The Greeves family agree to a year-long study on the effects of a new drug, Entrabide. The family are moved into a large house and monitored twenty-four hours a day to see how they’ll respond to the miracle fitness pharmaceutical. Things do not go as planned.
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TEN DAYS of no new updates on ANY stories. Yikes.
You’re talking about illustrated stories? I don’t set deadlines for illustrators, so sometimes the stories will pile up in groups of days. For instance, earlier in the month, I published 8 illustrated stories in 10 days time. And now it’s been a while, it’s up to the illustrators’ schedules.
I’m patient.
*fifteen
Can’t wait for the next chapters feels like thing just got good
Is this the closing chapter?
No, but it is wrapping up.
I think its time for Seth to experience the women with the Clit/Penis women
It seems like the family needs to come together in their reformed manner. The husband is a eunuch and needs to accept his place as such. It is possible for the family and Rebeca to take over the facility and give all the techs and staff the drug
I got to ask why do some of the women get the clit penis & some don’t get it?
Is it because they didn’t find a mate in time ?
The drug effects different people differently. This is why the company wanted to test it out on a family, to see how it would play out.
Cant wait for the sisters to bump into Seth & for him to take them upstairs to be his women
Chapter 9 was hot, here’s hoping Chapter 10 gets hotter.
I like the thick muscular look, was hoping the mom and sis would still keep getting fitter and bigger
I appreciate the feedback. Going forward Mitzz is going to tone down the muscles a little in the women, but they’ll still be beyond ripped.
I like both versions of chapter seven. Excellent stuff!
Why are there 2 chapter 7s? What did I miss?
Sorry, I see the reason why.
For me, I actually find the big muscles sexy af. Having mom stronger than dad….
Every person has their own kinks. Unlike other commenter
I do find the futa hot…though I think that you approach the topic in a very…hmmm…conservative…low key? Approach anyway. For example, having melody self suck would have been hot…many futa series at least start there…
Yikes – mom is way too ripped to be hot. Needs to be taken back a notch or two.
I do actually agree with this sentiment though. I understand she’s getting more toned but it’s looking more and more like a man’s toned body rather than a woman’s and it turned me off a bit
Your futa stuff always drives me into confusion…. but god your writing always convinces me that it’s hot. Still really enjoying this and love the art. Although I’m pumped for Seth to start delving into his mom, and sister. I’m more excited for Sabrina to find more out about her sister
Okay, so for the positive:
Mitzz’s art is on point here. Until Chapter 4 (included), Chastity and Sabrina’s transformation was great. The right balance of fit and voluptuous.
Big negative is that it takes a turn for the worse starting Chapter 5. We cross into steroid user look which really isn’t sexy or feminine. Another downside is sadly the inclusion of futa which is getting too prevalent. I just don’t find turning women into men sexy and never will. You can make a story about that only, I’d be glad to ignore it. But here it just taints and damages the story I care about and want to follow (that of Seth and his women turning into peak sexual specimens of their respective sexes).
I like the fact that Seth does get more muscular, and imposing. It’s a nice change from the child looking teen with a giant dick look which I often found incongruous. Here all of him is getting bigger and manlier and I wish it happened in more stories (The Mothership Wilderness rebooted comic, maybe?)
Wow, chapter 6 was way too short. This story has potential…I can’t say I’m a fan of having the sexiest scenes illustrated on those monitors with low n crappy detail that you can hardly see…
All the short story chapters are a minimum of 2,000 words. All about the same length.
Always craving more…
Sister with the big dick is super hot….are you brave enough to write a chapter where she makes dad suck it?
Hi
I love this series. When can we expect the episode 6 illustrated to be released?
Thank you.
Muscle growth on the mom feels a bit out of place in Chapter 5. It makes sense for the story, but I wish the mom’s expansion focused on her tits and ass
Agreed. I like beautification and too big muscles on a woman will look out of place and certainly won’t achieve that. You risk making her look like a bodybuilder on steroids (which are derived from male hormones).
My favorite story. Wish it was a novel. Love these graphics.
This is starting to become one of my favorites of yours! I’m excited to see how the daughters progress and who they may link with. Perhaps together👀
Why are there 2 chapter 7s? What did I miss?
Holy fuck this just heated up !
Still trying to get over the revulsion of a clit growing that big. I like when you make dick-women but seeing the process is a bit odd. Nevertheless I really enjoy this story, and I’m sure when she has a full on dick I’ll be much more interested. Amazing as always!
love it! perfect slow roll as ever, make him fuck Dr Ramirez 🙂
This wish this was a full length story..
looks promising; let’s see how it develop
Early days for this one, since only 1 chapter out, but it seems promising, and Mitzz’s art seems to fit very well. Looking forward to more 🙂
I cannot give a good review until I read a few more chapters. I would like to make a comment though; the thingie that looks kinda like a face that, I am assuming is placed there to separate the scenes or something, is VERY distracting.
Hmm