Mothership Wilderness Ch. 1 to 15

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In the future, brave souls will flee to the stars to escape religious persecution. An eighteen-year-old man is accidentally dosed with an experimental fertility drug at the beginning of his long trip through space. The corruption spreads aboard his colony ship.

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  1. Anteater

    Chapter 15 was great. I love how Penny accepted Jake fucking another female instead of saying he was cheating on her.

  2. Jannic

    Hi – I love the bonus “then vs. now” pics for various characters. Any chance of more entries as our cast gets more and more corrupted?

    1. Rawls

      Thanks! We might do that again at some point. Redoxa has some health issues right now, so probably nothing extra for a while. But it’s on the radar.

  3. JTass

    FYI – I noticed a typo in chapter 15, page 13:
    β€œStop it.” Jacob stood and walked over to them. This was exactly the sort of thing his mom warned him about.
    He needed to *diffuse* the situation quickly.

    Diffuse should be Defuse.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for pointing out the typo. Once they make their way into an illustrated version, typos become part of the final product. Which is fine. A typo here and there isn’t so bad πŸ™‚

      1. Anteater

        I do find it an annoyance though.

  4. Haight

    Love Redoxa’s art; all the women look delicious, Mary especially.

  5. Anteater

    I love chapter 14; it looks like Maureen is being affected now.

  6. Blackwolf

    I noticed you reference the book First Love by Ivan Turgenev in a couple of your works. Do you use the book to creates ideas from?

    1. Rawls

      It’s referenced because it had an influence on Eloise Palmer when it was published. The story has a young man fall madly in love with an older woman, and that caught Eloise’s interest.

  7. Anteater

    Chapter 13 was great. I like Penny and I hope Heather warms up to her.

  8. RedSarah

    I like the 3D art style and I think the breasts growing as round as way too big boob jobs is putting me off. I think my imagination had the women starting smaller and getting to a larger but natural size. Good job getting the details. I know that is very appreciated.

  9. Blackwolf

    This isn’t a critique (Love the story and illustrations btw) but why is Jacobs hair described as brown wild and free flowing while in the illustrations it is a short buzz cut?

    1. Rawls

      Redoxa thought his hair would look better shorter than described in the original text. I agreed. I tried to find all mentions of his old hair and change them, but I guess I missed some.

  10. Anteater

    Chapter 12 was no surprise but imagine what Maureen is gonna find when she opens the door. It is possible that they will by dressed when it happens.

  11. Werewolf135

    Hi. Thanks for the update. By the way the new chapter’s illustriations are seem blurry to me.

    1. mgiva

      The images are blurry for me as well. I dont think this is the first chapter either, the Aztec Dynasty one and the last Stone Hertz one both seemed blurry too. Would really appreciate a fix to this

    2. Redoxa

      Thanks for the heads up. You are right. We will take care of that.

    3. Rawls

      It’s not your imagination. My compression plugin for the website went rogue. I’m working on a fix now. Thank you for bringing this to my attention!

      1. Rawls

        It’s fixed. Clear your cache before you download again. Thanks again!

  12. FreshlySnipes

    Not a fan of the computer generated illustrations. Much prefer pen to paper alternative.

  13. Lobria

    Hey Rawls and Redoxa. I have to say this is a big improvement and much more enjoyable then the last ones. You did the close up face shots and it was hot as hell. Thank you for that you seem to be doing more of that. Keep it up that is much more enjoyable. Great work guys. See Ya.

  14. Chinran

    The Then and Now thing is pretty cool. Will it be updated at some point or when everything is illustrated to reflect all the characters?

    1. Rawls

      I would guess that Redoxa might update it at some point. It’s a freeby that he added in, so I’m not sure.

  15. Anteater

    Wow, chapter 11 was better. Heather looks like she is having a ball, pun intended. I wonder if the new arrivals are going to join in.

  16. Anteater

    I love chapter 10. It looks like not only is Heather finally his, but he has all new prospects. Especially 1 that is HIS age!

  17. Lobria

    Love this so far but I do have a complaint. Why are most of the shots from behind. I feel that the shots showing there faces is hot as fuck but this last chapter and the one before we don’t see there faces when Jacob is giving it to them. I wonder why is that. I find that kinda frustrating cause I always felt those were the money shots. Hope we those shots again in the future cause that to me is a bit disappointing.

