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Is there going to be more chapter?
Yes, I put THE END at the end of my stories to make it clear when it’s over.
Need longer chapters if possible
This is a short chapter story, so it’ll have chapters just over 2,000 words. The main novels have chapters over 4,000 words.
This was insane!!
Love this series hope if continues.
Now that is hot. Good chapter.
Oooh, chapter 20 was really hot! I didn’t think she’d tell Daniel so quickly, but glad it’s out there now and throwing her even more off balance 🙂 They are gonna need her like that if Benjie and his sister are both going to take mommy!! mmmmmm
To be honest, I don’t know how I felt about it. Let’s see how the dynamics move around now. Puzzled
Damm! That was hot!
great stuff! i love that Mia is so far gone she still wants to play trash hoe lol. Hopefully Benjie will be able to fetch the stone back after this …
YES SIR!!!!
Great new chapter, though it’s wild how his Mom claims ownership of the stone after she literally stole it from him. It’s also odd that he didn’t bother calling that out, neither to her or his Dad.
Way to start the year! Kudos!!
Ha Ha You have managed to take an excellent story and make it better. I am eager to see the next edition
Getting pretty good! I eagerly await every new post of this. A bit of a cautionary tale there with “trash hoe” … he and his sister probably better pay more attention to that, I think!
Where do i find the illustrations?
The first three chapters are illustrated here: https://rawlyrawls.com/under-fire-illustrated/
But there aren’t any plans for more illustrated chapters of this story.
And are the other 10 going to be illustrated too?
I would like to find an illustrator for this story some day, but no immediate plans.
I feel like this one definitely has potential. Kinda bummed that he didn’t get the stone back….
thumbs up to you Rawls. this is turning into one of the better stories. I like the direction your going with this. still check daily on new material. Glad you got things sorted out to reopen this site. Keep up the good work.
Dude….thats a terrible spot to end a story update!
How to access to the Page?
Membership is closed right now. With any luck it’ll reopen this week.
How do i read it, it’s annoying that i can’t upgrade my membership
Membership is closed right now. With any luck it’ll reopen this week.
Hi! The first chapters were illustrated ones. What about the others? Is there a chance that we have some pictures to have the chapters less “textual” 🤪? Anyway, you are still a great author, and I have to admit that I love your stories, with or without any picture.
JDseal didn’t want to work on this story anymore. And I haven’t been able to interest any other illustrators in this one. But people wanted me to finish the story anyway, so that’s what I’m doing.
Dang I hate how these updates are short ! Just want them to go on and on!
Love the story. Ready for the mom to get involved.
Love the insert of the father
Fun stuff! Benjie’s patented Attitude Shifting Stone (ASS) therapy for all them hot MILF s! Now how to get his mom to accidentally sit on it for a while … maybe she slips in the shower and “accidentally the whole thing” lol
I love this story. I am glad you added another great chapter.
This is exciting !
Just read your answer on illustrations for this one.
I’m so glad to see this story finally getting an update. I thought it was on hiatus.
I’m taking a break from writing main long chapter novels to finish up this and Aztec. Since Aztec is done, I’m moving on to this one. Once Under Fire is done, I’ll move back to writing main novels. Sadly, there aren’t any illustrations planned for this one. Maybe someday.
Nice to have some follow up on old stories. Especially this one
While I’ll miss JD’s art to go with it, happy to get more chapters at least in text! Nice update (chapter 5), enjoyed it!
Indeed! Great to see this one back
Yeah
Can’t wait for this one to be updated!
JDseal will no longer work on this one. So, there are no current plans to update the illustrated version. I will finish writing this story soon, though.
I must admit, it’s quite disappointing to see this story put on hold. I was thoroughly invested in Benjamin’s journey and the growth of his flourishing business. The story hit the ground running, and I was eagerly anticipating how it would all unfold. I’d gladly subscribe again just to read more chapters, even if they were just text. Beyond that, I’ve truly become captivated by your storytelling and writing abilities. Keep up the fantastic work—I’m excited to see what you come up with next!
Thanks for the feedback! This is one of the stories I intend to finish after 3838 is complete.
A fantastic story so far!
Is there any updates for this one? I enjoyed the texts and was hoping there would be an eventual continuation, but it’s been over a year. Any updates on when we could see a next chapter or two?
I love this storiy but it seems to me that the stories i like the most are the ones that are slowly coming out compared to when they where started and when other stories started. Will be copying this into a couple of other chats to as subtle hint :p (also i dont care if there are no drawings)
Are there no more chapters coming out (text or other)? Have not seen anything for almost a year
I have an update. I talked to JDseal today actually. Under Fire will continue, but with less illustrations per chapter, and it will be in black and white instead of color.
Looking forward to you releasing chapter 5
Yeah cmon ch. 5! Been almost a year. It was just getting good too!
See this for a recent update: https://rawlyrawls.com/an-update-on-stalled-projects/
This story should get fast uploads not slow please. There are only few good stories left here and it’s one of them.
If you mean the pace of new chapters, that’s up to JDseal’s schedule. When we started this collaboration, we agreed that he wouldn’t work on it regularly, but might take many months between chapters.
So.. this one is dead?
JDseal runs on his own schedule. He’s still planning to continue this, but he’s doing other things. This one will move along slowly.
Is there somewhere on the site where we can see a roadmap / timeline of the stuff that’s actually getting attention?
I update the illustrated projects once a month in the calendar: https://rawlyrawls.com/tag/calendar/ Here you get a good sense for what has regular updates and what does not. Although things can change.
I hope you take this comment in the admiring spirit it’s intended, hah ha : I’m so excited and anticipatory for this story, and I hate that it basically went on ice before we got to the mother yielding to him. Really looking forward to next installment.
Can’t wait for next chapters!
I love the more dominant boyz. Go Benjie!
Can’t wait for benje to lay some pipe in Mom and let her know who’s in charge.
just waiting for the neigherhood’s young women and MILf’s bellies to swell. while under the influence of the dark stone from benji’s massages.