A cursed book is next on the list for the women of the Royal Oaks Book Club.
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4.4 out of 5 dark stones (based on 61 reviews)
When are you going to post the illustrated chapter 6?
I don’t set deadlines for illustrators. The chapters come in whenever they are ready. I would guess it will be in the next couple weeks.
Love this art
Chapters 4 and 5 were great.
I’m curious if we’ll ever get to see the Olmsteads return. I’m curious to see the pregnant wife and daughter, having been seeded by the son and father respectively.
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Here’s hoping there’s a book club orgy someday.
I loved chapter 3, that was hot!
Love the art. My only wish for ch 3. was Courtney brought the book with her and left it by mistake for her sister to find at the end of the chapter. Ch 4 begins and she gets cursed too. Then cut to Courtney coming back for seconds just to find her sister fucking her son and deciding to join in.
These are stunning.
It looks like they moved to copulating faster than normal for these multi-chapter stories.
Breed-FEST! Breed-FEST! Breed-FEST! Can’t wait to see the book club regroup as they begin carrying babies.
Don’t normally post, but just wanted to say, i really enjoyed this story, hope to see more come 🙂
More on the way!
Oh, I like this one already 🙂
I take it that this is sort of…sequel to the CURSE OF SHADOWS?
Yes 🙂
Is there anything you can do about formatting? I usually read these stories on my mobile, and the text is painfully small.
I’m open to suggestions. But PDF has been the best way I’ve found to format so far.
love the different art styles u bring in, it makes each story feel brand new!
Thanks for the feedback! I’m happy to hear it. 🙂
Not a fan of the art style… but i’ll give it a chance.
Appreciate the feedback. I feel very lucky to be working with BSA. I hope his illustrations grow on you.
I mean, it’s not neo-cubism, or impressionism, which i flat out hate.. The art is competently done. My whole thing, and i understand that it’s a personal hangup, is that it just looks like the sort of stuff you’d see in a kid’s book. seeing illustrations like that, in this context, just feels kinda wrong to me.
It’s really helpful to have specific feedback like that. Thank you for elaborating.
Well, thank you. It’s rare that my input or feedback is considered helpful, lol. At the risk of going too far….
If i’m remembering right, similar comments were made in relation to the artwork on the Palmer Mansion illustration reboot, and the Betty illustration reboot.. They said it looked too much like a kid’s book… I never really agreed with that much.. While JD’s art is top notch, it’s not the height of realism…. if you want the ultimate in realism, you go with 3D, like Redoxa, or Lexx, who’s material i absolutely LOVE, btw.
Personally, the issue i had with the new Palmer art, was that it wasn’t as defined, or detailed as some of the other artists.. the sketches of his, that you released after putting the reboot on ice, showed that he’d been listening… had the artwork continued to be refined in that fashion, going forward, i think he would have worked out just fine on that project. Never did understand what people were talking about, in relation to the new Betty art.. I found it different, but not off-putting. Certainly not kid book-esque.
At the end of the day, i think those critiques (new palmer, new betty) were unfair critiques, because, whether they meant to or not, they were comparing the new art, to JD… His art style is very unique… the linework, the colors, the shading, the level of detail….All simply stunning. His eye for character design, and posing… it all came together in a complete package that perfectly conveyed the passion, emotion, and eroticism of the text it was illustrating. It was hitting notes you rarely see outside of 3D work.
That’s not to say that the other drawn art on here isn’t good, because it is…some of it is REALLY good… it’s just good in different, and unique ways. I could go on to describe why other artists on here are also really good, but i won’t.. not trying to write a book, lol. I think i’ve made my point….or at least i hope i have.
I believe you have everything that needed to be said. I found myself agreeing with you on many points that were brought up.
Wait a minute…. Is that Ava Addams in Chapter 3?
It definitely is, haha. Looks like he used a couple of her scenes as reference.
Well. Good catch! Yes, i felt like Ava was the perfect blueprint for Courtney, so i used a lot of
references from her scenes yeah lol
I tried to conceal it as much as possible changing the facial features but in some illustrations i could as well as on others!