    1. Anteater

      I love how it is focused on Humility and her reactions.

      1. Lobria

        Yes that was nice but I still want more. I want to see a close up of Mary’s face when she is giving a blowjob and the other woman that Jacob is fucking. I want more shots of there faces. The behind shots are fine but it’s like come on what are you doing show me the money shot with there faces. A better mix of close up and far away would be nice. So many times in the other chapters where he could’ve done that and didn’t and that sucks to me. More close up of the face. Redoxa miss it up more and more close up shots please.

  18. Anteater

    Chapter 9 looks to be going well.

  19. Blackwolf

    Will you ever do a sequel to this series? Like when the mothership arrives to the colony?

  20. tuff1160

    really great job on this recent chapter. i like this black milf, loved how she wanted that massive “thing” from the get go. also she is really pretty.

  21. puber002

    your renders are amazing!! do you use dazz? do you take comissions?

    1. Rawls

      You’ll want to contact Redoxa directly for those questions. Just follow the link on this page.

  22. rayburger

    Can we see a before & after shot of the mother growing? It’s hard to tell from the photos if she’s getting bigger.

    1. Rawls

      Probably not. Redoxa is busy, and I don’t think we’ll do that sort of extra for the characters.

  23. Anteater

    I love Mary, she is my favorite. I love to watch her enjoy herself.

  24. fcbfan0000

    Just read Mothership-Wilderness 6 and this was the best so far of the series. Redoxa really captured the essence of the script, down to the details of Mary’s increased breasts size. A work of art!

    1. Rawls

      I agree πŸ’―. Thanks for the feedback. Redoxa also included a bunch of extra illustrations. Great stuff!

  25. T B

    I do prefer art illustrations over cg ones myself such astendermindd, jdseal and owusyr, but understand the need for variety. Keep it up πŸ™‚

  26. Anteater

    Chapter 4 is amazing; the images of Mary and her new lover look amazing. The looks on her face when he finally takes her is priceless. It all fits extremely well.

    1. Rawls

      Agreed. Redoxa really nailed this chapter. He was really looking forward to some sex, and he finally got it πŸ™‚

      1. ferrus.manus

        Yeah, strongly recommend adding more 3d artists to your illustrators. The tech is good enough to hold it’s own against 2d artists.

        1. fcbfan0000

          Mothership Wilderness 7….another homerun by Rawly and Redoxa. Man, you guys kick ass!. Great work and hope you will work together on more projects in the future. Redoxa is my favorite illustrator-artist.

  27. Dannny

    This story was already very good, the illustrations take it up a few notches. Great detail and imagery to the artists. Awesome collaboration here. Thank you all for the effort.

  28. xuraharax

    This series is the best of all, will it end in chapter 3 or will it continue with more chapters?

    1. Rawls

      I just wrote chapter 31 available in the text-only catalogue. The plan is to illustrate the whole novel. πŸ™‚

  29. MBolton

    Are you planning on doing the whole story illustrated ?

  30. Anteater

    I love chapter 2. The final picture of Mary Wynthrope shows her sexiness.

  31. Holyx

    Rawly is it possible for Jdseal to complete the original Betty? There only two chapter left and it doesn’t feel right to leave something so close to being done without actually finishing it. It wouldn’t take him much time since the 2 chapters are pretty short anyways .

    1. Rawls

      Sorry, this one is out of my control. JDseal really wants to work on his own stories. He will not be finishing Betty.

  32. Anteater

    …the metal floor. He pushed his damp, brown hair out of his eyes and looked up at the
    screen. It didn’t…

    His hair is no where near long enough for his bangs to be in his eyes.

    1. Rawls

      Oops, we made a few character changes, his hair length was one of those. I tried to update the chapter, but this slipped through.

  33. Simon S.

    One of my top stories now has fantastic art!!!

  34. Holyx

    I hope that we can get 2 illustration chapters on JOMW per month.

    1. Rawls

      That would be great, but it’ll be once a month.

  35. Kilrathie56

    Love the illustrations, can’t wait to see more.

  36. Holyx

    I love the this 3d illustration. It fitness with the overall sy fy theme extremely well.

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