The Trouble with Entrabide Ch. 1 to 6

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The Greeves family agree to a year-long study on the effects of a new drug, Entrabide. The family are moved into a large house and monitored twenty-four hours a day to see how they’ll respond to the miracle fitness pharmaceutical. Things do not go as planned.

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  1. Dogboy1313

    I’m kinda liking the “son turns caveman on mom” vibe. Looking forward to the next chapter

  2. Italian10inch

    Please don’t make us wait for the next installation and add pages.

    1. Rawls

      I write the shorts as quickly as the illustrators work on them.

  3. 7Myxzptlk

    Excellent progress on chapter 2. Now Seth just needs to gain some muscle he likes and we can get some fun results.

  4. Italian10inch

    Best story out there right now. Wish it was a full length story. Big thumbs up.

  5. JB9in

    When is the next chapter of this coming out? It’s been almost 2 months since you posted this first chapter.

    1. Rawls

      I write the shorts whenever the artist has completed the previous chapter. Mitzz tends to take two months or so per chapter. When I get the illustrations, I’ll write the next one.

  6. fukufukulee

    somehow have a serum XXX dejavu,and love it,will this be a long story?please make it one

    1. Rawls

      Only the main novels run long. This is one of the shorts. The shorts have shorter chapters and fewer chapters than the main novels, but still can go a while. Missus Ring is on Chapter 17 now for instance.

      1. fukufukulee

        Really believe this will going to be a enticing story tho,will be sad if can’t see more about it with more refined language and set of pace,I believe the poll had indicate the same vision with me

  7. Roan9999

    Great start looking forward to seeing where the story goes.

  8. jokester

    Hi RR,

    How do you decide how fast to release chapters for a series?

    1. Rawls

      For the main novel, I release a chapter every Friday. For the short stories, I work as fast as the illustrator. When the illustrations from the previous chapter are ready, I write the next chapter.