In a top secret facility, a prisoner escapes.
Illustrations by JDseal: https://subscribestar.adult/dark-stone-stories
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4.7 out of 5 dark stones (based on 28 reviews)
Love this and wish there was more. It just cuts out….
I don’t do this tiny one-time stories all that often any more because it’s hard to build story. This was just a quick little thing I wrote for JDseal before we started Under Fire.
Good to see you two working togther again. Love the art and story. A few things though. Can you space the dialouge out more. Cause this is the problem with Palmer Mansion and The guied. Illustrated not text. Space them out cause it get’s fuckinf confusing who is talking. At least for me. Also no cliffhangers or tease of thing to happen. Have a clearer ending. Just have it end espcially for one and done. Also this premise is too good for a short. I would’ve like a full story out of this acutally but I know why it’s not but still. But yes if one and done again. Have a better ending and a acutal ending. Other then that I liked this alot and it’s nice to see JD again on here. See ya Rawls.
Nobody will ever be as good as JDS when paired with Rawls. It’s like peanut butter and jelly, a perfect match. Looking at the CP story, his work has only gotten better.
Oh and what’s up with that tease at the end of the story of other m/s couples getting it on? Interesting
True!
It looks like your art has improved. I love Molly.
There seems to be a discrepancy in both the description and the pictures. At one point you said that she stood in only her underwear, garters and high heels then you say she takes off her bra. Normally underwear refers to panties, I guess it could mean bra also… but then the picture doesn’t show any garters (which is disappointing). Anyway, no biggie, still loved the artwork and the story.
If you read closely enough in all stories you’ll find minor discrepancies like this. No need to make something out of it.
No need to find excuses, I have failed! I analyzed the story as much as I could, but in the midst of working some stuff got lost in translation, and for that I am sorry.
JD Seal work has only got better
love to see you and JD Seal working together again, hope to see more
Rawly, I thought you and Jdseal split ways or have things changed?
I think she said they weren’t working together EXCLUSIVELY anymore… doesn’t mean he can’t come back once in a while for a limited project like this…
It’s nice to see them team up again… if only he’d come back to finish Palmer… He’s still got it listed on his subscribestar that the project is only on hiatus.
Don’t get me wrong, I would love to see Jdeasl finish the THOPM since he more than half way done. I just thought they were going separate ways.
JDseal and I used to be partners on Subscribestar, we split that partnership. Later on, JDseal needed more time to focus on his own stories, so we ended Palmer Mansion which we had originally thought would continue after I left Subscribestar. I fully support his work with his own stories, and I love to see what he’s creating. We’re still good friends. And we will continue to collaborate here and there as time allows.
I LOVE JDSeal’s art style!
Love the JDSeal artwork.