is true of all collaborations. Of course, I try to get the old stories started again, but if there’s no interest, I won’t force it. The best art comes out of happy collaborations.
Chapter 2 was an excellent escalation. Definitely want to see this new character add to the story and the sex scenes.
Ooh what a terrific start!
Hi Rawlys. I wanna say that I really like the short stories your finishing up I think you’ve done a great job because on some you’ve made me interested in reading them again. One thing though, me personally even if this new story is good I would much prefer you finish up the short stories you have now before making new ones. Your already behind and adding more for me is going to take longer especially since once your caught up I want to get back to main novels again.
I see this comment as baseless, and a little rude.
What I wasn’t try to be rude I was just trying to post my opinion on the matter. Please elaborate how I was rude. I mean it. Was it the tone? I apologize if it was I just like sharing my thoughts and problems I have at times.
Hello!
I agree with you about not wanting to start new stories until the loose end ones are wrapped up. But I had to replace Missus Ring with a new story for Lexx. And when Heath didn’t work out, I had to write this one for Lexx. So, it was just how circumstances worked out here.
Oh I see. I guess that makes sense then. But personally I thought for that one that you still were not gonna do one until you were done. I don’t know personally for me I would rather you have waited to do a new story until you were done. Missus Ring was one of your old stories so I feel that counts.
There was no question that I would write a new story for Lexx. He’s one of my most valued collaborations.
Interesting, though the “nefarious creatures” worries me a bit.