Enki’s Puzzle Chapter 11 is here.

Post author:Rawls
Post published:June 19, 2021

It starts on page 81. Nick and Alyson research the origins of the puzzle. Nick and Kate play hooky again.

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Simon S. June 21, 2021 Log in to Reply

Great chapter focusing on the internal conflict of the mother and sister.
1. Rawls June 21, 2021 Log in to Reply
  
  Thanks! That’s what I was going for. 🙂
adscrypt June 19, 2021 Log in to Reply

This chapter wasn’t very good. Not really reading it to see Nick do research with his sister or read about his mom going back to having sex with his dad.
1. adscrypt June 19, 2021 Log in to Reply
  
  Rest was good, though. And the story overall. Didn’t mean to sound overly critical but it just seemed like a weird detour.
  1. Rawls June 21, 2021 Log in to Reply
    
    I’m building some things for later, and sometimes that means taking little detours. Thanks for the feedback!

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It starts on page 81. Nick and Alyson research the origins of the puzzle. Nick and Kate play hooky again.

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