A dark stone enters a parallel world where magic once reigned supreme. An ancient sorceress secrets the magic of the stone into nineteen-year-old Vel Tullius. Magic creeps back into the world. Vel’s beloved sister falls under his spell. He must confront the power his new magic holds over the women around him, while dodging spies, assassins, and those set on hording all magic for themselves. Vel finds himself caught between his loving family, evil queens, and the very gods themselves.
If you have an opinion, please leave your feedback below. Your comments are helpful in navigating the course of future projects.
Illustrations by SatanicFruitcake: https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/satanicfruitcake
This content is limited to (Rawly Rawls Member Plus), (Rawly Rawls member Elite), & (Rawly Rawls Member Max). To view this content please upgrade your Membership Plan.
You must be logged in to submit a review.
4.6 out of 5 dark stones (based on 73 reviews)
I must say, you’re well suited to this form of story telling. The organic growth of the relationships and well paced continuation of interpersonal dynamics lets the erotic scenes shine more much clearly.
Compare to Mothership, where the first chapter “eyoo my brand new dick is soo massive that mommy wanna gargle my balls the second she lands eyes on ’em,” which ultimately feels unearned as the rest of the crew falls into the slobbering cock hungry Congo line. Now, this beat is why we’re here, but learning how the characters care about each other as they earn their desires lets the lust accumulate to higher heights. I think this was best showcased in Enki’s Puzzle
Characters that care about each other with their slow dissolution of inhibitions flows much better than “mom need cock. Oo that big cock. I shouldn’t. Nm need it. All well!”
The build up makes it all worth it! Great world building here.
Thank you for the feedback. I really enjoy these slower paced stories, but my readers are mixed on them. At the time I was writing Wicked Tower, I almost cut it off a dozen chapters early because I was getting so many complaints 🙂 The good news is that I write with a lot of variety in pacing, so hopefully there’s something for everyone.
Is it just me or does the picture at the end cut off oddly at the bottom?
I see what you mean, but that’s just how SF chose to frame that illustration.
fair enough
The Character Vel is a Momma’s boy & is now Momma’s Man. I Love It & the whole god/goddess aspect of the story hope its a long story like Enki
When I started reading that sentence, I thought this would be some criticism. Nice twist! I’m glad you’re enjoying it. The novel is fully written and you can read ahead in the text-only part of the site if you wish.
Criticism can be very helpful.
Brynhild is interesting woman; she is not evil, but it is hard to not trust her. She is definitely on their side but with her OWN agenda.
Another great comic to have a before and after, amazing
With 2D it would be too time consuming and expensive to work on before and after. We have to stick to the chapters themselves.
Do you know what a comic is? The adaptions of Pegasus (if they are not entirely accurate) are comics. This story, and the many others, are illustrated stories.
(Insert gif of Charles foster Kane clapping) Last chapter glorious. I hope sataniac get’s another story right after this because this is legendary. Great stuff guys.
Chapter 11 is great.
Make a spin-off of Enki’s Puzzle with Two Sons. MMF
Man, satanicfruitcake and owusyr(the enchanted scepter) are my favourite illustrators on this website. The way they draw milfs is just GAH DAYUM
Chap. 7 art is amazing!
Love chapter 7. It looks like Dellia really is enjoying herself.
I love chapter 8. What ever happened to Dellia, I wonder?
I love chapter 9. Dellia looks amazing and I love how she submitted to her master.
Can’t wait for the next chapters I love this story!
I like chapter 6; we finally get to see what the Queens look like.
Ah, chapter 5, exquisite. I love the interaction between Merope and Brunhylda. Monkey was both funny and cute!
Naevia is so plump and sexy drawn. Bravo Fruitcake! Your work enriches the seductive fantazies of Rawls so much.
Trying to imagine how Naevia will look pregnant ?
(งツ)ว
I LOVE chapter 4’s final illustration of Dellia.
I love chapter 3!
I love what is going on with Vel and his sister. It feels sweet and erotic at once.
The art just seems to get better every issue.
I like the art but I don’t think the women are drawn very attractively. Which is weird when the men are drawn as Greek gods.
already read a few chapters of text for this one, I love the buildup. The world building makes everything so real, and I love all the not-so-subtle references to roman culture, being a former ancient history nut myself XD.
Here to support my number 1 erotica novelist, right before I get some more money to dump on JDSeal sometime this year
Thanks for the kind words. Yes, that world is Earth in present day, but Magic meant their version of the Roman Empire persisted.
I could put gifs. I would be the one of Shia Labouf standing up and clapping. Love this pick for this story. I think someone said it already but it has a great medieval theme. The women in this, very nice. Can’t wait to see the rest of this. I don’t know how you pick them but keep up the great work.
Thanks so much. I think this is going to be something special.
Brilliant. You have a knack for finding the perfect artist for your stories. Looking forward now to see who you have to do the cover of Palmer Legacy!
Thanks! Although it wasn’t my choice, SF picked this one out of a few options. I agree that it’s a perfect fit.
Nice art! Less sister more mom.
This novel is already completely written. There is more sister in this one than most of my stories.
Lolol ok. I still like the rest of it.
😉
I read it is finished and immediately went for the text. I love this intrigue. Very curious about the Queens. Looking forward to reading it tonight!
Hope you have fun with it!
I like the art style. It fits the more medieval theme.