Beware of mysterious shops curated by strange men wearing wizard hats. If you find a ring in such a place, don’t let your mother put it on.
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4.9 out of 5 dark stones (based on 171 reviews)
Well Evan is starting to understand the ring. Seems like Ava may understand it too , but does she know the power runs thur Evan .Moms ass is great but Ava’s will be better.
The best !
I find it really interesting how many of my readers get upset when things go wrong for the protagonist. It’s a compliment that I’ve written characters you care about. This is when having to publish in an episodic way is a disadvantage. It would be better if the reader could keep reading right through the stress of betrayal to find out how it resolves. Don’t worry, there will be a happy ending.
Ava has been perfectly despicable from the start & seeing her sully the love story, getting the better of our couple is uncomfortable. Well done though & I believe the bow is being drawn for perfect bullseye!
Thank you for the comment! I hope the ending is indeed satisfying!
I believe that it is a good villain that makes a good story, not the hero. Heroes react to what the villain does. So a well written villain makes the hero. A badly written one is boring and makes for a bad story. I like that Ava has her own motives and is not just a sex doll for the hero to fuck. It adds additional complexity and challenge to the story.
I appreciate the comment. 🙂 Ava is a wily villain! Like villains in most of my stories, she’ll lose in the end.
Man, it’s so disappointing the direction this story is going. Chapter 18-22 were peak, but this? This is such a complete downgrade in comparison. And the chapter started off so well too. I’m so disappointed in the writing of Evan, dude has absolutely zero spine whatsoever, even in a situation where he’s completely in the right. And Mom went from caring & seemingly loving her son, to being this young girl’s lapdog (literally), and he does absolutely nothing but watch it?? Yeah, really disappointed as a fan of this story.
Damnn this chapter is 🔥 🔥…but I agree Evan shouldn’t be cucked any further. Now this is Evan‘s big moment to go in and take charge. He’s been kinda at the mercy of his mom and Ava so far. This is his opportunity use this scenario to his benefit, take charge and go in and fuck both of them…in all 3 of their holes! Evan deserves his mom’s ass not Ava!
Might be a good time for the shopkeeper to show up w/ some help?
I feel like this chapter was the first big miss, imo. Cucking isn’t for everyone and I’m definitely one of em
Though it isnt even just about that. Both of the girls do such shitty things in this chapter that just make them seem like terrible people. They both acknowledge what they’re doing is hurting the MC but then do what they want anyway, and there’s no way back from that. One tried apologizing then went and did the exact thing she was ‘sorry’ for, again. And we’re supposed to want MC to bang them? Shit, get them as far outta my life as possible
This is great Evan just needs to go back in and fuck the shit out of Ava
You are out doing yourself
Mission accomplished in chapter 25! Glad all that cum went to good use
Hopefully the sisters next ?
Dammnnnnnnnnnnn. This was a fire chapter! Love the relationship between Evan and his mom
Well now we know why Evan can’t ask Ava to the prom Moms jealous guess she likes the blue hair Evan should stop get up and tell her to call Ava for a come to Jesus meeting.
Wow! I must say, I was really anticipating and getting slightly antsy about an eventual pregnancy announcement from Evan’s Mom. However, I’m also floored by this reveal that she’s been seeing Ava on the side, the girl she claimed not to like and admonished Evan for expressing interest in. Though it might ruin the mood, I really hope Evan calls her out on this obvious hypocrisy and doesn’t just give her a pass for it. Really looking forward to the next release.
Great story. Many questions still to be answered. Where is the ring now? What does Mrs Anelar do when no one is wearing the ring?
Looks like it time for Evam to take control and tell the truth come clean with Ava and tell her the rings purpose Break it off with mom ,dads getting wise and my find out on his own
Why is “this story” (The Missus Ring) right now the only one you have worth reading… I enjoyed reading the “Mothership Wilderness” & “There’s Something in the Water”, especially the artwork done by Redoxa… I miss those type of stories…
Worth reading to you. And only you have the answer to your question. I enjoy all the stories I have going right now 🙂 There are over 2,600 paying members on this site, and many of them have different tastes. If you don’t like my writing, it maybe that the membership isn’t worth it to you. There’s nothing wrong with that.
