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I really liked this story up until the mom’s affair with Ava. And it’s not that I don’t like it now because she betrayed him — it’s because the resolution felt so empty. The betrayal was a strong addition that added drama and kept the reader engaged. But the way it was resolved, especially after all the buildup, felt like such a waste.
The mom spent weeks making him feel terrible while secretly betraying him and making him think it was all his fault. And when he finally confronts her, it’s basically resolved with a spanking. I didn’t believe her remorse at all. That kind of betrayal should have long-lasting effects and shouldn’t just be wrapped up in a single chapter (even though we do see him questioning her truthfulness later on, and she has to reassure him she isn’t lying). And the fact that he just instantly forgives her feels off.
Anyway, just my two cents. The betrayal itself could have been a good addition if it had been handled better
Pardon my long diatribe but I thought it might as well be said. After coming back to the Missus Ring, I’m reminded of the phrase “as wide as an ocean and as deep as a puddle”. Several promising plot points, themes, and characterizations are introduced and nearly all of them lack depth. A prominent example would be Evan taking pity of Ava. The notion that Ava is pitiable is conveyed, but the depth of that pity isn’t. Ava isn’t pitiable because she is sad and having a bad time, she’s pitiable because she is an awful human being. She isn’t pitiable because what’s happening to her in issue 32, she’s pitiable for who she is in issue 30. Ava is an awful person, and because of that no one will ever love her, and being loved is what Amy wants most in the world. She was neglected by her parents growing up, and compensates for the lack of love by being a sex addict. When she puts on the ring, for the first time in her life she feels with absolute certainty that she is loved, and desperately desires the ring to make her feel that way again. Ava was so desperate to have the ring that she was willing to abuse Amy to get her hands on it. That’s why she is pitiable; she is an awful human being who is desperate for love who hurts others around her, and as a result no one will ever love her. Rawls makes jokes comparing Ava to Gollum but it isn’t a joke. Ava is literally figurately Gollum. The whole point of Gollum is that Bilbo doesn’t kill him because he felt pity for him. Evan and Amy forgive Ava despite what Ava inflicted upon them because they pity her. Ava is a pathetic creature, and that is the point. Ava is pitiable for who she is, not because she has a frowny face.
Very beautiful story, masterfully told. I felt a sense of melancholy over the last few chapters.
Thank you for the kind words!
Please don’t wait to long
Beautiful ending to an amazing story. It and Enki’s Puzzle are far & away the two best stories you’ve produced so far. Bravo!!
I really appreciate the feedback! Thanks for reading 🙂
100% agree! They are my two favorites as well. I wish they could go on forever, but they were as neatly drawn to a close as possible I suppose. I think I give Enki’s just the slightest of nod above the Ring, but these will forever be a couple of my favorite stories. Masterpiece Smut for sure! Amazing art too on each, so kudos to the artists!
I loved that she kept the truth ring at the end, very nice touch and fit her character perfectly.
Sad Christmas the best story ends. I hope you will revisit Ava and Evan, Maybe at winter break or when Ava has there first child . This story is the reason I subscribed
The story arcs are complete. I don’t expect to revisit these characters. But you never know.
Yea the ring really worked I think the Truth and Happiness will stay until Evan replaces it with another one. Golden!
The best!!
As always great work 🔥 Favorite story by far! Sad to see it’s ending though. Hopefully we get to see a hot threesome with Evan, his mom, and Ava before it ends. If it’s gotta end…End it with a bang! 😉
Thanks! We’ll see how it ends soon 🙂
This story. Damn. You have done another banger, kudos. Was so not expecting to like this one as much as I do.
Thanks!
Looks like Evan is falling for Ava pretty hard . Ava is still not sure what she feels but shes coming around. Mom is even starting to accept the Evan and Ava thing even bringing the girlfriend word. Very interesting indeed
I love Ava’s development, could become genuine
I don’t know why Evan keeps blaming Ava for the family troubles . Mom / wife woman started everything ,with Evan and Also Ava. Maybe we need to know more about the mom Ava affair . We heard how it started and we saw the end Mom /WW must have wanted it until Evan found out and it took Mon/WW giving up har ass to get Evan back.. How does Evan have a 10 year crush on Ava and not kiss her on his prom night
Sorry to hear that this story is ending. Hope Evan gets the girl
Ava and Evan in the store this is getting good
So has Amy not told hubby about the baby? He asked her to grab a beer.
I guess she hasn’t told him yet 🙂
Well in her defense, she has been busy!
Her plate is full!
