Beware of mysterious shops curated by strange men wearing wizard hats. If you find a ring in such a place, don’t let your mother put it on.
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Nice build up, love it that mom falls for her son always yields a good fap, got a little complicated with the 3rd character Ava, woulda preferred that Evan ended up with both his mother and Ava
I loved this story and the two main characters. Lots of orgasms were experienced while reading this extremely arousing comic story.
Thank you 🙂
I finished rereading The Missus Ring, to see if my opinions had changed. I still loved the parts I loved and despised the parts I hated. However, while my comments the first time around were of me venting, this time I thought I’d try being more constructive.
At their core, there are two types of stories; stories where you don’t use your brain, and stories where you can use your brain. Most erotica are stories where you don’t use your brain: it is what it is and you enjoy it. Stories where you can use your brain are benefitted by said use of brain. Whether its themes, characterization, or plot, using your brain enhances the experience. No one type of story is inherently better then the other, they each have their own strengths. What you cannot do, is have a story that allows you to use your brain shift into a story that expects you not to use your brain. This is what happens in the Missus Ring.
In the first act one is benefitted by using their brain, it helps you better understand Amy and Ava’s characterization, and understand the stories core themes. The second act, however, is a story where using one’s brain detracts from the experience. One is not rewarded from using their brain, they are punished. Amy’s actions become incompatible with previous setup, and major characterization is abandoned as needs be.
Now, there are clearly reasons that Rawls changed the story halfway through, and I cannot speak for the exact reasoning for this change. However, said change not only affected the story being told; it effected what kind of story was being told. A story that rewarded you for using your brain at the beginning, damned you die for using it at the end.
My advice is stay the course. Either tell a story where using one’s brain is a benefit to one’s enjoyment, and commit to it; or tell a story where no use of one’s brain is required. Commit to the bit, otherwise one is left with one of the most frustrating experiences I have had with any piece of media.
I would not use the constant phrasing of “using the brain” with no specifics to write a review. But I think that we are probably aligned in our thoughts that the story got sidetracked with Ava’s over-involvement.
Great story from start to finish, which is why it leaves us wanting more 🙂
I waited until I read all of the series before commenting, but you really did disassociate Amy fucking Ava from Ava wanting the ring didn’t you. It was so asinine that I didn’t think that you would really do that.
I’m not sure what the complaint is here. From the text it’s clear that Ava slept with Amy to both get Amy to give her the ring and mess with the family (she had her issues with her own family that bled into her instincts here). Those were her two motivations that didn’t change.
Thanks for replying. I didn’t mean to sound curt, I was just confused on the motivations of the characters, particularly Amy. Since you removed the explicit blackmail and rape plotline the exact “canon” of the story was ambiguous to me.
Thanks for clarifying. Nothing was changed. To the best of my recollection, there wasn’t ever any blackmail or rape. Ava seduced Amy to get the ring and mess with the Goslings. But Amy and Evan forgave Ava for it. And Evan forgave Amy for her part in it.
To refer back to my original point, then you are divesting Ava wanting the ring from Amy’s decision to have the affair. If Amy had the affair because she was seduced, then it had nothing to do with Ava wanting the ring.
Maybe this helps clear things up. From Ava’s perspective, the affair had to do with wanting the ring and messing with the Goslings. From Amy’s perspective, it didn’t. Amy already knew the ring was gone. Amy fell for the seduction because she was trying to ask herself: “what would the wife-woman do?” This led her down a wild path.
I was a bit curious about this one myself, as the comment puzzles me. So I went back and looked over the text.
Blackmail does come up much earlier in the narrative, when Ava comes across what Evan and Amy are doing, but Ava explicitly says she’s not interested in that.
When the brief affair starts, Ava’s gone over Evan’s head, so to speak, because she doesn’t believe him that the ring is broken. Amy’s into her ‘what would the wife-woman’ mindset at that point in the story, so shuts Ava up by kissing her, and things kind of spiral.
