Enki’s Puzzle Ch. 1 to 33

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Eighteen-year-old Nick Dobson messes with a Sumerian puzzle. The lascivious god Enki traps him in the same, repeating day. The only way out is to solve the enigma of the puzzle. The solution keeps pushing him to get closer to his mother.

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  1. RighTwIth3not

    This is a perfect story of this genre – really well done

  2. DicchoHippo

    Loved the happy ending with this one. Guy ends up with impregnated Mom and Sister. Perfect.
    I know you generally don’t do sequels, but I’d love even a cameo in one of your stories where we get to see how some of your past protagonists are doing with their incestuous families (hopefully happily!)

  3. guymanguymanguy21@gmail.com

    The first 12 chapters of this made me a fan. Well done! Looking forward to continuing.

  4. Will

    This remains my favorite story. I would like a sequel like you did with Palmer Mansion. And I like the detail of the experience of the different partners when they are having sex. When you say a” world of sensation” it would interest me to know what kinds of sensation. Like when you were detailed about ” there were some things that Nick expected and some that surprised him. So my vote for a new story is to bring back Nick and Maggie and Enki

    1. Rawls

      I generally avoid sequels unless I can do something new with the characters. Palmer Legacy was an exception. Enki’s Puzzle ended well, and I don’t expect to pick it back up.

  5. DarkAngelJL

    So glad I finally joined to read the ending. I loved it from beginning to end.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for feedback! Glad to have you here ๐Ÿ™‚ Lots more to read …

  6. AfkasH

    So effing good, the wait and tease just made the ending so much more satisfying. *chefโ€™s hand kiss.

  7. Widnesian

    Please please do a part two to this erotic masterpiece, I would love to see some chapters focusing on the threesome sex between Kate, Nick and Allison.

    Bravo

    1. Rawls

      Glad you enjoyed it! I don’t really enjoy writing direct sequels, so I don’t think there will be another Enki novel. But you never know.

      1. Widnesian

        I think youโ€™ve got the level of character development and plot build spot on with this story making the scenarios much more believable.

        1. Rawls

          Thank you. That’s what I try for in my novels. That’s also why I don’t like sequels. The characters have already gone on their arcs. They’ve slayed their dragons (or been eaten by them). The journey is complete. Rather than come up with new arcs for them, I’d rather try something with new characters in new places.

      2. Badjuju

        Maybe we can find out where the cube ended up? But I am happy I stumbled upon this series. It has been very enjoyable to read and I really love the art.

        1. Rawls

          Thanks for the feedback. What happens to the cube is left to the reader’s imagination. ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. wt859

    This story is great! One of my favourites on here

    1. Rawls

      It’s fixed. If you’re still having problems, try clearing your cache before reloading the page.

  9. Math35

    I have a 404 error when i click on the links

    1. Rawls

      It’s fixed. If you’re still having problems, try clearing your cache before reloading the page.

  10. kabob83

    The textured file is for Palmer Legacy not Enki’s Puzzle.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for letting me know! It’s fixed now.

  11. Vance Lance

    I keep coming back to this story. I rarely revisit old material, but I do with this story, it was so intense and well written. I’d love to see some sort of continuation of the styles and themes you explored here.

    1. Rawls

      I think one of the reasons this is a popular story is how intimate it is. We spend a lot of time getting to know the characters and watching them change. I do plan my next novel to be more intimate, so we’ll see how that goes …

      1. Vance Lance

        Yeah, intimate sounds about right. I’m excited to see what your next story looks like then!
        Also, I hope you’re feeling better after your covid and stuff, I had a bout of that earlier this year and it messed me up so bad that I didn’t feel right for at least a month. So remember to be kind to yourself and allow your body to recover properly.

      2. Vance Lance

        Don’t know why that double posted, also just checked and realised that your update about covid was from freaking ages ago, so, sorry on the lateness about that! I haven’t checked my accounts for a while.

  12. rc888

    great story just finished reading it,loved the plotting and the creativity and the constant tension in the story, although the ending didnt seems so clear fo me as a reader ,the fact that the puzzle was stolen gave me a thinking maybe there is a going plot as such chris stole the puzzle and so on.

