Enki’s Puzzle Ch. 1 to 33

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Eighteen-year-old Nick Dobson messes with a Sumerian puzzle. The lascivious god Enki traps him in the same, repeating day. The only way out is to solve the enigma of the puzzle. The solution keeps pushing him to get closer to his mother.

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  1. RighTwIth3not

    This is a perfect story of this genre – really well done

  2. DicchoHippo

    Loved the happy ending with this one. Guy ends up with impregnated Mom and Sister. Perfect.
    I know you generally don’t do sequels, but I’d love even a cameo in one of your stories where we get to see how some of your past protagonists are doing with their incestuous families (hopefully happily!)

  3. guymanguymanguy21@gmail.com

    The first 12 chapters of this made me a fan. Well done! Looking forward to continuing.

  4. Will

    This remains my favorite story. I would like a sequel like you did with Palmer Mansion. And I like the detail of the experience of the different partners when they are having sex. When you say a” world of sensation” it would interest me to know what kinds of sensation. Like when you were detailed about ” there were some things that Nick expected and some that surprised him. So my vote for a new story is to bring back Nick and Maggie and Enki

    1. Rawls

      I generally avoid sequels unless I can do something new with the characters. Palmer Legacy was an exception. Enki’s Puzzle ended well, and I don’t expect to pick it back up.

  5. DarkAngelJL

    So glad I finally joined to read the ending. I loved it from beginning to end.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for feedback! Glad to have you here ๐Ÿ™‚ Lots more to read …

  6. AfkasH

    So effing good, the wait and tease just made the ending so much more satisfying. *chefโ€™s hand kiss.

  7. Widnesian

    Please please do a part two to this erotic masterpiece, I would love to see some chapters focusing on the threesome sex between Kate, Nick and Allison.


    1. Rawls

      Glad you enjoyed it! I don’t really enjoy writing direct sequels, so I don’t think there will be another Enki novel. But you never know.

      1. Widnesian

        I think youโ€™ve got the level of character development and plot build spot on with this story making the scenarios much more believable.

        1. Rawls

          Thank you. That’s what I try for in my novels. That’s also why I don’t like sequels. The characters have already gone on their arcs. They’ve slayed their dragons (or been eaten by them). The journey is complete. Rather than come up with new arcs for them, I’d rather try something with new characters in new places.

      2. Badjuju

        Maybe we can find out where the cube ended up? But I am happy I stumbled upon this series. It has been very enjoyable to read and I really love the art.

        1. Rawls

          Thanks for the feedback. What happens to the cube is left to the reader’s imagination. ๐Ÿ™‚

  8. wt859

    This story is great! One of my favourites on here

    1. Rawls

      It’s fixed. If you’re still having problems, try clearing your cache before reloading the page.

  9. Math35

    I have a 404 error when i click on the links

    1. Rawls

      It’s fixed. If you’re still having problems, try clearing your cache before reloading the page.

  10. kabob83

    The textured file is for Palmer Legacy not Enki’s Puzzle.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for letting me know! It’s fixed now.

  11. Vance Lance

    I keep coming back to this story. I rarely revisit old material, but I do with this story, it was so intense and well written. I’d love to see some sort of continuation of the styles and themes you explored here.

    1. Rawls

      I think one of the reasons this is a popular story is how intimate it is. We spend a lot of time getting to know the characters and watching them change. I do plan my next novel to be more intimate, so we’ll see how that goes …

      1. Vance Lance

        Yeah, intimate sounds about right. I’m excited to see what your next story looks like then!
        Also, I hope you’re feeling better after your covid and stuff, I had a bout of that earlier this year and it messed me up so bad that I didn’t feel right for at least a month. So remember to be kind to yourself and allow your body to recover properly.

      2. Vance Lance

        Don’t know why that double posted, also just checked and realised that your update about covid was from freaking ages ago, so, sorry on the lateness about that! I haven’t checked my accounts for a while.

  12. rc888

    great story just finished reading it,loved the plotting and the creativity and the constant tension in the story, although the ending didnt seems so clear fo me as a reader ,the fact that the puzzle was stolen gave me a thinking maybe there is a going plot as such chris stole the puzzle and so on.