Ava does figure out Amy’s trying to think like the wife-woman, whose solution to everything tends to involve sex, and uses it to mess with her and taunt her, but it doesn’t really go further than that. Both of them like feeling like the wife-woman, and it sort of leads them down parallel paths that happen to clash there for a bit.
There wasn’t a ‘rape’ element to that. Amy made an impulsive decision, and one that she’d consider bad in retrospect, but she was a willing participant while it was going on.
I’ll just say read issues 17 and 24. Look at Amy’s motivations and what she says. If you don’t get any vibes, then I’m probably wrong.
I gave both chapters a read, but I’m afraid I’m not seeing what you’re seeing.
Welp. I appreciated the discussion none the less.
Is Lexx going to finish up his other stuff now?
We’ll be working on another collaboration after Missus Ring. If you mean his non-Rawly stuff, my understanding is that pirates have made that very difficult for him to continue.
Loved this story.
The best story!!
Gonna miss this one. It was one of my favorites.
It would be great if after a few months we can revisit Evan Ava and Amy. Maybe at Christmas after the baby’s born. Maybe check-in after Evans done with collage like at their wedding. Anyway, I like this group and would like to see them back even in a short story
Lexx and Rawly did do a Christmas card: https://rawlyrawls.com/the-missus-ring-christmas-card/
But that’s probably all we’ll be seeing.
Love the Misses Ring and hope to see Evan & his mother because the shop keeper said he will be seeing Evan’s baby real soon even if the this part of the story ended and hope to see another collaboration with Lexx228
This story is over. Anything in Evan and Amy’s future will have to be created in the reader’s imagination. Lexx and I will be working on a new story after this one.
Just a thought but it would be great if you could put a option to download all the chapters all at once like a book for the finished novels of yours
The illustrated chapters are too big to be combined for downloading.
This is the best story!
Hope Rawls shows a scene where Evan is with his mom at the hospital giving birth & Ava in the background hiding with a twinge of regret & longing in her eyes
Whats going on inside AVa house. This story is awesome you could keep going forever with this one.
Rawly, do you know if Lexx228 in the future would make these stories animated as ren’py games do? I will pay lots if I see one your stories in that format!
I don’t have any plans to create games with Lexx or anyone else. My time is limited, so I’m putting my effort into what I know I do well.
OMG Ava is stunning . What the hell is wrong with Evan he has a crush on her its Prom just kiss the girl
That’s good advice!
Is chapter 34 the last one?
The way 34 ended, I can see it as the end.
Nope, there’s more. But we’re almost at the end.
All my stories end with a THE END, so you know it’s over. 🙂
Thank you.
Im glad to see him getting with ava. Why not have him fuck eva and mom…they can all be together
yes, the best story on here. my cock is gonna get pumped
This story is right up there with Enki’s Puzzle, for me. Absolutely love the turns it takes. The character growth of all three main characters is so well done. I’m both waiting breathlessly for the end and dreading it, as I won’t be able to anticipate the next chapter anymore.
I appreciate the feedback! I’ll be sad to end it, too. It’s been fun. 🙂
My favorite part of this story was when ava dominated mom. Not sure why, but i always get turned on when a younger girl dominates an older woman. Typically, like in porn, its always the older woman seducing a not so bright younger girl….i find it more realistic that an older woman, trapped in a passion free marriage could be seduced and dominated by a young, attractive, worldly, passionate young girl.
All of my saved lesbian porn movies follow that model…and they are harder to find.
I was wondering if there was any plans to do an audio for this story. I think it’s a perfect story for this medium.
I let Silvermoon pick her own stories. When she’s done with Enki, this will definitely be an option.
This story is definitely one of my favourites. The relationship between Evan and his mom, which developed slowly, but is now so loving and intimate, is awesome. Ava is pretty cool and cheeky too. I’m really looking forward to how you’re gonna wrap this one up Rawls!
I have to say I’m really loving this story. It’s right up there with Enki’s puzzle for me.
Personally the longer the story the better. The slow gradual changes of personality from bitch to affectionate. Or jerk to nice guy. The slow realisation of the way certain characters treat others is one of the things I like most in your writing. Also the artwork on this one is spot on. The mom is super hot.
