Enki’s Puzzle Ch. 1 to 21

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Eighteen-year-old Nick Dobson messes with a Sumerian puzzle. The lascivious god Enki traps him in the same, repeating day. The only way out is to solve the enigma of the puzzle. The solution keeps pushing him to get closer to his mother and sister.

Narration by V Silvermoon: https://www.patreon.com/vsilvermoon and Reddit

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  1. cmj15301

    yippee ki-yay

    We all know the next line! πŸ˜‰

  2. cmj15301

    Ok, thrilled for the next chapter, but we gotta get still another one out asap, because 13 is not a lucky number. Please put a rush on chapter 14… πŸ˜‰

    1. Rawls

      I’m not superstitious, but you may be in luck …

      1. cmj15301

        Why’s that? The crew of Apollo 13 weren’t either….and look what happened there!

        I love listening to the new audio versions, then going back and looking at the illustrated versions.

        Funny, I kinda skip around when I read the text…just trying to get the job done….then, when I listen I catch many details I had skimmed over.

        Chapter 12 is so hot πŸ”₯. I would have loved fir Allison to have gone a little further with describing how hot it was watching… that is the hottest ever… both her descriptions of how hot her mom looked and her descriptions of her brother. I would have liked more….also more time spent on her satisfaction obtained watching….

        Just the same…I feel like chapter 12 is the apex…hard to surpass… there’s your challenge. I throw down the gauntlet…surpass this if you can.

        Desire more interaction with Allison and kate….please!

  3. cmj15301

    Is it almost time for a new Enki audio chapter? πŸ™‚

    Also, is the Serum story going to continue on audio?

    Eager fan, anxious for more!

    Mark

    1. Rawls

      Should be soon for Enki.

      Not sure about Serum. I’m waiting to hear back from the voice actor.

  4. Will

    Great. I can’t wait to hear the rest

    1. Rawls

      Two more chapters should arrive in the next two weeks πŸ™‚

  5. jYB6Pcd6

    Could you offer all these audio files in a zip file for quicker downloading?

    1. Rawls

      Sorry, no. Some people like to listen to them on the site and can’t do that with zip files.

  6. cmj15301

    Are you going to publish chapter 11 soon? I wish we could skip to chapter 12, it’s a favorite of mine

  7. GTJake

    Sorry, but I can’t stand the way Silvermoon is voicing these characters. A straight read through would be better than a forced male voice for Nick and a β€œlike totally valley girl!” Allison. It’s unfortunate as her neutral voice for narrating is actually quite nice.

  8. Ali4779

    Hi there is there any updates on more illustrated chapters releasing ?

  9. cmj15301

    Ok, I’m an idiot. Your vote has nothing to do with this story. Which is my favorite

  10. cmj15301

    Ok, I want to try out to do the male voices in the audios. I’d do it for free just for the fun of it!

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the offer, but I’m happy with Silvermoon reading all the parts. Maybe sometime in the future we’ll have an audio production with multiple actors, but that’s on the horizon.

    2. cmj15301

      Never heard of Silvermoon….well, until now. But I would agree that they do a pretty good job.

  11. cmj15301

    Holy guacamole! Please pass on my compliments to the narrator of this story. She’s doing a fabulous job with a hot fantasy!! I wonder if it would be better to have an actual guy read the guy part? Not necessarily. I wish these came out sooner! I’m a fan of the content. Probably means I’m an incurable perv…but I am a iterate one who gets off on a semi credible fantasy!

    1. cmj15301

      So when is the third audio going to be released?

      1. cmj15301

        Love this audio series. Wish it would release faster. Any idea if I can merge pieces of a story into one long audio?

        1. Rawls

          Glad you’re enjoying this series. I don’t know how to merge the files.

    2. cmj15301

      Looking forward to next release. How about doing a two chapter release?!?

      1. Rawls

        It’s takes lots of money, effort, and time to make one of these chapters. The most we can do is one a month.

  12. cmj15301

    When can we expect more chapters? I’ve been eagerly watching and waiting

    1. Rawls

      Usually we’ll have one chapter a month, but this month we get two. The second chapter should release later this week. Glad to hear you’re enjoying it πŸ™‚

    2. cmj15301

      You don’t have to merge them. Just download a player ap and create a Playlist. Add each chapter in order. Next I’d like to figure out how to edit out the disclaimer at the beginning of each chapter. I think one ar the very beginning should suffice.

  13. cmj15301

    Fantastic artwork. This is the best story on the site.