Palmer Mansion Ch. 1.1

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The Andersons move into an old Victorian mansion with a plan to restore it to its former glory. One by one, the family falls to the power of the mansion as nightmares that lurk behind every corner seek to erode the family’s innocence.

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  1. richard

    The Haunting of Palmer Mansion is assuredly one of your best. I was hoping you would have changed this one up some or will change it up to were its a complete different story. Either way was good so far.

  2. Osiris908

    Uggh so short. Must be half of the original illustrated version and I gotta say once again, as I said with Enki…the mother and daughter look the same (face). Same eye color, same mole placement and looks like same earrings etc. Great artist and illustrations and I’m not trying to criticize but please try to make the mother look like, ya know, a mother.

  3. Kenneth Winchester

    Hi Rawls,

    Long time reader, first time commenter. I love the fact that this story is getting rebooted. I also love TenderMinD’s art.

    The only issue I have with the chapter is that the faces of Eloise and the mother character need to look their age. I had the same issue with Enki’s puzzle. I found it a bit difficult to differentiate between the mother and the sister.

    Especially since in later chapters, even the “younger” women are going to “develop” bigger breasts. There would be no difference between the MILF characters and the other characters.

    The reason why we are connoisseurs of your stories, is because of the MILF fetish. Would love it if TenderMinD could make the corrections in the coming chapters.

    Regards.

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the feedback and support! This is something we are aware of. It has more to do with TenderMindd’s style than anything else. His approach will continue to evolve.

  4. Tony Strokes

    Excellent! I’ve been waiting for this reboot, not that I didn’t like the old one. Character designs look amazing.

  5. Chaeron

    One chapter in and already I know this is going to be awesome!

  6. 7Myxzptlk

    TenderMindD art is the perfect choice for this reboot.

  7. Lobria

    Very well done. That front face of Eloise awesome. I love jds faces but that one made more sense. Also from the person who said they don’t loom like there age. True and you can make them look there age. I wouldn’t mind someone try it. Though I think Redoxa did good with that in mothership. Something in the water I think was more of an issue. But wouldn’t mind someone else taking a Crack at it. I like this a lot. Its easier to read and the art is stellar. Keep it up you two.

  8. mmhaven

    From an illustration perspective: A middle-aged woman could be drawn as a middle-aged woman instead of the low-twenties that can almost be 1:1 exchanged with her daughter. That was the main draw-back of Enki’s Puzzle as well.

  9. crazydorian

    Great job, TenderminDD! Julie and Eloise in particular are looking fantastic 🙂

  10. ScrantonBranch

    Thank you for this. Just making it available for iPhone users again will bring more toward your cause .

  11. skeleton131

    Aye noice, please do the whole series. JDseal never finished it (stopped at Chapter 15)

    1. Rawls

      That is the plan. Tendermindd is very reliable. He finished Enki after all. 🙂

  12. DM1485

    Ok, this artist rocks. I can totally get behind this. Hopefully, this one sticks around for the whole thing. I’m starting to think this story is as cursed as the damned mansion.

    1. Foxblack

      🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 This time it has to be a success. The artwork is truly wonderful.

      1. DM1485

        I certainly hope so…about the success, i mean. The artwork was wonderful the first time around, and we all know how that ended.

  13. Thickdick

    Damn, can’t wait for the Brittney scenes later on… Tendermindd really knows how to draw an alluring sister 😉

  14. Thomas_windsor

    Okay nice! I was like “what story is this?” But its the OG. Really good story! So happy its getting such a great artist working on it!!! Cant wait for more