The Pleistocene Ring Ch. 1 to 10

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An eighteen-year-old inherits an ancient ring. Strange things begin to happen.

Illustrations by Disarten: https://subscribestar.adult/disarten

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  1. matty

    Why can‘t i read this story with pictures?

    1. Rawls

      You have the right membership level. You just need to click on the chapter you want to read and it will open the pdf. You can email me if you’re still having trouble. rawls@rawlyrawls.com

  2. Cluff77

    Chapter 10 seems like page 7 & 8 pictures are the wrong way round. She has her top of then on then off as well as bra. Minor thing , but this is a story I wait to see illustrated and it stands out to me.

  3. Mammatus28

    Instead of such works, focus on works such as Enki Puzzle Palmer Mansion. Dark Stone, a new one can be made. The guide can continue. People do not want to deal with such a tree-sized penis.

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the feedback. I understand that you do not like this story. But that is different than “people” not liking this story. Check out the ratings. The good news is that I work on many different kinds of stories, so that there is something for everyone 🙂

    2. Lu69ke

      I like the story very much and especially the artwork! So yes: there are definitely people out there that like dealing with a tree-sized penis.

  4. karmel2487

    we more chapters of this story !!!

  5. hd04

    Is there anymore chapters coming? It seems like this one is in limbo and I was really starting to like it 🙁

    1. Rawls

      I just posted the sketches for the next chapter a week or two ago. This artist takes many months between chapters, he always has. So it goes slower.

      1. Anteater

        It takes patience to really enjoy these stories.

  6. guymanguymanguy21@gmail.com

    disarten is top notch! great collaboration

  7. rtr9209

    Thanks for updating this one. Of all your current projects ‘The Pleistocene Ring’ is most likely my favorite. The combination of your writing and Disarten’s artwork is top notch!!

    1. Rawls

      Great to hear! Thanks for the feedback 🙂

  8. Alcorv

    This one needs more chapters, in General

    1. Rawls

      Disarten works on a lot of other projects, so the pace of this story is not all that fast.

  9. PuyBo

    the art in this gets better and better

  10. Cart93

    The penis has gotten to ridiculous proportions this chapter. Needs to be toned down a little. I mean it’s always been drawn cartoonish big but I think this one turned it up. But overall still enjoyable.

  11. Pkacua

    So with this update, does that mean Disarten’s hiatus from. The story is over?

    1. Rawls

      Yes, this project should move along at a good pace for the foreseeable future. Hopefully a chapter every month or two.

  12. jkljkl111

    Love this story hopefully updates more often?

    1. Rawls

      Probably not. Disarten is busy and this story runs on his schedule.

  13. Anteater

    Yes, chapter 5 is what I was waiting for. Quick question, are the speech bubbles REALLY necessary?

    1. Rawls

      Not necessary, but it’s how Disarten likes to do it, and I’ll defer to his choice.

    1. Rawls

      Distarten has taken some time away, but I’m hoping he’ll be back soon.

  14. Anteater

    I really love chapter 4. It looks like the djinn means business. I am looking forward to his mother finally surrendering.

  15. RedSarah

    I’m so curious about the ring’s history, was created, why the mom & aunt aren’t telling the whole story. It seems like he got the ring because his rich uncle knocked up his mom. None of the aunt’s kids are from the rich uncle. Was the uncle rich because he did what the djinn told him to do? I’m looking forward to the rest of the story.

  16. tyreu

    Is there any chance of mother son incest marriage in this story?

  17. John P

    Disarten, really hope you not only continue this project but take on some more. Love your beautiful long-legged large-breasted MILFs.

  18. Anteater

    Billy is not the only 1 looking forward to his fucking Pam.

  19. xpoolhalljunkie

    I love this story too! Your site is worth every penny 🙂 *drool*

  20. rtr9209

    Great story so far!! I really like Disarten’s artwork.

  21. rtr9209

    Great story so far! I really like Disarten’s art work.

  22. Anteater

    This story (I have read both 1 & 2) is going pretty good. I agree with ChromeDragon about the mother, especially in chapter 2. Although I did not see if she is enjoying the sex herself.

  23. plcwiz

    Not to be picky but where’s the ring on Billy in the last illustration? The story focus is on the ring and yet it’s missing? Aside from that, loved the Djinn unique appearance! Imagined a mean looking childlike character when I read the text but this is far better!!

    1. Rawls

      Good point! We’ll make sure to include the ring if there’s a chapter 3.

      1. plcwiz

        I’m sure there’ll be chapter 3! This is a great story!

  24. ChromeDragon

    Loving the art work !

    Finally getting to see the Djinn and seeing the mom in such a wonderfully seductive and seemingly caring role and less active poses is nice.
    I like magic and a bit of the supernatural in these incest stories as the impetus for such couplings and a Djinn is perfectly in keeping with this.

    Great work Rawly and Disarten.

    I like your take on the Djinn !

  25. ChromeDragon

    I liked this since it presents this weird mystery that just left us hanging.
    I too think this story deserves more exploration.
    The artwork handled this story adequately I think trying perhaps to imitate an Archie comics style ? I liked the fact the mother knew what was going on but didn’t really explain it fully. Why he didn’t ask more of her we the audience want to strangle him for.

  26. Imnotworthy

    Great start, I hope there’s more to come