The Trouble with Entrabide Ch. 1 to 6

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The Greeves family agree to a year-long study on the effects of a new drug, Entrabide. The family are moved into a large house and monitored twenty-four hours a day to see how they’ll respond to the miracle fitness pharmaceutical. Things do not go as planned.

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  1. Hellofacritic

    Okay, so for the positive:
    Mitzz’s art is on point here. Until Chapter 4 (included), Chastity and Sabrina’s transformation was great. The right balance of fit and voluptuous.
    Big negative is that it takes a turn for the worse starting Chapter 5. We cross into steroid user look which really isn’t sexy or feminine. Another downside is sadly the inclusion of futa which is getting too prevalent. I just don’t find turning women into men sexy and never will. You can make a story about that only, I’d be glad to ignore it. But here it just taints and damages the story I care about and want to follow (that of Seth and his women turning into peak sexual specimens of their respective sexes).
    I like the fact that Seth does get more muscular, and imposing. It’s a nice change from the child looking teen with a giant dick look which I often found incongruous. Here all of him is getting bigger and manlier and I wish it happened in more stories (The Mothership Wilderness rebooted comic, maybe?)

  2. cmj15301

    Wow, chapter 6 was way too short. This story has potential…I can’t say I’m a fan of having the sexiest scenes illustrated on those monitors with low n crappy detail that you can hardly see…

    1. Rawls

      All the short story chapters are a minimum of 2,000 words. All about the same length.

    2. cmj15301

      Sister with the big dick is super hot….are you brave enough to write a chapter where she makes dad suck it?

  3. olive881

    Hi

    I love this series. When can we expect the episode 6 illustrated to be released?

    Thank you.

  4. rayburger

    Muscle growth on the mom feels a bit out of place in Chapter 5. It makes sense for the story, but I wish the mom’s expansion focused on her tits and ass

    1. Hellofacritic

      Agreed. I like beautification and too big muscles on a woman will look out of place and certainly won’t achieve that. You risk making her look like a bodybuilder on steroids (which are derived from male hormones).

  5. Italian10inch

    My favorite story. Wish it was a novel. Love these graphics.

  6. Shoddinator

    This is starting to become one of my favorites of yours! I’m excited to see how the daughters progress and who they may link with. Perhaps together👀

  7. Thickdick

    Still trying to get over the revulsion of a clit growing that big. I like when you make dick-women but seeing the process is a bit odd. Nevertheless I really enjoy this story, and I’m sure when she has a full on dick I’ll be much more interested. Amazing as always!

  8. horahloux

    love it! perfect slow roll as ever, make him fuck Dr Ramirez 🙂

  9. Italian10inch

    This wish this was a full length story..

  10. bosterito959

    looks promising; let’s see how it develop

  11. crazydorian

    Early days for this one, since only 1 chapter out, but it seems promising, and Mitzz’s art seems to fit very well. Looking forward to more 🙂

  12. Anteater

    I cannot give a good review until I read a few more chapters. I would like to make a comment though; the thingie that looks kinda like a face that, I am assuming is placed there to separate the scenes or something, is VERY distracting.