Suggestion post for a new story 8/9/24 POST CLOSED

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POST CLOSED The Missus Ring only has a few chapters left. After that, Lexx and I will need a new project to collaborate on. He wants to work in a fantasy setting, so please make pitches in the high fantasy Rawly universe: also known as Mothers & Monsters.

What will be the premise of our new story? That’s going to be up to you. In thirty words or less, pitch your idea for a new running story in the comments below. We’ll pick out our favorite suggestions and hold a poll to select the winner in a few days.

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  1. ElPescador

    Teen modifies moms hypnosis cd so she’ll compete with women at work to keeps her sales job, accidently allowing them to program her unaware they mostly talk about him…

    *The Above fits 30 characters.*

    The general idea is the mother is single, made to feel unattractive by the hot mean girls at work who tease her about her age, destroying her confidence. Her work suffers and she takes it out on her son who modifies her self help CD in order to get better treatment in retaliation, which works so well he modifies it again to empower her to compete with these girls, not knowing most of what they compete about is the sexual things they’ll do to her son. Barriers fall and unguided chaos ensues

  2. DicchoHippo

    Isekai: Evil Sorcerer kidknaps boy’s sister. Boy and mother travel to other world to save her. Boy gains game-like powers; must keep his mother as his sex-slave to protect her.

  3. Justadude7758

    The ancient Magi once met to preserve the essence of all Fae in a book etched with a crimson stone. A young man discovers the book and gains the allure and virility of the Fae, and causing the Fae to manifest in physical changes in those around him.

  4. Kabooz_Kakterius

    The mayor’s son and daughter get tricked by a local warlock trying to perfect their mcguffin and the mother of the two and her best friend the mother of daughters girlfriend feel something’s afoot.

  5. HeliasAlun2488

    A son is sucked into novel & becomes main character.
    Mission save the Queen daughter while traveling (Mottled Forest) unknowingly to son Queen & daughter change into his mother & sister

  6. CeeBee42

    Wicked Plagues. In ancient times, a kingdom is under siege by a dark goddess who punishes them for not meeting her demands with plagues of monsters and body modifications of other sorts, until the final plague infects the moms and sons with such lust that they must mate, including the queen and prince.

  7. Signinforwebsite

    A young man starts working odd jobs for a witch who lives on the edge of the village. She pays him in more than money; stones. Dark ones. Hijinks ensue.

  8. retro

    Roman Empire. A young man is betrayed and sent to the legions. He escapes and is saved by a sorcerer. Now he must return to Rome and save his family.

  9. Rawls

    Just a reminder to everyone. There is a 30 word limit. We need that for the poll later. So, if your idea is well over 30 words, we won’t be able to consider it.

  10. meinaru

    A mysterious woman moves into the neighborhood. She quickly gets dark reputation as a witch and a dabbler in dark arts. The neighborhood becomes, so to speak, intimidated.

    Only one person seems not to be afraid of her. She’s sexy, single, middle-aged woman. The only thing her neighbors – and her son – know about her is that she’s a writer. What they don’t know is that she’s writing steamy erotica. But she also has another secret. She’s in reality a sorceress, coming from the same magical world as the witch. Magic, of course, is not the only thing that makes this other world different from ours. So are mores. The relationships that are shunned upon in our world, such as relationships between (grown) family members, are honored there. Especially those between mothers and sons.

    Our sorceress/writer wanted to keep her son away from this, even though she lusted after him. However, the witch quickly learned of the true nature of her neighbor and set the sights on her son. One evening our writer/sorceress goes to confront the witch, consoling her son to not to worry about her. But hours pass, and she’s not back… Until the young man gets a message with a picture showing his beautiful mother naked and bound in the witches house. She’s been defeated, and our witch tells him the truth and tells him to come over to her place and submit to her. But maybe, just maybe, he’ll prove resourceful enough to defeat the witch and rescue his mother?

  11. RaptorEye

    A succubus falls in love with a young man and uses his family/village to reproduce with him as she cannot do it with him naturally. The young man is reluctant but wants to save his family/village.

  12. Will

    I read a lot of comics and there are many good ones out there. You are the most creative both in quality and and quantity.Which is why I subscribe. But you creative exuberance is somewhat frustrating.
    You have so many good unfinished stories . My vote is to tie some of these up before starting a new one.
    I can count without looking at least six unfinished stories. Having said that I would like to see more about Enki.
    Okay I counted, eleven stories that need completion of which I am interested in seven

    1. Rawls

      Stories that aren’t actively continuing, but are unfinished, are: Princess Na’Seen, A New Aztec Dynasty, Chronicles of Abrollin, Wish Granted, Under Fire, and A Spell Cast Poorly. None of those stories would work for Lexx. I would like to add more artists to continue the illustrations for these stories, but my membership is down since the new pirate site went live and started stealing my stuff again. So, my budget is constrained.