  13. numq

    Awesome story. Very well done. Hope you do maybe an epilogue with Maggie. Only parts I didn’t really like where the Fred and Chris sex scenes. Especially the one where she made him listen to her have sex with Fred in revenge. That was too far and she should have apologized for that. Apart from that really nice story. Although I do wonder if it’s really love or all just one big manipulation with the way things went. I mean he really did change, but then again he used his past experiences to always know what to say and sometimes straight up used guilt to get his way. Anyway, it was hot. Kudos

  14. Lobria

    Hey Rawls. So finally have time to comment about this story. I have to say loved it. I do have a few things but I’ll talk about that later and there most likely nothing since the tone and such but I ‘ll talk about that later. So the way you wrote the characters I thought was fantastic. You did a really good job with all of them. I like how you made this believable. The way they would react, especially Kate finding out about Enkie. That to me was a good reaction. I do wish there was a little more. Possibly questioning the whole thing. Is Nikki really honest with me or is he being corrupted. A little more of that but still good non the less. Also I love Alyson in this. Especially at the end that she ignores Chris. Very good character development. All of them especially Nikki. Kate was also good but I do think you could’ve shown more of her husband being a asshole before then to really hit home how awful he was. I know that he was later on but I’m saying in the early chapters. That would’ve been a little better but still good since you gave a motivation as to how this could happen. Also I forgot the gilrs name that Nikki was talking to. I was gonna say beforehand that she felt kinda unnecessary since you barely bring her up and at the end I’m like why is she back and why she disappeared. Until you wrote that she had forgotten so I was like. Oh yeah. Right. I still wish she was more relvant to the plot but I get it why not.
    The sex scenes fantastic. Love them like always. But a few things. I wish you did more with the mom and sister. I know that the pov is on Nikki but you did have them suck on each other breast so I wish you had a scene with just the two of them togther. Also we finally have Kate involved now and we only one last chapter with Nikki fucking her in the pussy. I wish there was one other chapter so we could have more with the two of them doing that. Been a long tease and just one chapter. granted it was hot and the one before that but I wanted a little more. Also we also finally get a threesome and just briefly. That also felt kinda of a let down. I wanted more with three of them.

    But in all honestly you did a great job with this. I do think I wanted some more at the end with the mom and sister. But the way you ended was great. I have to say the best ending to your stories ever. Honestly. It felt sweet. Kind and him talking to that one chick at the end felt so sweet. Great job like always Rawls. I look forward to more like always. Take care.

    1. Rawls

      Glad you enjoyed it. Thanks for the detailed feedback!

  15. 7Myxzptlk

    After reading the end, I love how the story is finished.
    Hoping there’s an epilogue mini-series about Maggie marrying Nick and having kids with him too.
    Maybe Nick’s daughters ride daddy 18-21 years later? Just a suggesstions.

  16. Planet4

    After reading the finale, I wish I could post gifs. I would paste in every “chef’s kiss” loop I could find.

    The character arcs of all three of the mains were steeped in authenticity. Which may be weird to say about a magical realism incest story, but no less true. It was obvious your vision of who Nick, Kate, and Alyson were as people was firmly established in your mind throughout the novel. That clarity shone through from beginning to end.

    The image in my head of Nick, especially, was sharp from the start and grew along with the character. My mind’s eye saw him walking, talking, and holding himself much differently as he progressed.

    I said it in the Palmer Legacy comments but I’ll say it again: You’re a word wizard. Keep it up, please.

    1. Planet4

      Oh, and thanks for Maggie! I was bereft when she was clipped by Enki (another signal that I was invested in the story).

      Also, I am glad you’re not thinking sequel. I believe it would diminish what you accomplished here.

      (Jeebus… I came looking for stroke material and now I’ve written more pseudo-intellectual reviews of your work than almost any other author. WIZARD!)

    2. Rawls

      I’m inspired by the feedback! So happy that what I create is appreciated. ๐Ÿ™‚

  17. Anders

    โ€œYou are not the first mother to favor my gifts with rage. You
    wonโ€™t be the last. My work here is done.โ€
    I have my hopes that there will be a second story.

