A mother and son are snowed in for Christmas. A RawlyRawls spin on a well-worn concept 😉
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Honestly best series ever, i wish they had stayed in the cabin, the entire atmosphere just felt sexier and more intimate. That being said i would absolutely wish this was a animated movie, it would sell like crazy, keep up the good work, pls give us more of this artwork for mom son stories, it fits insanely well
The illustrated version is nearly 20 chapters behind the text only version of Marooned Christmas. Please focus on getting the art work done for Marooned Christmas and the remaining chapters for Plesitocene Ring. It sells like it will be YEARS before we can see all of the illustrated chapters.
I can write much faster than illustrators can illustrate. That’s why I work on so many stories.
SUPER hot as is ALL of your work RR : ) thank you… when will the next set of chapters be ready ?
Do you have any audio books coming out soon ? those are my absolute favorites.. Enkis puzzle was amazing ! KUDOS , THANK you and Happy New Year ! : ) xox Morgan
Not sure when the next chapter will be ready. I added a whole bunch of chapters for Christmas, now I need to catch up on some other stories. Hopefully soon.
This is my all time favorite! I hope you’ll keep illustrating chapters, in part because of the mother’s resemblance to one of my favorite actresses!!
Needs one more chapter. That cliff hanger doesn’t close the door.
Daaaaaang. Wish granted. We don’t need to wait until our next birthdays like “Dark Stone.”
Very hot chapter….maybe one of the hottest…illustrations capture the excitement very well. Love the story. Love the illustrations.
Chapters 15 – 29 ?
Those chapters haven’t been illustrated yet, but you can read the text for them here: https://rawlyrawls.com/marooned-christmas/
Waiting for next text chapter with bated breath!
This is good stuff!! But is it just me or the mom looks like Michelle Monaghan
I can see what you mean, but the resemblance is just coincidence 🙂
Just felt bad that the chapter 2 had a different illustrations but good to see that the character looks good again!! But hey , no complaints from me!! The slow build up was top notch , how many more chapters are you planning if i might ask!!
Did you see that BSA reworked Chapter 2 to match the rest of the story? It’s the updated version above.
In the face she does a bit…also some like Valerie Bertinelli (younger years). But this mom is sexier and way more busty…as i believe all fantasy moms need to be. Not ridiculously busty…but big boobs required for my taste in this fantasy genre.
Chapter 14 could have used more explicit scenes, otherwise what’s the point of Illustrating it?
It’s a story based on characters. That means that it isn’t wall to wall sex. Chapters like 14 develop the story.
OMG. BSA continues to absolute slam these illustrations out of the park. He makes Mommies look so soft and warm. the dream MILFs!!!
This is one of my favorite series. Excellent story and great illustrations!
Hope the next chapter is out soon.
The rhythm is falling behind with this one. The story is great, but the waiting between one chapter and the next (not to mention the illustrations) is making me lose interest…
that last image…. mmmmm, just mmmmm
Oh and the BJ fake…tease….left me salivating… lol 😆
This is by far my favorite erotic story so far. I really do enjoy this one and find myself always craving more! The more I read the more I want!
Thank you for sharing your work. Love your stories.
For me, the slow build went from realistic to unrealistic.
I’ve read true stories about taboo relationships. There isn’t *this* much pretension and hesitancy with such relationships. I love the art, though.
I appreciate the feedback. I’m still happy with how things are progressing. I like where the characters are. Not every story is for everyone 🙂
I have to say, I am loving this story!!!! it’s sooooooo good 🙂
Any news on when next illustrated chapter will be out?
Probably about a month. BSA is working on Enchanted Scepter right now.
Best current story !
My favorite story so farl How long until next illustrated chapter?
Should release by June 12.
This story will have sex scenes after GTA 6 comes out.
The story had me hooked up enough but those illustrations are fire. It’s a proper slow-burn, I hope we’ll see more soon.