Crap Ava gone again ,shes what makes this worth reading . Without Ava its just Evan and mom fucking BORING
About ‘DAMN’ time Ava got sent to the shopkeeper, hope the results are good… or worse…!!
Surely he knows she’s coming to see him. He’ll have something appropriate picked for her I’d bet
Great Evans comments got Ava thinking and she has figured it out on her own .Lets see how mom handles this news. Remember they are both the wife woman
The best!!!
Sorry my mistake
No worries 🙂
This sucks Ava can’t be out of the story see was what worth looking forward to.Mom and Evan just having sex is boring.What about the ring won’t we see its promise come true. How can Evan not be in love or have a crush on Ava after just one day.
Who said Ava was out of the story? 🙂
Rereading the story and comments again I find that Amy and Ava are the same person with a 20 yr age difference Ava blue hair wild and crazy, Amy purple haired wild and crazy. There are 2 Amys the loving wife and mother (good mom) the other the wife women mom (bad mom). Bad mom does what ever see wants to get her way, controls Evam with sex She lies cheats steals hurts to get her orgsam so who is the real viliain Ava or Amy?
The ring is making Amy more like Ava, but Amy was not like that before the ring.
Well Evan is starting to understand the ring. Seems like Ava may understand it too , but does she know the power runs thur Evan .Moms ass is great but Ava’s will be better.
The best !
I find it really interesting how many of my readers get upset when things go wrong for the protagonist. It’s a compliment that I’ve written characters you care about. This is when having to publish in an episodic way is a disadvantage. It would be better if the reader could keep reading right through the stress of betrayal to find out how it resolves. Don’t worry, there will be a happy ending.
Ava has been perfectly despicable from the start & seeing her sully the love story, getting the better of our couple is uncomfortable. Well done though & I believe the bow is being drawn for perfect bullseye!
Thank you for the comment! I hope the ending is indeed satisfying!
I believe that it is a good villain that makes a good story, not the hero. Heroes react to what the villain does. So a well written villain makes the hero. A badly written one is boring and makes for a bad story. I like that Ava has her own motives and is not just a sex doll for the hero to fuck. It adds additional complexity and challenge to the story.
I appreciate the comment. 🙂 Ava is a wily villain! Like villains in most of my stories, she’ll lose in the end.
Man, it’s so disappointing the direction this story is going. Chapter 18-22 were peak, but this? This is such a complete downgrade in comparison. And the chapter started off so well too. I’m so disappointed in the writing of Evan, dude has absolutely zero spine whatsoever, even in a situation where he’s completely in the right. And Mom went from caring & seemingly loving her son, to being this young girl’s lapdog (literally), and he does absolutely nothing but watch it?? Yeah, really disappointed as a fan of this story.
Damnn this chapter is 🔥 🔥…but I agree Evan shouldn’t be cucked any further. Now this is Evan‘s big moment to go in and take charge. He’s been kinda at the mercy of his mom and Ava so far. This is his opportunity use this scenario to his benefit, take charge and go in and fuck both of them…in all 3 of their holes! Evan deserves his mom’s ass not Ava!
Might be a good time for the shopkeeper to show up w/ some help?
I feel like this chapter was the first big miss, imo. Cucking isn’t for everyone and I’m definitely one of em
Though it isnt even just about that. Both of the girls do such shitty things in this chapter that just make them seem like terrible people. They both acknowledge what they’re doing is hurting the MC but then do what they want anyway, and there’s no way back from that. One tried apologizing then went and did the exact thing she was ‘sorry’ for, again. And we’re supposed to want MC to bang them? Shit, get them as far outta my life as possible
This is great Evan just needs to go back in and fuck the shit out of Ava
You are out doing yourself
Mission accomplished in chapter 25! Glad all that cum went to good use
Hopefully the sisters next ?
Dammnnnnnnnnnnn. This was a fire chapter! Love the relationship between Evan and his mom
Well now we know why Evan can’t ask Ava to the prom Moms jealous guess she likes the blue hair Evan should stop get up and tell her to call Ava for a come to Jesus meeting.
Wow! I must say, I was really anticipating and getting slightly antsy about an eventual pregnancy announcement from Evan’s Mom. However, I’m also floored by this reveal that she’s been seeing Ava on the side, the girl she claimed not to like and admonished Evan for expressing interest in. Though it might ruin the mood, I really hope Evan calls her out on this obvious hypocrisy and doesn’t just give her a pass for it. Really looking forward to the next release.