    1. Rawls

      Sorry, no plans for a sequel. I like end novels in a way that invites the reader to imagine what comes afterward.

      1. RighTwIth3not

        It would be interesting to explore Maggie’s journey, where it coincides with Nicks.
        All from her perspective, then a further journey trying to regain her lost memories and that only being possible through another “deal” with Enki. I liked Maggie’s character, she seemed very clever.

        1. Rawls

          This is an interesting idea, but I don’t expect to ever revisit this story.

  18. Thomas_windsor

    Hell yea! What a great end to an absolute killer of a story. I loved the characters, the development, the sex. It was also nice to get a story with a smaller harem as you got to know Kate and Alyson way better respectively. Thank you

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the kind words ๐Ÿ™‚ I had a great time writing it.

  19. Turtletracks

    Great ending to a great story. Kudos

  20. divemaster99

    Rawls, thank you ๐Ÿ™‚ for your hard work and one incredible story…… I truly enjoy your work… please keep it rolling!!

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the feedback! I had fun with this one. I’ll do my best to keep those pages turning.

  21. Craig23

    Incredible chapter of an incredible story! Great work, Rawls.

  22. Vance Lance

    Amazing chapter, amazing story. Thanks so much for creating such good content.

  23. Dogboy1313

    Chapters 31 and 32 were amazing! Good to see Kate and Allison get bred. So great. Awesome work thanks!

    1. Rawls

      Glad you liked it! I appreciate the feedback ๐Ÿ™‚

  24. AuntLover

    Finally! What we’ve all been waiting for as you built up such a wonderful climax. This is the best story I have ever read. Love the relationship you created between Alyson, Nick, and Kate. Can’t wait to see what Enki has in store for the final chapter(s). Wish it never ended, but bravo on a fantastic story Rawls!

  25. Schunn99

    Puzzle opens and the grand daddy of all the dark stones that it was made by Enki and is sitting there soaking up the lust and divinely presence of Enki for millennia making it way stronger than the others?

  26. Schunn99

    How many more chapters were you thinking Rawls?

    1. Rawls

      One to two more chapters depending on the pacing.

  27. Schunn99

    And thatโ€™s that. Maybe Enki shows up to all three of them. And waiting on one loose end to be tied up. Decision on how to deal with dad. Maybe Enki makes Dad forget his family or he dies of a sudden widow-maker type heart attack after he catches the three of them together in the biblical sense. Or the box opens and kills him. And then we are waiting on the girls bellies to swell, maybe Enki will restore the girlfriendโ€™s memories before mom and sister give birth?

  28. waltdee

    Now THAT’S what I’m talkin’ about!

  29. MsOedipusSex

    โ€œAlysonโ€™s anger passed when she the hopelessness spread on his face. โ€œ

    (forgot โ€œsawโ€)

  30. thelemicrose

    This is one of the best stories of yours that I’ve read, and I cannot WAIT to see how it ends!

  31. waltdee

    I wish you would release chapters publically after a few weeks for those of us too broke for a membership, but I understand that you can’t/ I guy can still wish, though.

    1. Rawls

      Sorry, I have a system that works well for the site. I don’t plan on changing it.

      1. waltdee

        I don’t blame you. Just wishin’

  32. jedisolo

    I love this story, wish you could release two chapters of this amazing story in one week.

    1. Rawls

      My schedule is rigorous as it is, I don’t think that would be possible.

      1. jedisolo

        I know it is and I love all your stories, keep up the good work. Right now this story is my favorite.

  33. Simon S.

    That was one of the best chapters to have to “redo”.

  34. AuntLover

    Absolutely LOVE this story and where it’s going. The companionship you’ve built between Alyson and Nicky has been phenomenal. Can’t wait for Kate’s turn!

  35. Schunn99

    Mhmm, twins or triplets for Alyson or Katie would be great. Wonder if Enki will reward Nick and wipe his dadโ€™s mind if he successfully breeds his mom and sister? Like he makes the abusive bastard completely forget that he was married or had kids?