I’m sorry but I love Ava, the little minx. She’s in many ways sexier than the mom to me. And I just want Evan to discipline her and make her his loving slave wife too. Hopefully by making her pregnant too.
I’m glad the lesbian stuff is over as I read Rawlyrawls’ stories in a big part for the unapologetic main focus on male power fantasy and straight sex.
The best!!
I didn’t understand completely. What is the deeper reason why ava wanted the ring ? Like Evan said she ist to free. So what was she longing for ? What was the relationship of the wife-woman to her husband like ? Where is this discussed ?
By the way: Real great story and Illustrations, the best I’ve seen yet. I would prefer a little bit more lesbian sex scenes with Ava dominating Evans mother.
If you notice how the wife-woman behaves toward her husband, she a ton of faith and trust in him. She references past adventures that they’ve shared. She has a partner who understands and loves her. Ava has such a hard time imagining having such a partner that she didn’t even know why she loved wearing the ring until Evan told her.
Thanks for the hint.
I have re-read a few chapters and translated them more carefully into my language. I have understood it now.
The story even has philosophical depth – great!
Glad you’re enjoying it!
I will be disappointed when it ends. Approximately how many left til its finished? One? Three?
I’m not sure how many more chapters, but not many. Under five for sure.
This story never ends!
When are we going to meet the sister? I don’t know, jusk asking… imagining a younger version of Amy…
I don’t know if we’ll meet her. She’s off at college and not planned for the story.
Kinda ruinin one of the best comics and stories, hope you can pull it back. Believe in you chief.
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The best!!!
Now that’s good entertainment folks! Wonder what villainy Ava is up to?
Damn this one was hot 🥵🥵 love the anal and seeing Evan take some control! keep it comin!! 🍆 🍑 💦
YES……!!!!
Finally, some ANAL…!!!
Evan got even with his mother…!!
&…
Even though Amy was still his mother, she had to let her son give her a good spanking this time…!
Seeing how Amy was no longer is the women that raised him . The situation of having his baby should change to NO baby that will fix one of his problems
Can’t wait to see what Evan does. Feels like a pivotal moment.
This is something. Finding both of his loves have gone full dyke.I don’t understand why they can’t see all the rings power runs thur Evan, doesn’t matter who Ava is with see will stil want Evan her husband. So Evan should go get the ring talk to Fiona and take charge of his Bitchs
As hot & sexy as this is, it’s still heart-breaking see…!
I’m sure Evan feels that way…
He’s gotta have revenge, NOT sure HOW to on Ava, but …
it’s NOW his TURN to break his mother’s heart … (when I say her heart, I mean her ASS…)!!!
Was Amy’s behavior toward Evan more about their baby? I have tried to understand how Evan did anything wrong and I cannot find anything, it felt like Amy was blaming Evan for things that could not have been predicted.
I didn’t hear Amy blaming Evan for anything. If you mean why was she more icy to him, well yes, she had concerns that were pressing on her mind.
Because originally Amy was having sex with Ava was to protect her family. Call it an arrangement, rape, or prostitution, but Amy was doing it to stop Ava from being a threat to her family. Amy blamed Evan for putting her it that position in the first place. If he hadn’t brought the ring home, or let Ava get ahold of it then she wouldn’t be in the position where she had to cheat on her lovers to protect them. The author ultimately decided to abandon this storyline, probably due to the rape connotations, and instead wrote a storyline where Amy lost herself to her wife-woman persona.
Are you still going on about this? I’m the author, and I’m telling you I didn’t write that. There is nothing in the text that supports your theory. I’ve explained to you their motivations several times. I don’t start to write one story, then change tack halfway through. Never have, never will.
Sorry for my overboldness. I got carried away in my criticism. I do genuinely enjoy much of this series. It just felt like there was a road not taken. I shouldn’t have been so adamant in the certainty of my speculation, because it was merely speculation. I still have criticism of course, both major and minor. For instance, I felt that the Amy and Evan relationship just kind of peters out. Despite seemingly being an important plotline, the pregnancy is hardly relevant to the plot in the finale. If I’m not mistaken the word baby isn’t even mentioned once in the final act, and the child itself is only mentioned once during the final act, and that was in its first chapter. That whole plotline and relationship doesn’t seem to get any closure. It definitely felt like a missed opportunity. Regardless, I shouldn’t have been so adamant in the certainty of speculation. Apologies.