  13. numq

    Awesome story. Very well done. Hope you do maybe an epilogue with Maggie. Only parts I didn’t really like where the Fred and Chris sex scenes. Especially the one where she made him listen to her have sex with Fred in revenge. That was too far and she should have apologized for that. Apart from that really nice story. Although I do wonder if it’s really love or all just one big manipulation with the way things went. I mean he really did change, but then again he used his past experiences to always know what to say and sometimes straight up used guilt to get his way. Anyway, it was hot. Kudos

  14. Lobria

    Hey Rawls. So finally have time to comment about this story. I have to say loved it. I do have a few things but I’ll talk about that later and there most likely nothing since the tone and such but I ‘ll talk about that later. So the way you wrote the characters I thought was fantastic. You did a really good job with all of them. I like how you made this believable. The way they would react, especially Kate finding out about Enkie. That to me was a good reaction. I do wish there was a little more. Possibly questioning the whole thing. Is Nikki really honest with me or is he being corrupted. A little more of that but still good non the less. Also I love Alyson in this. Especially at the end that she ignores Chris. Very good character development. All of them especially Nikki. Kate was also good but I do think you could’ve shown more of her husband being a asshole before then to really hit home how awful he was. I know that he was later on but I’m saying in the early chapters. That would’ve been a little better but still good since you gave a motivation as to how this could happen. Also I forgot the gilrs name that Nikki was talking to. I was gonna say beforehand that she felt kinda unnecessary since you barely bring her up and at the end I’m like why is she back and why she disappeared. Until you wrote that she had forgotten so I was like. Oh yeah. Right. I still wish she was more relvant to the plot but I get it why not.
    The sex scenes fantastic. Love them like always. But a few things. I wish you did more with the mom and sister. I know that the pov is on Nikki but you did have them suck on each other breast so I wish you had a scene with just the two of them togther. Also we finally have Kate involved now and we only one last chapter with Nikki fucking her in the pussy. I wish there was one other chapter so we could have more with the two of them doing that. Been a long tease and just one chapter. granted it was hot and the one before that but I wanted a little more. Also we also finally get a threesome and just briefly. That also felt kinda of a let down. I wanted more with three of them.

    But in all honestly you did a great job with this. I do think I wanted some more at the end with the mom and sister. But the way you ended was great. I have to say the best ending to your stories ever. Honestly. It felt sweet. Kind and him talking to that one chick at the end felt so sweet. Great job like always Rawls. I look forward to more like always. Take care.

    1. Rawls

      Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the detailed feedback!

  15. 7Myxzptlk

    After reading the end, I love how the story is finished.
    Hoping there’s an epilogue mini-series about Maggie marrying Nick and having kids with him too.
    Maybe Nick’s daughters ride daddy 18-21 years later? Just a suggesstions.

  16. Planet4

    After reading the finale, I wish I could post gifs. I would paste in every “chef’s kiss” loop I could find.

    The character arcs of all three of the mains were steeped in authenticity. Which may be weird to say about a magical realism incest story, but no less true. It was obvious your vision of who Nick, Kate, and Alyson were as people was firmly established in your mind throughout the novel. That clarity shone through from beginning to end.

    The image in my head of Nick, especially, was sharp from the start and grew along with the character. My mind’s eye saw him walking, talking, and holding himself much differently as he progressed.

    I said it in the Palmer Legacy comments but I’ll say it again: You’re a word wizard. Keep it up, please.

    1. Planet4

      Oh, and thanks for Maggie! I was bereft when she was clipped by Enki (another signal that I was invested in the story).

      Also, I am glad you’re not thinking sequel. I believe it would diminish what you accomplished here.

      (Jeebus… I came looking for stroke material and now I’ve written more pseudo-intellectual reviews of your work than almost any other author. WIZARD!)

    2. Rawls

      I’m inspired by the feedback! So happy that what I create is appreciated. ๐Ÿ™‚

  17. Anders

    โ€œYou are not the first mother to favor my gifts with rage. You
    wonโ€™t be the last. My work here is done.โ€
    I have my hopes that there will be a second story.

    1. Rawls

      Sorry, no plans for a sequel. I like end novels in a way that invites the reader to imagine what comes afterward.

      1. RighTwIth3not

        It would be interesting to explore Maggie’s journey, where it coincides with Nicks.
        All from her perspective, then a further journey trying to regain her lost memories and that only being possible through another “deal” with Enki. I liked Maggie’s character, she seemed very clever.

        1. Rawls

          This is an interesting idea, but I don’t expect to ever revisit this story.

  18. Thomas_windsor

    Hell yea! What a great end to an absolute killer of a story. I loved the characters, the development, the sex. It was also nice to get a story with a smaller harem as you got to know Kate and Alyson way better respectively. Thank you

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the kind words ๐Ÿ™‚ I had a great time writing it.

  19. Turtletracks

    Great ending to a great story. Kudos

  20. divemaster99

    Rawls, thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ for your hard work and one incredible story…… I truly enjoy your work… please keep it rolling!!