  36. Holyx

    Are we getting Enki puzzle illustrated chapter 11, 12 and 13 this month?

    1. Rawls

      I’ll ask him and get back to you.

      1. Rawls

        Should be two chapters over the weekend.

  37. Takkon

    Tried downloading from a diffeent browser still doesn’t work

    1. Rawls

      We’re looking into this issue. Hope to have a solution soon.

    2. Rawls

      Should be fixed now. Sorry for the trouble!

  38. Razorith

    Can’t open the latest update on my phone. ๐Ÿ™ The file will download then randomly open an unrelated app.

    Anyone know what might be causing this? I’m on a Samsung Galaxy S21

    1. Rawls

      Hello! Try downloading from a different browser on your phone. Let me know if you still have difficulties with the download.

  39. 7Myxzptlk

    Tiiiiiiiiiiiime for the INBREEDINGGGGGGGGGG!!!!!

    1. Rawls

      You and the god Enki agree ๐Ÿ™‚

  40. Endgame Avenger

    How can I access the chapters released for free? I can’t seem to find them

  41. PuyBo

    “penne and pancetta sauce” LOL

  42. Craig23

    Dangโ€ฆyou just transitioned into the sequel 2/3 of the way through the story. Pretty sneakyโ€ฆ

  43. Lobria

    Hi Rawls. I just want to say that I feel that this is your best work on here. I really like how you are developing the character’s. The scenes without the sex stuff I’m actually interested in. Nikki development is great, he has become a better person and his dialogue with his mom and sister is great. The way he talks to them and comfort them. Very sweet. The pacing to the story is excellent, The story by itself is interesting enough and tease of sexual acts keeps the viewer wanting more. Very good stuff. I also like that in this last chapter you are making Nikki think on what is the right thing to do and now he is given an ultimatum. Very interesting. I see were you are going with this and I feel that this is the most thought out you made one of the stories and characters. I kinda wouldn’t mind if Nikki didn’t have to do what he’s about to, that he fought it more. I think that would’ve been neat but then again I do want him to do it too lol. But I understand why he has to Chirs and his dad are jerks. I’m looking forward to how he is gonna convince Alison to leave Chris, I hope he will be able to talk to her normally and convince her. I do wish that you had Kate and Allison go at it more, let that conflict and dialogue play out more I would’ve love to see that. The character stuff is very good here and I could read more of it. I hope you do that again in the future and let it play out more as well. I’ve gone on long enough, great stuff. Love this story, you mix character and sex stuff very well in this series and this your best work. Take care Rawls, Keep up the great work.

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the in depth feedback. I did have a detailed plan for this one and it’s been a ton of fun fleshing it out. Seeing the appreciation for this novel is extraordinarily rewarding. On to the back third of the story!

  44. Vance Lance

    Holy shit. Not pulling any punches there. What an epic chapter! (referring to chapter 27).
    This is easily your most compelling story yet, your versatility and skill as a writer is amazing.

  45. Jannic

    Oh Maggie, I am torn between whether I’m hoping that Enki relents when Nick follows through and gives her back her memories, or that Final Form Nick just manages to win her over again once the loop ends.

    Either would actually be a pretty satisfying ending.

    1. Jannic

      (Watches for crack in Authorial Poker Face.)

  46. Holyx

    Hey Rawly didn’t you say we’re getting two chapters of illustrated Enki puzzle this month? It pretty much the middle of January and chapter 11 is not out yet which is surprising.

    1. Rawls

      TenderMindd is working hard on it. We hope the first of the two will be out soon.

    2. Rawls

      Update: It looks like both chapters will be ready at about the same time. I’ll release them with a day or two between them.

  47. Planet4

    Well, god damn… twist that knife, why don’t you? (ch. 27)

    1. Rawls

      ใƒพ(โŒโ– _โ– )ใƒŽโ™ช

  48. AuntLover

    This has become my favourite story! Really enjoying the direction you’ve taken this story and I can’t wait to read more!

    1. Rawls

      Entering act three of this novel in three … two … one … tomorrow.