Bsa’s art compliments this excellent writing so well! Well done
Bro when are we gonna get the black mom and son fucking 😭
You might want to check out the stories 3838 Walnut Street and Cursed Recollections. You will find what you seek 🙂
This story in particular is very good. Please direct some more of your effort to this story. Can’t wait to see <3
This story in particular is very good. Please direct some more of your effort to this story.
Cant wait for the text for chapter 9 and 10. I know theyre going to be great.
Maybe we get ch.9 today? 😄😄🤞
Glad you’re enjoying it. Chapter 9 is with the proofreaders, so I’ll publish the text in a few days. But we’re several weeks away from the next illustrated chapter. The good news is that BSA moves pretty quickly. 🙂
The slow tension you are building up is so, so weighty.
I do feel the more realistic setting and believable character boundaries/motivation is making this the best story you have written imo.
Incredible art and visual style, too (btw I loved the other design for the mother, too. Think the more “normal” look to her added to the realism of the story, but I know everyone likes to see pretty characters so it is what it is).
Can’t wait to finally reach the moment where the mother gives in. This story on its own makes the subscription worth it; thanks!
Agreed!
I appreciate the feedback. That’s definitely what I’m going for with this story. Glad you’re enjoying BSA’s illustrations!
Love this story. Can’t wait for mom to get her hands on him…
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rawls, i think this is one of the best stories. hope mom helps son soon with a bj or handy. lol
Terrific !
BSArt is great at what he does. Thanks for the update!
I love this art style.
I compared the mom’s from chapter 2 with the update, and definitely prefer the update. Maybe take a look again at her in chapter 3 also…
I appreciate the kind feedback!
I agree with BKWRM, Great idea for mom to want to reward her son. Now that she knows her son saved her life from the Bear, Maybe oral is approved. Maybe she is shocked by the monsterous cock he has. Maybe we hear of how mom is streached and resized for her son. And how they start there new life back home with the new secrets they have. This story is why I renew my membership. thank you.
This take on the ” snowed in mom and son” is a slow developing story of a growing intimacy and desire between Logan and his mother that has an air of reality, which helps to intensify the readers interest. The lack of a supernatural element in the plotline is not missed and is a refreshing change. The artwork greatly contributes to the mood of isolation and the boredom leading to cabin fever. I believe that when Logan’s mom sees his morning erection on their first morning that every action she does from that moment is to convince her self to give into her desire for her son. Can’ wait for more chapters.
Definitely the work I want continued the most.
This one should continue to be updated regularly.
Here’s a humble idea: Logan sees a star and wishes that his mom’s breasts double in size, sensitivity and perkiness. Day by day, she grows. She becomes more and more horny and dependent on him for release, reversing their power dynamic.
This story has been wonderful so far; it could be even better if the Mother grows beyond Logan’s initial fantasy.
I don’t take suggestions for stories. But thank you for kind words. I’m glad you’re enjoying it.
No problem, keep up the good work!
She is definitely a beautiful woman.
This is one of your best, my favorites anyway! Keep pushing the updates please.
Chapter six was great, can’t wait for the seventh chapter. Marooned keeps having me at expense.
Sooooo, then what happened???? Are they attacked and taken by a bigfoot??? They’re mugged by a grizzly??? When is chapter 6 and 7 coming???
I write the short chapter stories after the previous chapter is illustrated. BSA is working on two stories, this one and Enchanted Scepter. We alternate between them. Since Enchanted Scepter was just illustrated, I’ll be writing the next chapter of Marooned Christmas soon.
Reading through the comments, I agree with the first few. Love the story, love the artwork, wish for more.
The illustrated mom reminds me of Valerie Bertenelli as a young mom. So hot!
I love the idea of getting mom to suck her own tits…hope son will take one and mom take the other!!
Can’t wait for more updates.
Love this story wish it was updated more ! Than it is I’m just itching I do love the slow burn but I wish things were a lil more steamy but I’m sure we will get there also the bsa art is amazing
Thanks for the feedback! BSA is working on two stories with alternating chapters. But the good news is that he works quickly.