      I don’t plan to return to Enki. That story tied things up well.

      I will have an announcement soon about my plans to spend more time on the short stories, which would include finishing some of the unfinished stories I listed above in text even if they’re not illustrated.

      1. DM1485

        People who pirate from small operations like yours, are the scum of the earth..

        Do i look at these sites? yes i do.. The difference between me, and a lot of the people who visit these sites, is i actually go and support the creators i really like. I learned about your site from one of these pirate sites….and i liked what you were doing so much, that i subscribed, so i could throw some actual support your way….to hopefully help you keep doing what you’re doing. Hell, I even went and subscribed to JD, when he broke away from the site, because i like the art.

        I wish more people had the same kind of consideration i do. You’re a pretty good writer, and your artists are (for the most part) really good, and you guys all deserve support, and financial compensation for your talents and creativity. The fact that people just take the shit for free, and give nothing back, really boils my piss..

  13. ChromeDragon

    A falling star brings an ancient tentacled horror that corrupts the relationships of the nearby kingdom.
    After it reworks the women it sets them to seduce their sons or nephews.

  14. soxfanforever

    Woman buys Sumerian Fertility Goddess statue as decoration for sorority house party. She calls her brother for help moving it. Statue locks sorority, demands & accelerates pregnancies in tribute.

  15. Lobria

    Adventurer mother and family come across temple and find the Enkinomican. Nice Son who then becomes more corrupt, reads it and unleashes Enkies world in ours. Makes a deal to fix it.

  16. Lobria

    After battle with dragon new king son of the queen comes across the dragons hoard which is a dark stone. sons attitude changes later and mother and sister as well.

  17. JTass

    The night before his 18th birthday, the MC finds out he is descended from the few remaining Aesir (Norse gods) who survived Ragnarok. It turns out his mother is Thrudr, daughter of Thor. Since long-lived races like the Aesir are notorious for low fertility, he must do his part to keep the bloodline alive and do his best to impregnate any female of the blood that he encounters, including his mother, sister, and cousins.

    1. JTass

      I just finished reading though the other suggestions… I guess this is in the same vein as biwikird’s Percy Jackson-ish idea, except my suggestion is based in Norse mythology.

  18. HeliasAlun2488

    A young man is sucked into a novel where he becomes the lead character A Mage Knight and has to change the Fates of both the Queen Mother who just lost her husband through magically nefarious means as well as her princess daughter while on the road traveling the kingdom ( Mottled Forest) where they are beset upon the likes of Gods & monster alike. As the story progress the Queen Mother & Daughter change into the main characters own Mother & Sister they get sucked into the novel as well but they don’t realize it till the end

  19. Biwikird

    Okay sorry last idea and this one actually is high fantasy. The king’s brother (think like a Scar type) is his advisor but is demoted (or just straight up banished) for being too shady. He makes a deal with a demon lady that gives him special negotiation abilities and uses them to navigate the king’s court and family, but he has to succeed in being king within a year. And if he isn’t he dies or he has no soul or something idk.

  20. HeliasAlun2488

    A young man on a vacation with his mother & Aunt finds opens an ancient book of a long forgotten Love Goddess that is trapped in a statue & frees her. She Tells him that her Son the God Enki is the one who trapped her in that statue because of her refusal and if he helps her defeat her son as well as grow her followers (religion) while also defeat these monsters who feed on love/ lust on the island & beyond she will make him a God her Husband & bare his children as well as any women he choose to lay with

  21. Biwikird

    Not necessarily a story pitch or a high fantasy setting, but I’d love to see a take on something like Percy Jackson where it’s a modern day setting but having Greek mythology cross over into it or just fantasy in general. Greek or Roman mythology would just be cool cause you could see the character interact with specific gods and stuff.

    1. Biwikird

      Maybe Aphrodite has historically only had girls, but she births a son for the first time. He could interact with his sisters and Aphrodite herself. That or unrelated idea, this might be kinda corny, but doing something with the idea of Cupid and Cupid’s bow

  22. HeliasAlun2488

    Oedipus Rex & The True Untold story of what really happened during & after with Oedipus his mother & the decision of the Goddesses of Marriage & Love Hera & Aphrodite to spare Oedipus and his family only if he can achieve 7 great labor “Monster” & if done he will Bed both Goddesses who will bare his children in the end

  23. jomax45

    While exploring a ancient ruin in the desert. A young man finds a strange box. when he touches it he hears a female voice saying, release me and become my prophet. He finds a hidden release and in a flash of light and energy he sees a black shadow with a red aura of a woman which turns into a vapor entering his body. He passes out waking hours later after dreaming of being in a grand throne room filled with men and women indulging in a huge orgy. Sitting on the throne is a beautiful woman. She introduces herself as the spirit trapped in the box. She is the goddess of lust from an ancient civilization. She tells him she needs to use him to get her powers back to return to her time. She does this by possessing him and having sex with females of the same blood line using her powers of lust. As reward he is given possession of these women. Or something along that line.

