When their town is sacked by orcs, a human mother and son rescue a mysterious scepter from a burning shrine. They must flee into the perilous Mottled Forest where they encounter all sorts of nefarious magical creatures. Everyone they meet harbors their own desires for the scepter.
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This story is incredibly disappointing to read. Seems like RawlyRawls engaging in some intentional NTR stuff while leading readers on by the nose. I’ve loved just about every story I’ve read on this site so far, but this one easily has to be the worst of them by far.
What’s going on with this story and warlock? Been a while since new chapters.
The Warlock illustrator has some things going on in his life that have slowed progress. BSA is working on ES right now.
Gotcha. I wasn’t even referring to illustrated. I’d just like to read more of the story – tho I know how you prefer not to release text too long before the art is ready. More chapters please
Oh, well I am writing a chapter of ES right now. You can always keep up to date with what I’m writing on my Discord server.
Niiice. I appreciate how you are putting some mom/Ntr vibes into this story! So hot when Marco hears Helen humping in her tent.
I enjoy this story a lot but I find myself disappointed while Helen is fucking around with all these other creatures instead of Marco. I look forward to when they finally get together. Hopefully mr hiss can heroically sacrifice himself or something.
I honestly don’t see that as a good idea, since frankly, it’s Marco who needs to do something for Helen in order to get her attention. All he does so far when it comes to Helen is either 1) mope around about the fact she’s banging a lizard, 2) ignore her safety & security in favor of getting his rocks off with Lenore & Pallida, and 3) only seems to prioritize Helen’s existence once she’s been kidnapped (which has happened TWICE). Marco has done virtually nothing to prove himself to be the man that he professes himself to be, let alone one Helen would be attracted to sexually.
Look at how Lenore treats him versus Helen, for example. The one manly thing he actually has done this entire story so far, was save her from an Orc w/ his bow, and she’s given herself to him & shared his tent every night, and has even professed her love for him in the latest chapter.
Meanwhile, Mister Hiss not only stays close to Helen to protect her at all times, but he even carries her pack for her. Think about that, this strange creature who abducted her in the middle of the night & raped her repeatedly, has gotten more respect & affection from Helen than HER OWN SON. If anything, I think it would go along way for Marco to realize how important his mother is to him, and to place himself in harms way for her at some point, rather than Mister Hiss. Otherwise, even if Marco & Helen get together, it won’t be out of genuine attraction & respect.
I ain’t defending Marco, guys a little bumbling imo. I was just speaking on my personal dissatisfaction with Rawls stories involving mothers with random monsters. I feel like with that sort of story there shouldn’t be a son involved because it always leaves me wishing they were together. I did like the old story about the aliens fucking childless housewives. But I don’t enjoy mothers being tossed around while their son is an idiot. I loved almost every Rawls story and like them all except for one, Roll Ten for a Save. I apologize for being negative but that story is terrible. It’s simply because of my personal preference against sons being cucked by their moms for monsters. Like the guys are forced to masturbate to their mom’s fucking dragons or whatever they were? And then the kid with the dice makes it so the moms will want to fuck their sons without it ever being depicted in the story? No thank you
A little bumbling?? Dude’s completely immature & is clearly cosplaying at being a man & adult. And don’t get me wrong, I’m completely w/ you on stories like this, for very much the same reason. Not so much w/ sex between humans & monsters, I don’t too much mind that, even though it’s not exactly my favorite story trope either. Otherwise, I’d be against Marco laying w/ Pallida as well. My gripe, as I said, is mostly w/ the portrayal of Marco in this story & the lack of any real development for him by Rawly during this journey so far. That was the crux of my reply, having Mister Hiss sacrifice himself wouldn’t do anything to help Marco improve his standing in her eyes. Narratively, it wouldn’t give her any reason to choose him as her lover, and if anything would only cause her to simply choose another creature. No, if Rawly has any plans to bring Marco & Helen together, then Rawly has to improve Marco’s character a bit & have him do more than just sling penis to Lenore & Pallida.
Looking forward to Marco making music with Helen and more!
Read chapter 10 of enchanted scepter. It is so hot. Love hellen being such a slut. Also, love how those two fauns in first chapter have left such a strong impression on hellen.Literraly every creature she has encountered since than, she compares them to fauns. Makes sense,I mean what’s better than 1 perfect breeding beast, 2 of course, lol. I hope Helen and her 2 faun lovers reunite in future chapters( since they were looking for her after she ran away). And Unlike last time, she goes all out and have many hot nights with them, not just 1,unlike last time. May be experiencing her first anal and dp with them. 😋
Loving the mom’s story arch!