  49. thelemicrose

    This is an excellent story, and I can’t wait to read the next chapter! I just hope everything comes out alright in the end…

  50. Vance Lance

    Amazing as always. Can’t wait for the next chapter. Really keen to see how the plot develops.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks! Act three is about to kick off with a bang ๐Ÿ™‚

  51. Acclord

    I really like the story, but I feel it is taking to long. I am very curious about the ending.

    My suggestion would be to focus on this story during the next weeks so we can know it’s ending.

    1. Rawls

      I have a plan for the story, and it has many more chapters to go. Sorry, no quick resolution for this one ๐Ÿ™‚

      1. T B

        Any idea how many chapters Enki will have?

        1. Rawls

          I’m not sure, but in my outline we’re about 2/3 of the way through.

  52. Italian10inch

    Maggie seems interested in Fred โ€œShe would have to ask him more about his father later.โ€ and Fred thinks Maggie is a โ€œhottieโ€. Would be interesting if she does the father to help Kate forget about Fred and go all the way with Nick. That would push her into a pregnancy. Also funny that the black stone has been put on the back burner for now.

    1. Rawls

      I’m not sure if this will come out directly in the text, so I’ll note it here: the stone does not have the same effect on people as other stones because its energy is being drained by the puzzle.

  53. herman.spag

    Fruit of the poisonous tree grows rotten. (could mean Fred is infertile or something idk, maybe Kate is? but probably not Kate) The virtuous tree bears ambrosia. (Possibly meaning nick being fertile) Cut back weeds and sow a harvest worthy of Enki. (idk about weeds, maybe a metaphor for boundaries? but harvest could mean Nick’s gotta get Kate, Alyson and Maggie pregnant).
    That’s just my theory.

  54. herman.spag

    i love where this is going, please update this soon!

  55. DoesNotMatter

    This is absolutely(by a small margin, but still)my favorite story by you. And chapter 23…..well damn. So good.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks. You’re not the only one, seems to be my most popular story on the site. I’ll try and one up it with The Palmer Legacy ๐Ÿ™‚

  56. rc888

    i realy like this story, the plot carry you nicely a long the chapters,like your other stories such “the dark stone”, the characters have similaritys ,i wish the main hero the male will be more assertive along the story in his personality overall and also in the sex scene. more dominant. who shows who is the real man of the house and the female leaders.

    1. Rawls

      I mix up the characters from story to story. There are a bunch of stories with men that are more dominant like The Sex Talk and Something in the Water.

  57. Minoin

    Hi there Rawls,
    I must congratulate you on this fine piece of work. I cam across it by accident: the free chapters on Reddit were a convincing advertisement. I decided to take a subscription to read the rest!
    I’ve been out of work for months so money is tight, but your story was so enjoyable that I had to support you, even if it’s only for one months (but hopefully more).
    Kudos, and I am curious to read your other work (which I have not done yet)

    1. Minoin

      OMG: I just noticed there’s an illustrated version… Jackpot! ๐Ÿ˜€ ๐Ÿ˜€

    2. Rawls

      Thanks! There’s lots to catch up on. I hope you fun checking out the different stories on the site ๐Ÿ™‚

  58. dirtyminds

    how can i get to read chapter 17

  59. Chucked_Sandwich

    Dangnabbit! a cliffhanger chapter ending again!!!! ๐Ÿ™‚

  60. Schunn99

    Hmm reddish glow, inside the box is there a dream stone or a shard inside the puzzle box?

  61. 7fan

    really love your work. its some of the most engaging erotic literature ive ever read. im really looking forward to Nick and Kate’s eventual consumation. maybe even a pregnancy between them and or Kate leaving her husband for Nick. that may just be wishful thinking ๐Ÿ˜› either way keep up the amazing work. im loving it.

  62. james abrouzek

    This is my favorite of your stories. The pace is appropriately slow, and Kate shows the motherly reluctance you’d expect, which is gradually overcome as she warms to her son and Enki’s magic works on her. I also love the way the circumstances require the two siblings to work together to solve the puzzles and how she helps him with the seduction of their mother. Their relationship adds a fabulous element and a further erotic charge to the story. All around, terrific work — I’m looking forward to the consummation of the mother-son relationship.