  24. comicrelief

    Setup: A woman and her daughter have to stay at her mother-in-law’s in a new village because her husband is off on a crusade. The daughter becomes infatuated with the apprentice to the local wizard. Mother and grandmother to not approve. Both become enthralled by the young man’s rather large endowment.
    Plot: The mother find a birthmark that identies the man as her baby son she thought was killed by an ogre along with her first husband twenty years earlier.

  25. NegativeEnergy

    Small village. Men of fighting age conscripted to fight in war. Teen male protagonist left behind – “man of the house” and needs to take care of his and aunt’s families. After months MC overhears his mom and aunt commiserating the loss of their husbands and decides to ask the village witch for help. The witch, being a mischievous one, gives the young man a very unique potion that will set off a chain of events leading to lots of women turning up pregnant, but happily so.

  26. elekhi

    A witch and her son/sons are being chased out of town into the Mottled Forest. Exiled, she teaches him/them about the forest, its powers and…other things

  27. 7Myxzptlk

    Once hidden from the empire and gods, MC and allies journey to defeat their pursuers. Making allies and foes alike, the journey changes them– not only growing stronger, but closer.

  28. 7Myxzptlk

    Demi-god MC pitch:
    > An exiled young man learns the mystical truth of his parentage, sworn to protect his goddess mother from his evil king father. Meanwhile, the gods also conspire against them.

  29. Evil Modder

    In a ritual to join a tribe of orcs, a young man must go into the forest and defeat an elf, the elf curses the young man who returns “changed”.

  30. 7Myxzptlk

    How does this sound?
    > A witch corrupts a remote Appalachian town, ensnaring families with dark tantric magics. One resident, captivated by her, witnesses her sinister influence on the town and his own family.

  31. roadpizza

    Average adventurer in his mid twenties discovers he is the descendant of an incubus. Shenanigans ensue with his mother, sisters, crush, the hero, the queen, and the demon lord.

  32. ReadRawls69

    A bored & naughty interstellar traveler swings by earth & randomly chooses a m/s to play with. He challenges their sanity & convention w/ travels through multiple dimensions & fluid time. While sampling infinity, they embrace a more enlightened idea of happiness.

  33. pghcrew

    The son of a magical potion maker is treated poorly by his family. He sneaks into the Apothecary one night to make a potion that will make him loved. Only it doesn’t have the intended reaction. He begins making new potions in an attempt to combat the effects.

  34. ReadRawls69

    On his 18th b-day, mother confesses to son that she is a sorceress & his destiny is to be a mighty sorcerer. His training , though unconventional, brings them much closer & carries them to many strange lands suited for each particular lesson.

  35. ReadRawls69

    A son realizes he can manipulate his dreams to create any setting/world imaginable. Plot accelerates when he realizes he can summon others into his created dreams & greatly influence behavior & memories of their shared experiences.

  36. shadowolf660

    Charismatic Bard returns home after being stricken curse of hyper fertility

  37. Medusa

    The king, the crown prince and a large part of the nobles assassinated. The order of succession is unclear and war threatens the kingdom. Fortunately, the King was wise and said that the crown prince’s twin had died, but the prince was alive in the countryside. The story is about Prince return to the leadership of a country with problems, a mother and sister she has never met and many grieving nobles. There is a witch/sorceress living in the countryside who crushes black stone and makes magical tattoos and the Prince already has a few tattoos.

  38. Thickdick

    In the LOTR style of a man, a dwarf, an elf, a wizard, and hobbits successfully destroying an ancient artifact together. But a curse has been bestowed onto them because of it. Now as they return home to their families they discover new feelings for their mothers… or their sons and daughters begin to feel things for them or their wives. How can this curse be lifted? Do they want it lifted? (I just want to see Lexx make hot versions of every LOTR race. We’ve seen plenty of elves but where is the love for dwarves or hobbits? Or a wizard fucking many of the trusting beings and creatures they come across…)

  39. polotus2328

    Fatherless Son is out hunting when attacked by a werewolf that he manages to kill. His changes not only to affect the women around him through pheromones, but his desire to increase his “territory” and his “pack.”

  40. pragmaticromantic

    Rival kingdoms are tricked by the same 3rd party into using a “powerful” elixir on the royal families to give them an edge. Things are not going as planned…

  41. Thomas_windsor

    A runty elf prince seems to have inherited no form of magic. But, when he comes of age, his mother discovers he has the ancient magic of hyper virility!

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