When their town is sacked by orcs, a human mother and son rescue a mysterious scepter from a burning shrine. They must flee into the perilous Mottled Forest where they encounter all sorts of nefarious magical creatures. Everyone they meet harbors their own desires for the scepter.
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4.7 out of 5 dark stones (based on 32 reviews)
Any idea when you might be able to restart this story?
BSA will be working on it pretty soon.
I was rereading this story again and was struck with a notion.
Spoilers:
The music played by Helen during her duet with Gylfi wasn’t her induced love for Gylfi; but, was her love and passion for her son Marco. Upon hearing that music, Pallida was compelled by that passion to make love to Marco specifically. I had assumed that she was affected with general horniness. This notion opens up many more possibilities for storylines.
I like the way you think!
Artist aside, this storyline has several intriguing possibilities.
I just reread my comment and realized that it could be misunderstood.
What I was trying to say was: even though the illustrations are great; I find the storyline compelling and want more of it.
Sorry if my earlier comment sounded like I was dissing the artist.
No worries, I knew what you meant. We’re getting closer to starting this story again, but it may be several months.
Any updates ?
No updates. This one is going to be tough to find the right fit. It may take a while.
Enjoying the story. Feel the initial scene with the fawns was a bit short. Wouldn’t be a opposed to a reflective flashback that provides a bit more detail.
I love this story so much but chapter 5 is a disappointment. Feels like the story only progressed about an inch. The action scene was really cool and well illustrated. On the other hand the depiction of young Helen is bad. Her breasts would be a lot bigger by her 20’s if she is to become elder Helen. Only one child and her breasts grew, what like 3, 4 cup sizes? Doesn’t make any sense. Otherwise, I love everything else. I’m crazy about medieval fantasy so this one hits a sweet spot. Dryads… (drool)
Chapter 5 was definitely interesting. The question I find is…WHAT is Helen’s younger self? An illusion maybe?
I love chapter 4; I love how Marco found a lover that is more caring this time. The last part is the best.
Art is fantastic. Story great, wish it wasn’t a short lol. But still great. I really hope this person gets a full story. Also great to read this and this went in different directions then I first thought. Good job.
More please!! Wonderful work, both artwork and writing. Would love to see more illustrations! but I understand they are quality pieces and your writing certainly makes up for it in this one, so either way bravo!
We’re working on the next chapter right now. 🙂
Can’t open chapter 3
Try a different PDF reader on your phone. It should work that way.
I cannot seem to open chapter 3.
Thanks! I love chapter 3. It looks like Marco FINALLY got some action at last!
very detailed art and pretty too, not much of a fan of the mom NTR but the art is supreme, hope to see more of the artist
I agree. Love the art but the mother being willing to screw anything with a dick ruined the story for me.
I try different things in different stories. They don’t always work for everyone. I appreciate the feedback.
That Dryad is a sexy little fern. Here’s to a growing family tree.
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I am loving this 1, it looks like Helen is really losing herself to the pleasure.
This is probably my favorite current artist that is working with you.
I can’t wait until Marco makes his mother sing a duet with him. ?
He’ll need to focus if he’s going to rescue her!
Love this illustrator fast becoming my new fav!
Nice story, although after almost 2 months of waiting I expected more erotic illustrations for it, there was a little more in the first chapter. Having said that, I will be looking forward to the next chapter if or when it is to come out.
This is great when will the next chapter come out?
Probably within a month. 🙂
The first chapter is great, I would not change a thing. I love Helen and her picture.
Looking forward to the next illustrated chapter. Good Start!
Would love a series, even if you can only post the text story in advance
You’re in luck! I’ll be writing the next chapter in a week or two. The text always releases before the illustrated version.