Something in the Water Ch. 1 to 19

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An alien lands in a lake near a small town in the 1950s. The creature experiments on the population, starting first with human reproduction. No family is safe. Stay away from the water.

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  1. Ilovestory

    Will continue or the capter 19 is the last?

  2. RedSarah

    I wasn’t expecting sci-fi horror but damn, this was a great read. I was hoping that Roy’s body would be found fried; he was a great villain. Amazing job.

    1. Rawls

      I really appreciate the feedback 🙂 I do hope Roy’s consciousness wasn’t uploaded into Acxix when he died!

  3. herox94

    is there something in the water illustrated?

    1. Rawls

      Not yet, but I may have an announcement about it soon.

  4. Damned17

    Hey Rawly! Just curious, will you be illustrating this series? I hope you do!

    1. Rawls

      I would like to, just looking for the right illustrator.

  5. Mammatus

    pictures are not showing
    I have a plus subscription

    1. Rawls

      There are no illustrations for this story. You need to go to the illustrated catalogue to see the illustrated stories. If you’re still having trouble, you can email me at

  6. Anteater

    Chapter 10 is great and informative. I love how David is trying to fight off his mother and sister (and looks to be failing).

  7. James

    Will this ever be illustrated? Would love if it were!

  8. Anteater

    Chapters 8 and 9 are wonderful. It seems Patrick found himself enjoying Donna again.

  9. Anteater

    Chapter 7 is very good, I loved the pairing of Patrick and Mrs. Donna Farmer. I just sounded right between them; I hope Susy finally gets taken by him.

  10. Anteater

    Chapters 5 and 6 are great. Nice to see others outside of the main characters. The way Linda breast-fed that young woman, wow. I never expected it. That Ralph guy and his mother was good; the way Linda just accepted being taken and how she dominated the young woman like she thought it was all a part of some divine plan. Wow, I never would have thought it but she sounds conditioned.

  11. Anteater

    Chapter 4 was good. Roy’s conquests have just started and I already want to know who his next bitch will be.
    I hope Patrick is able to claim Mrs, Epson.

  12. Anteater

    Just finished chapter 2, looks like the first of the mating processes has succeeded and I hope this works.

  13. Anteater

    I finished chapter 1, I love the fact it is essentially science fiction but focused on how the people interact with each other. This is interesting in that it does NOT go for a slow burn but initiates a form of sex in the first chapter.

  14. hambone2030

    Who is that depicted on the cover art? Linda Riles?

  15. anteater1

    Very good story…..I am such a naughty guy. Maybe alternative endings with chapters showing Roy ruling the town and his exploitation of the women in the town.–anteater1

    1. Rawls

      I don’t think we’re going to get any alternate endings or anything, but there will be more Roy-like characters in the future.