I appreciate the apology. Thank you. I do have several stories that finish with dark themes. If you haven’t read Mothership yet, I recommend checking that one out. Also, 3838 Walnut Street.
I would so love to see the sister get involved with her own mother or better yet have Ms. Roslin get involved with the sister
Lying to her clueless husband is one thing but lying to her baby daddy better have consequences.
Seems time for moms secrets to turn this story a little darker,Maybe ill effects on Evan’s mind you know depression heartbreak. the strain on Moms marrage ,with 2 extra love affairs, yes I’m sure see now loves Ava. heck this story with a few twists and turns could go on for 20 more chapters
Love this story!! Keep it coming! I like the hinting of some future anal mentioned in the previous chapter (ch 23). Maybe Evan starts playing with and worshiping Amy’s ass and hinting about anal (cause it is fantASStic 😉 Evan solves the Ava problem and Amy ends up taking Evan back to the hotel for a celebration weekend away and gives him her ass as a reward and they both love it
I am loving this story. Please keep it coming! Also, I don’t know about others, but I think it would be cool if there were like a few chapters after Amy gets pregnant where we still get to see her and Evan continuing their relationship. the stories always end after mom gets pregnant, and I get why, but I think it would be cool to see them for a bit longer afterwards.
This is a great story (tho I disliked how Evan and mom got together so quickly right away in ch. 1) and Lexx does the best art for RR. That said – it seems to be dragging on and on and…on. It’s done, over, finito. Nothing left to say or do or show (and I couldn’t care less about Blue haired girl). Please have Lexx illustrate a new story where we get to see a mom slowly and reluctantly fall. Just my two cents. Keep up the great work.
I mean. A fantastic tale, told brilliantly, presented perfectly. Encore! Encore!
It’d be nice at some point, while Evan is sexing his mom, he says something dirty & nasty to her, then she asks “Do you kiss your mommy with that mouth?” Then he’ll respond, “Yes, I do…!” and starts kissing her passionately with tongue…
I am a total fan of this artist and artwork. I would love to see more stories illustrated like this…by this illustrator…even if they were done or partially done by other artists. These are so clear, sharp, and realistic – they bring the story alive
The hottest part of this story for me, apart from the mom and evan segments was when ava dominated mom into girl on girl sex with her. I would love a chapter where ava confronts mom about the ring…and literally forces mom to have explosive sex with her.
Evan should take Ava to the Wizard’s Shop to find a solution…
I can’t get enough of this story. I’m hoping for Evan to knock up dear old mom soon.
Great illustrations! Love the longer chapters. Wish this released more often!
Another great chapter to the story, and the illustrations are once again well done. I think the only critique I have of it is on pg 3 (or 4 maybe), in the scene where Evan & his Mom are having sex against the refrigerator, I think Lexx should’ve drawn Evan with his pants somewhat lowered. At least in the front, it adds to the visual aesthetic of sex taking place, rather than appearing as if Evan’s pants are completely buttoned & the two are just dry-humping each other. Other than that, fantastic story & illustrations.
“dry-humping” ))
I was afraid of the bad comments about the other pictures… But to me this “dry-humping” scene shows “quick unplanned sex” quite well.
Thank you for your feedback.
When are you going to make her pregnant??
And later, you could lengthen the story with the father becoming a cuckold.
it would be cool. What you think??
You know what would be funny is if Evan’s mom becomes the Wife-Woman Ms. Anelar in the future because she changed her name to marry her son after divorcing Evan’s father
Hey Rawls here’s an Idea a Mother & family go on a island vacation without realizing its a nudist/Swingers island dedicated to Aphrodite & Eros where the two Gods interact with the most worthy.
What do You think?