Alison Becker? Don’t tell me you’re a liverpool fan
Sorry, no. That was a random name 🙂
Rawly, I enjoy these stories an artwork. wish there was more like the guide, Enki`s Puzzle, for Robby, haunted mansion. The talk. I like the subject matter as well as the Excellent artwork. I was hoping for a little more here. I have seen most all on another free web site. all members would like more of this and that, but I enjoy your site. please send a thank you out to all your artist, they are appreciated. I will be waiting for the next chapter of Marooned.
This has got to be my favorite story so far , i am in love with the artwork just like cursed recollections, i love the slow burn, i do wish the mom was just a tad but slutty but not in any way that changes her as the character she is, but more in the sense that she shows of her curves more when she’s drunkenly moving around, great job tho
God I LOVE BSA’s illustrations so much. Defs my fav illustrator
The slow burn drives me nuts (in a good way). Waiting for the dam to burst… so to speak 😀
What a wonderful intimate little story. Beautiful imagery and excellent story telling. I was really sucked into this world. I swear I could almost hear the wind outside. I had goosebumps from the cold, and I could almost smell the burning logs on the fire. But what I love the most is the interaction between this wonderful couple.
I much prefer the slow build up of sexual tension in these stories. It makes the eventual conquests so much more satisfying.
Why did the work start to get delayed?
It’s not delayed. See this post here for an explanation: https://rawlyrawls.com/an-update-on-marooned-christmas/
Enjoyed the new Marooned Christmas illustrated chapter (3). BSA does, as always, an excellent job of making sure Logan’s mother’s breasts live up to the hype. I also think they do a really good job ob conveying the ‘oppressive but cozy’ vibe of being snowed in at the cabin really well too. Always a treat.
The mom’s face is better than in the second chapter.
So I’ll say this. He needs to stop with the fat folds. To me I don’t like that and don’t find that hot. Like scepter that’s my problem with his art. It takes me out of it. He needs to fix that. I’m not really sure what happened from the bookclub story abd ch. 1 of this story but the art has kinda gone down. Not saying it’s all bad. At times it looks good. But he needs to make them look trimmer and fit and less fat and flabby. Hopefully he can fix that because I feel like I’m gonna drop off on waiting for his illustrations. Hopefully didn’t sound too mean just giving my opinion. Also make her look a little bit more younger again. Anyways take care.
If there is a next chapter, hope we don’t have to wait for it another 4 month. It looks promising.
https://rawlyrawls.com/an-update-on-marooned-christmas/
Great series. Looking forward to the next chapter!
The (illustrated) face of the mom changed from chapter 1. I liked that first chapter’s mom better, she seemed younger and prettier.
Narrative and plot is still great Rawls, can’t wait for the next installments!
Yes, BSA wanted to try a different approach with the mom in Chapter 2. Thank you for your feedback!
I agree 100 percent I thought she looked way better in the other story. she looks to old in the next chapter. I like them looking younger It works better when they look younger.
I appreciate all the feedback. For the next chapter, we’re going back to the original look for the mom.
That was great I agree with everyone want more. We’ll done
Nice to see a Rawly take on this concept! Things pushed through a bit quicker than many Rawly tales, but it seemed like that was to move things along quickly. Enjoyable as a one-shot, or something to return to on a future Christmas 🙂
Forgot about the tease at the end for another chapter. Hoping it releases today. This is my fav RR short story ever. Perfect amount of reluctance and hesitation and mild disgust from the mother.
Well-worn concept, great spin! Well written and beautiful illustrations. Please give us more!
I agree with all other comments here -please continue with more chapters asap!!
Are there going to be additional chapters in this story, illustrated or not? Speaking for myself, would love this to continue
Please let the next chapter come out tomorrow…
And wait, are we actually going to have to wait a year?! 😭
Damn! That image of mom baring her breasts. Defs confirms my love for BSA’s illustrations