A mother and son are snowed in for Christmas. A RawlyRawls spin on a well-worn concept 😉
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4.8 out of 5 dark stones (based on 81 reviews)
Why did the work start to get delayed?
It’s not delayed. See this post here for an explanation: https://rawlyrawls.com/an-update-on-marooned-christmas/
Enjoyed the new Marooned Christmas illustrated chapter (3). BSA does, as always, an excellent job of making sure Logan’s mother’s breasts live up to the hype. I also think they do a really good job ob conveying the ‘oppressive but cozy’ vibe of being snowed in at the cabin really well too. Always a treat.
The mom’s face is better than in the second chapter.
So I’ll say this. He needs to stop with the fat folds. To me I don’t like that and don’t find that hot. Like scepter that’s my problem with his art. It takes me out of it. He needs to fix that. I’m not really sure what happened from the bookclub story abd ch. 1 of this story but the art has kinda gone down. Not saying it’s all bad. At times it looks good. But he needs to make them look trimmer and fit and less fat and flabby. Hopefully he can fix that because I feel like I’m gonna drop off on waiting for his illustrations. Hopefully didn’t sound too mean just giving my opinion. Also make her look a little bit more younger again. Anyways take care.
If there is a next chapter, hope we don’t have to wait for it another 4 month. It looks promising.
https://rawlyrawls.com/an-update-on-marooned-christmas/
Great series. Looking forward to the next chapter!
The (illustrated) face of the mom changed from chapter 1. I liked that first chapter’s mom better, she seemed younger and prettier.
Narrative and plot is still great Rawls, can’t wait for the next installments!
Yes, BSA wanted to try a different approach with the mom in Chapter 2. Thank you for your feedback!
I agree 100 percent I thought she looked way better in the other story. she looks to old in the next chapter. I like them looking younger It works better when they look younger.
I appreciate all the feedback. For the next chapter, we’re going back to the original look for the mom.
That was great I agree with everyone want more. We’ll done
Nice to see a Rawly take on this concept! Things pushed through a bit quicker than many Rawly tales, but it seemed like that was to move things along quickly. Enjoyable as a one-shot, or something to return to on a future Christmas 🙂
Forgot about the tease at the end for another chapter. Hoping it releases today. This is my fav RR short story ever. Perfect amount of reluctance and hesitation and mild disgust from the mother.
Well-worn concept, great spin! Well written and beautiful illustrations. Please give us more!
I agree with all other comments here -please continue with more chapters asap!!
Are there going to be additional chapters in this story, illustrated or not? Speaking for myself, would love this to continue
Please let the next chapter come out tomorrow…
And wait, are we actually going to have to wait a year?! ðŸ˜
Damn! That image of mom baring her breasts. Defs confirms my love for BSA’s illustrations