An alien lands in a lake near a small town in the 1950s. The creature experiments on the population, starting first with human reproduction. No family is safe. Stay away from the water.
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I wasn’t expecting sci-fi horror but damn, this was a great read. I was hoping that Roy’s body would be found fried; he was a great villain. Amazing job.
I really appreciate the feedback 🙂 I do hope Roy’s consciousness wasn’t uploaded into Acxix when he died!
is there something in the water illustrated?
Not yet, but I may have an announcement about it soon.
Hey Rawly! Just curious, will you be illustrating this series? I hope you do!
I would like to, just looking for the right illustrator.
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Chapter 10 is great and informative. I love how David is trying to fight off his mother and sister (and looks to be failing).
Will this ever be illustrated? Would love if it were!
If it does, I will be reading it!
Chapters 8 and 9 are wonderful. It seems Patrick found himself enjoying Donna again.
Chapter 7 is very good, I loved the pairing of Patrick and Mrs. Donna Farmer. I just sounded right between them; I hope Susy finally gets taken by him.
Chapters 5 and 6 are great. Nice to see others outside of the main characters. The way Linda breast-fed that young woman, wow. I never expected it. That Ralph guy and his mother was good; the way Linda just accepted being taken and how she dominated the young woman like she thought it was all a part of some divine plan. Wow, I never would have thought it but she sounds conditioned.
Chapter 4 was good. Roy’s conquests have just started and I already want to know who his next bitch will be.
I hope Patrick is able to claim Mrs, Epson.
I really enjoyed chapter 3.
Just finished chapter 2, looks like the first of the mating processes has succeeded and I hope this works.
I finished chapter 1, I love the fact it is essentially science fiction but focused on how the people interact with each other. This is interesting in that it does NOT go for a slow burn but initiates a form of sex in the first chapter.
Who is that depicted on the cover art? Linda Riles?
Very good story…..I am such a naughty guy. Maybe alternative endings with chapters showing Roy ruling the town and his exploitation of the women in the town.–anteater1
I don’t think we’re going to get any alternate endings or anything, but there will be more Roy-like characters in the future.