Yes to anal!! Great chapter!
The best!
I need more of this story. There are too many unanswered questions.
Yeeeeeeeee. What another great chapter. I love the relationship between Amy and Evan so much in this story. And very nice that Amy is taking risky creampies on the daily now!
Any idea when the next update for this?
You can always check Discord to see that sort of thing. I just sent the latest chapter to the proofreaders.
The invite takes you to the app store
You can sign up for Discord without the app on a desktop, but I think the Discord app is the only way to check it out on mobile.
Great story. I hope the whole thing gets on smashwords at some point. I like a conclusion when I read.
I appreciate the positive feedback. Yes, all my stories go up on Smashwords when they’re done.
Living the turn around after the ring was no longer needed for the Mrs. Kinda hoping that Ava and her boyfriend become enough of a problem/our MC and Co. can’t come up with a good enough solution that they need one more item from the magic shop. Perhaps a lacey old school choker that would fit in with a maid outfit meant to make the wearer listen to what they say and alter them into more of what the owner or person who put it on them wants/needs. Could lead to some interesting bodily changes to Gavin (soon to be Gracie?) After Ava would share the high.
I really hope you have a very, very long term plan for this story. Best and hottest mom animations and scenes by far! Keep it up!
Glad you’re enjoying it! It is winding to a close, but there are bunch more chapters yet to come.
I hope at least 30 chapters!! 😉
It’s possible. It all depends on how difficult Ava intends to be 🙂
This is the best story!
Any chance Lily Green is vacationing at the same hotel?
Seventeen chapters in and this story has become one of my favorites. It’s number two behind only Enki’s at the moment, I’m excited to see where it goes. Great stuff!
Let’s hope the ring has lost it’s power and Ava does not get the high she wanted 🙂
Or that it’s power does something else to a dastardly thief? I’d bet the old shopkeeper has something in mind for Ava.
Thanks for additional chapter – Each one gets better and better ! Can’t wait for the next.
Love how over breakfast she wisely advised him to never put his ‘ahem’ in crazy but by that very evening he had two arguably crazed women ready to go. Pretty much how that goes in life.
Such is life! 🙂
fuck yea! what a good chapter. I gotta say I am really loving this story. I know its one of the shorter, not main, story lines, but it’s fucking mint! Blowing Evan in front of that couple on the trail and admitting she is his mom… Damn, you know Evan’s mom, not the wife lady, is gonna secretly be super into it.
I really do Love the way this story is progressing. I also really like how its almost exclusively focused on the mom. I hope she gives Evan many gorilla babies!
Thanks for the great story!
This story is great! You should add chapters at least twice a month.
Fortunately, Lexx is consistently fast so we should continue to have chapters about once a month.
more of this please!
Great chapter!
Hey, in Chapter 7, there’s a reference to an Ava & a Gavin Roslin — I’m assuming these are references to another story of yours? If so: mind cluing me in? I searched the site a bit & couldn’t find anything.
Ava Roslin is a character that has been referenced several times in this story, but we see her for the first time in Chapter 7. Gavin is not a Roslin, he’s her boyfriend, and he’s been referenced before in this story, too. Chapter 7 is also the first time we see him in person. They aren’t in any other stories.
Nice ending to Ch. 8. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Let’s hope for running out of condoms and then the magic happens
Another great story! I really like the illustrations by Lexx228.
hey! love your stories so far! i kinda like to binge read and was wondering how many chapters you think are gonna be in this story?
Thanks for the feedback! I’m not sure, I think this story could go for a while. The good news is that we should get a chapter a month, so it should move right along.
Great story! !!
Please provide new chapters soon.
Thanks! We should get a new chapter every month.
More of this please. The story, the illustrator. Top notch.
We’re working on it 🙂
Great story so far.
Thank you!
Love this story!
Good story !