  63. BallaDom

    Let me just pick my jaw up off the floor. Loved chapter 17. I’m so into this story. Can’t wait to see where it goes next ๐Ÿ˜€

  64. Lead_Cenobite

    Just read ch.17. I’m loving this story my favorite is stil the haunting of palmer mansion, but enki is fastly becoming my 2nd favorite replacing there’s something in the water.

    Keep up the good work can’t wait for the next chapter.

  65. alldragon

    The background raw version needs to be updated only goes up to chapter 13

    1. Rawls

      I just checked and both versions are updated. It may be that you need to clean out your browser’s cache because it’s loading an older version of the page.

  66. Oden1987

    Chapter 15 is great! This has got to be your best story to date. Itโ€™s sad to see it coming to a close. The character build up, and also not having to many characters as well really hones in on the individuals. Stay the course with this one, looking forward to more chapters before it ends! I hope your working on other stories that are multichapter as well. Thanks!

    1. Rawls

      Thanks! And … I wouldn’t be so sure it’s coming to an end ๐Ÿ™‚

  67. Schunn99

    Hmm, so the loopโ€™s done huh, darn I was hoping that that time would start to pass for Mom, sister and Nick while still stuck in the loop, and they would be heavily pregnant when they came out, unless Enki makes them all very fertile and speeds up their pregnancies in some magical god like way? Pretty sure that Mom and sister are primed for breeding though. Increase in breast size for both of them now, hmm interesting

  68. Simon S.

    Ch. 14 has some good ground work for wants coming next. A little low in intensity but still looking forward to it.

  69. bostant

    My least favorite story but not because of the pace. The problem is the naiveness of the male character. Everytime he takes a step, he has to go back 3 steps. He is a wussy and totally controlled by other females. Interestingly, more and more this is becoming a norm in your stories.

    1. Rawls

      I appreciate the feedback, even if it isn’t your favorite story.

  70. Dannny

    Love the story, the pacing is perfect! Great job!

  71. keylessclock

    keep getting my payment plan canceled on me Rawls can i get some help please

    1. Rawls

      It looks like your bank rejected both payments, so your account expired. If the payments were accepted on your end, email me a screenshot of your bank feed and I can activate your account: rawls@rawlyrawls.com

      If the payments didn’t go through, you might try a different card, or PayPal.

      Thanks for the support!

  72. 7Myxzptlk

    Really expecting some pregnancies in the cumming chapters!

    1. Rawls

      They’ll have to have sex first! ๐Ÿ™‚

  73. 7Myxzptlk

    Really expecting some pregnancies in the cumming chapters

  74. TheCarp72

    Hey Rawls, I’ve been loving this series so far! Problem is I tried downloading this version and it’s still only giving Mr the first 10 chapters. Is this just me who’s having this problem?

    1. Rawls

      Hello! I just did a double check. The new version is working correctly. You may need to clean out the cache on your browser, it’s probably loading the old version of this page. You can also access it from a different browser.

      1. TheCarp72

        Okay yeah it worked when I went into a different Browser, fuck that was a great chapter! Keep em coming!!

        1. Rawls

          Thanks! (. โ› แด— โ›.)

  75. Mack

    All I wanna know is how in the hell do you keep all these amazing stories straight in your head and update them independently??! If it were me, they’d be a matted mess by chapter 2

    1. Rawls

      It’s not easy! That’s why I’ve dropped down to two main stories at a time. I make lots of notes. Notes help ๐Ÿ™‚

  76. Kilrathie56

    Really enjoyed ch 10, keep them coming!

  77. florp0

    Canโ€™t wait for the next chapter!

  78. Uberlad654

    Maybe soon we can get some more sis action, now that moms really started to progress!!!

    1. Rawls

      You know me, I never forget the sister …

  79. Chucked_Sandwich

    Great chapter! getting hot!!