You can pitch it the next time I put up a story suggestion post.
I wish this was “the only” story you’re working on, because it kills me to wait each month for the next chapter…!
I would really love it Rawls would make an Audio version of the story. What do you say Rawls?
The voice actors choose the stories they work on. So, it’s possible.
I’m caught up on this one, eager for more chapters. I’m puzzled that the ring disappeared. Surely Evan will need it to seduce Ava. And how will we find out who Fania Anelar is, if the ring stays lost? I’m puzzled about that too. Fania calls Evan by his correct name. Is Evan also her husband’s name? Does she call ever man she meets by his correct name? That would be curious magic. What does she do when nobody is wearing the ring? Maybe I’m thinking too much. Here’s a thought. Evan’s mom gets pregnant and, when she visits an ObGyn, the doctor or nurse is Fania.
The ring thought it’s task was complete. That Ava would be his girlfriend, as he’d originally wanted. Everyone else seems to think that isn’t so.
Safe enough huh? The shopkeeper could have thrown the powder in with the bell but I’ll bet he has other ideas.
Looks like the rings not finished yet. Mom better find a way to begin liking Ava ,Evans future girlfriend.
Another great chapter! I’d love to see them get dirtier. Anal, more facials, threesomes with Ava…
Great work!
I’m not sure what Ava will bring to the table, but it will probably be naughty, knowing her.
I think this is probably the best story/illustration I’ve read. I wish you would put all efforts into making this story!
This story is terrific!
I love how her breast size fits her frame, not overly large.
How about some xray specs from the shop so Evan can see his sperm fill his mom’s womb.
I like this idea, but I don’t think it will make it into the story.
I agree, that would not work with the art style. If the style was more 2-dimensional, then I could see it.
I find this story to be among my favorites.
Great story. Really hot illustrations! Id love to see anal!
Yes!
Follow the ring!
So, will we follow Evan and His mom to find out what happens after?
Or will we follow the ring to see it’s next adventure?
I like either way, but the former would come to a conclusion, whereas the latter leads to a “Never-Ending Story” kind ofr thing, and WE may eventually find out much more about Fanny and her life as well.
We won’t follow the ring. Although, it’s a fun idea for an anthology like Five Twisted Wishes.
One of my current favorites!
Love this story, love the artwork. I have to say that many of the pics from chapter 18 are too dark. I understand that the room is dark, but the thing I love about this art is how you can see all the details of mom and son, and that wasn’t so much the case in chap 18.
This story is a real winner it only gets better with each new chapter. The story can keep on keeping on, as the ring has untold history yet to be told and asses to be entered into. Ava is the freak that makes mom and son unite as one but what of Ava her boyfriend and Dad.
The writing together with the art work is terrific- This story continues to be the best!
First glance I thought I didn’t like this story. Now it’s one of my favorites.
Fantastic story wonderful art work
Sixteen chapters in and I feel I should have shouted out Lexx228’s fantastic work much earlier. I’m usually not a big fan of 3D art but their phenomenal work here really has shifted my appraisal of the medium’s potential. The body mechanics and facial expressions are some of (if not the) best I’ve encountered.
Odd as it may sound, Lexx228’s attention to the hands and fingers is really key to my appreciation of their efforts. Details like that make the characters come alive and really bolster an already terrific narrative.
Really prolly the best story, and the artworks…..couldnt be better!!!! Keep it up
This story is soooo good! Please keep up the frequent updates!!!!
Have the Mother take Ava shopping for sexy clothes
This story has really heated up! This might be edging into my new favorite…love how mom is being dominated by gf. I also love the artwork. Very hot!
I wish there weren’t so many pics with the text on them. It’s really hard to read pics and text combined on my phone. Its fine on a computer monitor, but on a phone screen not so much.
Great chapter and art work! Best story !
Give ring to Dad he may be more understanding
This story and artwork are fabulous!
Love the story and the way Mom wants to understand the Wife-Woman better, but I think Evan screwed up giving his location away to Ava. Should be an interesting reunion
The art is Fantastic!!
Things did get more complicated with Ava there!