One of the better mom ntr stories out there. The way you use forests magical elements to brings mom’s true dark nature. and her corruption, Awesome. I know you specialize incest , but i hope you write few more stories like this from time to time.
I presume that the Dryad’s name is Pallida, as there are > 70 occurrences of that spelling. However, there are also 5 occurrences of Padilla. Can you make the name consistent, one way or the other?
General comment: I think that your writing works best when you follow your muse, rather than being too concerned about what your readers will think. I believe that you are, after all, a much better author than any of us are!
Thanks for the heads up. Padilla is a typo that snuck through. I’ll fix it for the next version.
Yes, I agree. I always try to write for what I would want to read. I’m lucky that so many people enjoy the same things I do.
Do you know when Chapter 7 might be coming out? It is still listed as *Ongoing*, which gives me hope nonetheless.
More specifically, you’re still planning on continuing the story (no rush!), right?
This story is on hold until I find a new illustrator to continue. I’m not sure when that will be.
Hi I just joined your site two days ago but I’ve read 6 stories so far and I’m bloody loving them all. You really do have great talent at writing stories both big and small please keep it up. Is there a way to be alerted when a new chapter / story drops ?.
Hello, thank you for the support and the kind words! Yes, when you sign up, your email will get notices of every update unless you opt out. I just checked, your email is on the list.
I’m really liking this story so far in regards to pacing. I feel like this is going to be a decently long tale with a lot of adventure. I am kind of sad Marco and Helen haven’t banged yet, but I have faith that she will be a dutiful mother and bear her sons baby/babies??? Can’t wait to find out!
Yes, this story could go on for a while. Really enjoying writing it.
When is charter 5 coming out
Not sure. I don’t set deadlines of illustrators. When the illustrations are complete, I’ll start writing the next chapter.
Loving what’s happening to Helen. She keeps getting her body & mind fucked with, losing herself more and more. I can’t wait until she’s so reduced in thought she gets taken for a new wife to Marco.
I’m really loving this series and do wish it would come out faster but I understand why. I did not see that coming. I had a different idea on where this was going but this is much better lol. I love how you explained that she had a bulge in her stomach that’s nice to read. I hope you do that more often. I fucking can’t wait for the illustrated version of this chapter cause that’s gonna be epic. Looking forward to the next one. Take care Rawls.
Thanks! The bulging belly does pop up in my writing from time to time ?
Really enjoying this series so far. Your writing paints such vivid imagery, keep up the great work 🙂
Thanks!
I enjoyed the chapter. Still wondering when the scepter will be relevant.
When should we expect illustrated version for chapter 2 ?
The artist is working on it now. I would guess sometime within a month.
Love the direction of this, brilliant storytelling!
Thanks!
I like the way the Mom is the central character, and how she’s in charge. It’s a neat change of pace. Looking forward to seeing how she develops. Also curious if the son will develop independently of Mom, or with her or, under her lead.
Thank you for the feedback! I’m trying to experiment with variations on a theme. I know what my readers want, but some surprises are also nice. I think you’ll enjoy what I have planned for Helen and Marco 🙂
I hope the story continues in this way, seemed different from your other stuff and I liked it because of that. Was very compelling having the son helpless for a change, truly hope the story kind of keeps to this fashion. Hopefully more of a gradual build-up like Enki’s puzzle but in regards to the son being able to save his mother from situations like chapter one than him ending up dominating her like normal and the experiences effecting him and the staff trying to steer him away from acting like villain’s like the fauns. Got a abit carried away there sorry!. Love your stories though keep up the amazing work.
This is pretty close to my thinking for the story. Thank you for the feedback!
Can’t wait for more on this then, hope it becomes your next big project 😀
Interesting start. Looking forward to see where this goes.
Not sure what to make of this one yet, I expected the Scepter to have had more impact in the first chapter.
Hello good.
I think maybe this should have gone to Zapped and other stories.
And continue the curse of the shadow or continue some of the zapped texts that are better than this.
I feel that it goes out of the usual theme in your main stories.
I appreciate the feedback. I’m trying out some different things. I have twelve ongoing stories now, so there needs to be some variety. If this isn’t your thing, no worries. There are lots of other more traditional Rawly stories on the way.