  80. Elbulto

    I can’t access your stories anymore but my last payment posted on March 11th. I checked my account here and it said that it was expired. Do I need to do a chargeback?

    1. Rawls

      I just renewed your membership through April 15. Some people who recurred while the plugin was out of date had this happen. I think your membership should recur normally next month. If it doesn’t, let me know and we’ll find a permanent fix.

      1. bigred411

        Same thing happened to me but I renewed manually.

  81. Mykime

    I am logged in but I canโ€™t view content, please advise?


    1. Rawls

      I’ll contact you via email. Everything looks good on this end, but I’ll help you troubleshoot.

  82. Chucked_Sandwich

    Yep, subbed for this and worth the sub. does he wake up tomorrow with more drama or does he not?

    hmmm. can’t wait for the next chapter.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks! We’ll see what happens on the next today ๐Ÿ™‚

  83. bigred411

    I always really like the emotional parts of this. That slow shift where the person becomes more and the husband/boyfriend ect becomes less. Thanks again!

  84. Kilrathie56

    Love the relationship building between his sister, I think dad went a little overboard (pun?). Got the feeling heโ€™s gonna wake up locked in his room.

  85. gundam5388

    Iโ€™m logged in but for some reason it says it keeps asking me to log in again

    1. Rawls

      I think I found your problem. I just checked your subscription. It ended on March 8 without renewing (it’s automatically set to renew, but you may have shut off the recurring billing by accident). Once you renew you can download the story. Thank you for the support!

      1. Devils3003

        i’ve noticed this post on a few stories recently i think its on the sites end bc mine was set to default at sign up and it never renewed mine either. i re entered everything and again left it to whatever the sites default setting is hopefully it will auto renew next month

        1. Rawls

          I’ll look into it and let you know what I find.

          1. gundam5388

            my account says that membership had expired, but the payment was processed ny my bank on 3/06.

            1. Rawls

              I just reinstated your membership. I’ll email you to confirm.

            2. Dogboy1313

              Hopefully Nick and his mom seal the deal soon and she and his sister are both preggers. Or at least cum receptacles for him. Love the slow burn to this story

  86. Kynobi

    The new page background doesn’t allow me to use Document color options to change the Page Background I’m sure page background looks pretty but, the white background is too harsh for my eyes. Generally I like to use dark mode for all my applications for comfort and to avoid fatigue. Darker colors for background are I think are easier on the eyes – like your website is dark and looks nice – please go back to the old plain format so we have more personal options to display the document how we want it – thank you

    1. Rawls

      Sure, I’ll post both versions in a minute.

      1. Rawls

        Both versions are now downloadable in one zip

  87. Nemenia

    Ahhhhhh! It was too short! Good stuff. Cant wait to see more of this one. Its beginning to remind me of Dark Stone, in good ways

  88. Simon S.

    I’m logged in but for some reason it says I’m not for this content?

    1. Rawls

      Hello! I just checked your subscription. It ended on March 10 without renewing (it’s automatically set to renew, but you may have shut off the recurring billing by accident). Once you renew you can download the story. Thank you for the support!

  89. mrzbot

    On mobile I can’t download this one at all.

    1. Rawls

      Someone else said that, too. I’ll look into this. What’s the error you’re getting?

      1. mrzbot

        No error message, it simply doesn’t initiate the download. I’ve only tried two others but they both worked fine. Love the stories by the way, keep it up.

        1. Rawls

          I copied the button from the Wicked Tower page and reconfigured it for EP. Hopefully this fixes the problem. Let me know if it’s still not working.

          1. mrzbot

            It’s working now on mobile. Thanks a bunch.

  90. SwordandBored11

    FYI, you’re getting a “Can’t be downloaded safely” message on this one.

    1. Rawls

      I just checked it, and I had no problem downloading the story. It’s just the plain PDF, so I’m not sure why you would get that message. If you continue to have this problem, message me over on Discord and we’ll figure it out. Thanks for letting me know!

  91. hungry hippo

    My favorite story of yours (Haunting a close second). The premise is so well done and I like that the women are not under any influence other than time, trial, and error. Looking forward to the remaining chapters.