Cursed Recollections Ch. 1 Post author:Rawls Post published:March 29, 2022 A cursed book is next on the list for the women of the Royal Oaks Book Club. If you have an opinion, please leave your feedback below. Your comments are helpful in navigating the course of future projects. Illustrations by BSA: https://www.patreon.com/BSArt and https://twitter.com/BSAnsfw This content is limited to (Rawly Rawls Member Plus), (Rawly Rawls member Elite), & (Rawly Rawls Member Max). To view this content please upgrade your Membership Plan. Tags: BSA, Cursed Recollections, Illustrated Stories Please Share This Share this content Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Read more articles Previous PostThe Surrogate Wife Ch. 1 to 3 Next PostCursed Recollections Chapter 1 illustrated is live. This Post Has 15 Comments Olsalty 25 Apr 2022 Log in to Reply Don’t normally post, but just wanted to say, i really enjoyed this story, hope to see more come 🙂 Rawls 26 Apr 2022 Log in to Reply More on the way! xpoolhalljunkie 2 Apr 2022 Log in to Reply Oh, I like this one already 🙂 Anteater 1 Apr 2022 Log in to Reply I take it that this is sort of…sequel to the CURSE OF SHADOWS? Rawls 2 Apr 2022 Log in to Reply Yes 🙂 Old-school Perv 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply Is there anything you can do about formatting? I usually read these stories on my mobile, and the text is painfully small. Rawls 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply I’m open to suggestions. But PDF has been the best way I’ve found to format so far. Bmallory1539 29 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply love the different art styles u bring in, it makes each story feel brand new! Rawls 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply Thanks for the feedback! I’m happy to hear it. 🙂 DM1485 29 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply Not a fan of the art style… but i’ll give it a chance. Rawls 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply Appreciate the feedback. I feel very lucky to be working with BSA. I hope his illustrations grow on you. DM1485 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply I mean, it’s not neo-cubism, or impressionism, which i flat out hate.. The art is competently done. My whole thing, and i understand that it’s a personal hangup, is that it just looks like the sort of stuff you’d see in a kid’s book. seeing illustrations like that, in this context, just feels kinda wrong to me. Rawls 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply It’s really helpful to have specific feedback like that. Thank you for elaborating. DM1485 30 Mar 2022 Log in to Reply Well, thank you. It’s rare that my input or feedback is considered helpful, lol. At the risk of going too far…. If i’m remembering right, similar comments were made in relation to the artwork on the Palmer Mansion illustration reboot, and the Betty illustration reboot.. They said it looked too much like a kid’s book… I never really agreed with that much.. While JD’s art is top notch, it’s not the height of realism…. if you want the ultimate in realism, you go with 3D, like Redoxa, or Lexx, who’s material i absolutely LOVE, btw. Personally, the issue i had with the new Palmer art, was that it wasn’t as defined, or detailed as some of the other artists.. the sketches of his, that you released after putting the reboot on ice, showed that he’d been listening… had the artwork continued to be refined in that fashion, going forward, i think he would have worked out just fine on that project. Never did understand what people were talking about, in relation to the new Betty art.. I found it different, but not off-putting. Certainly not kid book-esque. At the end of the day, i think those critiques (new palmer, new betty) were unfair critiques, because, whether they meant to or not, they were comparing the new art, to JD… His art style is very unique… the linework, the colors, the shading, the level of detail….All simply stunning. His eye for character design, and posing… it all came together in a complete package that perfectly conveyed the passion, emotion, and eroticism of the text it was illustrating. It was hitting notes you rarely see outside of 3D work. That’s not to say that the other drawn art on here isn’t good, because it is…some of it is REALLY good… it’s just good in different, and unique ways. I could go on to describe why other artists on here are also really good, but i won’t.. not trying to write a book, lol. I think i’ve made my point….or at least i hope i have. Anteater 1 Apr 2022 Log in to Reply I believe you have everything that needed to be said. I found myself agreeing with you on many points that were brought up. Leave a Reply Cancel replyYou must be logged in to post a comment. Don't subscribe All Replies to my comments Notify me of followup comments via e-mail. You can also subscribe without commenting.