An eighteen-year-old inherits an ancient ring. Strange things begin to happen.
Illustrations by Disarten: https://boosty.to/dis_or_10
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4.9 out of 5 dark stones (based on 123 reviews)
Is there anymore chapters coming? It seems like this one is in limbo and I was really starting to like it 🙁
I just posted the sketches for the next chapter a week or two ago. This artist takes many months between chapters, he always has. So it goes slower.
disarten is top notch! great collaboration
Thanks for updating this one. Of all your current projects ‘The Pleistocene Ring’ is most likely my favorite. The combination of your writing and Disarten’s artwork is top notch!!
Great to hear! Thanks for the feedback 🙂
This one needs more chapters, in General
Disarten works on a lot of other projects, so the pace of this story is not all that fast.
the art in this gets better and better
The penis has gotten to ridiculous proportions this chapter. Needs to be toned down a little. I mean it’s always been drawn cartoonish big but I think this one turned it up. But overall still enjoyable.
So with this update, does that mean Disarten’s hiatus from. The story is over?
Yes, this project should move along at a good pace for the foreseeable future. Hopefully a chapter every month or two.
Love this story hopefully updates more often?
Probably not. Disarten is busy and this story runs on his schedule.
Yes, chapter 5 is what I was waiting for. Quick question, are the speech bubbles REALLY necessary?
Not necessary, but it’s how Disarten likes to do it, and I’ll defer to his choice.
Loved this, hope to see more.
Distarten has taken some time away, but I’m hoping he’ll be back soon.
Understandable.
I really love chapter 4. It looks like the djinn means business. I am looking forward to his mother finally surrendering.
I’m so curious about the ring’s history, was created, why the mom & aunt aren’t telling the whole story. It seems like he got the ring because his rich uncle knocked up his mom. None of the aunt’s kids are from the rich uncle. Was the uncle rich because he did what the djinn told him to do? I’m looking forward to the rest of the story.
Is there any chance of mother son incest marriage in this story?
Not all that likely.
Disarten, really hope you not only continue this project but take on some more. Love your beautiful long-legged large-breasted MILFs.
Billy is not the only 1 looking forward to his fucking Pam.
I love this story too! Your site is worth every penny 🙂 *drool*
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Great story so far!! I really like Disarten’s artwork.
Great story so far! I really like Disarten’s art work.
This story (I have read both 1 & 2) is going pretty good. I agree with ChromeDragon about the mother, especially in chapter 2. Although I did not see if she is enjoying the sex herself.
Not to be picky but where’s the ring on Billy in the last illustration? The story focus is on the ring and yet it’s missing? Aside from that, loved the Djinn unique appearance! Imagined a mean looking childlike character when I read the text but this is far better!!
Good point! We’ll make sure to include the ring if there’s a chapter 3.
I’m sure there’ll be chapter 3! This is a great story!
Loving the art work !
Finally getting to see the Djinn and seeing the mom in such a wonderfully seductive and seemingly caring role and less active poses is nice.
I like magic and a bit of the supernatural in these incest stories as the impetus for such couplings and a Djinn is perfectly in keeping with this.
Great work Rawly and Disarten.
I like your take on the Djinn !
Great feedback. Thanks!
I liked this since it presents this weird mystery that just left us hanging.
I too think this story deserves more exploration.
The artwork handled this story adequately I think trying perhaps to imitate an Archie comics style ? I liked the fact the mother knew what was going on but didn’t really explain it fully. Why he didn’t ask more of her we the audience want to strangle him for.
Great start, I hope there’s more to come