I love the last 2 pictures of chapter 12.
I love this series so much. Like its just mint. Chef’s kiss*
🙂
I LOVE the hotel chapters. This story is becoming one of my favorites.
Hey Rawly, I am not sure how much longer the Missus ring story will last, but afterwards can Lexx do THOPM reboot? His art style seems really suited for it.
That won’t work. Lexx has limited props to work with, so it works best if I write stories that are specifically for him. Eloise’s wardrobe alone would cause all sorts of problems.
Rawly I remember you saying you wanted specific illustrators that can do a long story, so the only other reliable and proven illustrator are Redoxa and Tindermind . Either of them doing THOPM reboot would be great. Also you should check out MandoLogica and Daval3D from subscribe star they both have worked on long stories of their own and collaboration with them on future projects would be nice.
There are other reliable artists that are willing to commit to a big project. I just have to get to know them and we have to feel comfortable working together. For instance, two artists who were working on shorts are starting new novels right now. There’s also SatanicFruitcake, who I love working with. I think Palmer Mansion will go to a 2D artist. I’d like a 2D look since it’s atmospheric horror. Other than that, I’m not sure who yet. But it’s likely it will be this year or next.
Excellent!
Ok, can we just pause a moment on the name satanic fruitcake?!? Genius. Lol
Wow, I think chapter 10 is going to be in my top 5 favorites. It was fantastic how you framed it.
Really want this story to continue!
It’s continuing! 🙂
Yes Yes Yes Yes Yes! I love this story so much! and the illustrated version is just as awesome as the text! I really like the slightly shorter stories that focus mainly on mother and son getting it on. I really hope Evan and his mom ditch the condoms soon
I just wrote Chapter 10. You’ll find out soon 🙂 Thanks for the feedback!
Sweet! Can’t wait! I imagine that Ava is going to show up to the hotel, but I hope she doesn’t get in the way of Evan and his mom making the next big step. If she is a facilitator great! Hehe
I love chapter 8, things are going to get hot. Here we go down the rabbit hole!
I can’t see it
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This is great! Please make the chapters a semi- monthly installment.
We make the chapters as fast as we can for each project 🙂
This artwork definitely does it for me. Looks so realistic.
Chapter 6 is definitely good. I wonder how long she will be able to resist. What I do not understand is what if Evan waited for Amy to take a nap. Slip the ring on to her finger, then. I don’t know.
This has become my favourite current story of yours. Hopefully you will keep it going a while and not dramatically end it
I hope this is one of those stories that goes on for a lil while. I’m really enjoying it so far!
Lexx228 is definitely my favourite illustrator
I have read chapters 3-to-5 back-to-back and I gotta say, Amy seems really into it. It looks as if she is in denial though.
This is great!
She’s wearing the same outfit two days in a row? Cmon Mom, get it together. I kid. Love this story and love the first person and really love Lexx.
Like the update, don’t know where the next one will go. I also like the first person, it suits the story well. I hope she starts falling for her son without needing the missus ring and helps him use it on other women, like his crush.
I think there is a little uncanny valley on the mom. The chin is a little too pointy and I think the face might be slightly large for the head.
When you reboot, do you at least keep the other works archived for us?
I don’t usually keep the discontinued version of the rebooted stories on the site. I remove them to avoid confusion and clutter. The exceptions are JDseal’s versions of Betty and Palmer Mansion. If you ask for a particular discontinued story on my Discord server, I’ll be happy to post it there for you.
And if you ever lose any of them, i have a full archive of all illustrated works, including alternate versions, and artists…..which i keep backed-up.. i’m really anal about data preservation, lol.
Good to know 🙂 Thanks.
Oh cool is there a way to get the alternate versions?
If that is okay with @Rawls?
You can ask around on my Discord server. Someone might have saved them and be willing to share.
I’m curious what kind of awesome discontinued Illustrated stories might be out there. Would love to see them….
It looks like another home run for Lexx. Great first chapter illustration.
Wasn’t it illustrated before?
Yes, the illustrator couldn’t continue past chapter 1, so this is a reboot.