Great story. Many questions still to be answered. Where is the ring now? What does Mrs Anelar do when no one is wearing the ring?
Looks like it time for Evam to take control and tell the truth come clean with Ava and tell her the rings purpose Break it off with mom ,dads getting wise and my find out on his own
Why is “this story” (The Missus Ring) right now the only one you have worth reading… I enjoyed reading the “Mothership Wilderness” & “There’s Something in the Water”, especially the artwork done by Redoxa… I miss those type of stories…
Worth reading to you. And only you have the answer to your question. I enjoy all the stories I have going right now 🙂 There are over 2,600 paying members on this site, and many of them have different tastes. If you don’t like my writing, it maybe that the membership isn’t worth it to you. There’s nothing wrong with that.
Yes to anal!! Great chapter!
The best!
I need more of this story. There are too many unanswered questions.
Yeeeeeeeee. What another great chapter. I love the relationship between Amy and Evan so much in this story. And very nice that Amy is taking risky creampies on the daily now!
Any idea when the next update for this?
You can always check Discord to see that sort of thing. I just sent the latest chapter to the proofreaders.
The invite takes you to the app store
You can sign up for Discord without the app on a desktop, but I think the Discord app is the only way to check it out on mobile.
Great story. I hope the whole thing gets on smashwords at some point. I like a conclusion when I read.
I appreciate the positive feedback. Yes, all my stories go up on Smashwords when they’re done.
Living the turn around after the ring was no longer needed for the Mrs. Kinda hoping that Ava and her boyfriend become enough of a problem/our MC and Co. can’t come up with a good enough solution that they need one more item from the magic shop. Perhaps a lacey old school choker that would fit in with a maid outfit meant to make the wearer listen to what they say and alter them into more of what the owner or person who put it on them wants/needs. Could lead to some interesting bodily changes to Gavin (soon to be Gracie?) After Ava would share the high.
I really hope you have a very, very long term plan for this story. Best and hottest mom animations and scenes by far! Keep it up!
Glad you’re enjoying it! It is winding to a close, but there are bunch more chapters yet to come.
I hope at least 30 chapters!! 😉
It’s possible. It all depends on how difficult Ava intends to be 🙂
This is the best story!
Any chance Lily Green is vacationing at the same hotel?
Seventeen chapters in and this story has become one of my favorites. It’s number two behind only Enki’s at the moment, I’m excited to see where it goes. Great stuff!
Let’s hope the ring has lost it’s power and Ava does not get the high she wanted 🙂
Or that it’s power does something else to a dastardly thief? I’d bet the old shopkeeper has something in mind for Ava.
Thanks for additional chapter – Each one gets better and better ! Can’t wait for the next.
Love how over breakfast she wisely advised him to never put his ‘ahem’ in crazy but by that very evening he had two arguably crazed women ready to go. Pretty much how that goes in life.
Such is life! 🙂
fuck yea! what a good chapter. I gotta say I am really loving this story. I know its one of the shorter, not main, story lines, but it’s fucking mint! Blowing Evan in front of that couple on the trail and admitting she is his mom… Damn, you know Evan’s mom, not the wife lady, is gonna secretly be super into it.
I really do Love the way this story is progressing. I also really like how its almost exclusively focused on the mom. I hope she gives Evan many gorilla babies!
Thanks for the great story!
This story is great! You should add chapters at least twice a month.
Fortunately, Lexx is consistently fast so we should continue to have chapters about once a month.
more of this please!
Great chapter!
Hey, in Chapter 7, there’s a reference to an Ava & a Gavin Roslin — I’m assuming these are references to another story of yours? If so: mind cluing me in? I searched the site a bit & couldn’t find anything.
Ava Roslin is a character that has been referenced several times in this story, but we see her for the first time in Chapter 7. Gavin is not a Roslin, he’s her boyfriend, and he’s been referenced before in this story, too. Chapter 7 is also the first time we see him in person. They aren’t in any other stories.
Nice ending to Ch. 8. Can’t wait for the next chapter! Let’s hope for running out of condoms and then the magic happens
Another great story! I really like the illustrations by Lexx228.
hey! love your stories so far! i kinda like to binge read and was wondering how many chapters you think are gonna be in this story?
Thanks for the feedback! I’m not sure, I think this story could go for a while. The good news is that we should get a chapter a month, so it should move right along.
Great story! !!
Please provide new chapters soon.
Thanks! We should get a new chapter every month.
More of this please. The story, the illustrator. Top notch.
We’re working on it 🙂
Great story so far.
Thank you!
Love this story!
Good story !