Eighteen-year-old Nick Dobson messes with a Sumerian puzzle. The lascivious god Enki traps him in the same, repeating day. The only way out is to solve the enigma of the puzzle. The solution keeps pushing him to get closer to his mother.
Illustrations by TenderMinDD: https://patreon.com/tendermindd
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5 out of 5 dark stones (based on 165 reviews)
Not enough Kate content on this chapter smh
This is an awesome story Rawly. Thanks for creating it. Cheers to Tendermine also. My only complaint is how much of a bitch Kate is being to Alyson. I really hope she can stand up to her and call her out on her hypochrisy.
Hi there, how often does each illustrated chapter release ?
TenderMindd tends to have chapters ready about once a month.
Hi really liking all your stories I think you should do your own version of oedipus rex story.
So 9 more months…
If all goes well …
Well ill be honest, at around the Chapter 20 mark I was starting to get a little worried as to where the story was going. As with most stories like this we have the slow build up to the women in question eventually letting down that final barrier and that is the part of the story we are always waiting for. Now I know the author likes to maintain a sense of realism to the stories but as we seemed to be getting there it felt like everything was going off the rails.
Given the nature of this story It seemed really ofd to me that A new non family character called Maggie was introduced who was taking our MC away from mother and sister Alyson seemed to do a complete 180 and go back to her fiancee after all the chapters of her becoming more distant and closer to her brother. Then we have the mother getting all hot and heavy with the father again. I don’t know maybe it’s just me but I felt like when things would finally get interesting all of a sudden we have taken about 10 steps backwards. Fortunately though things seems to be getting back on track.
Great chapter !
Can’t wait for the next Enki illustrated !! And the next Enki audio
Tendermind’s art is another level wow
Chapter 20 was pretty good, not much sex. But the story itself and the interaction between the characters was amazing. Now, I am wondering if Maggie is going to notice how Chris treats Allyson.
I am also wondering if Maggie is going to be a part of Nick harem. “Harem” is the only word I can use to describe Kate and Allyson at this point.
Chapter 21 was great. Kate using the cucumber in her ass was hot.
I like 19 but I hope the girls start committing to Nick more. The dad and fiance have been built up as such dick heads, I felt like the previous chapters were leading to a harem situation but now its less clear. Hopefully the final riddle is a threesome that makes then finally realize Nick is their more important love, but maybe before they figure that out Nick can experiment with Maggie and give them a taste of jealousy too.
I love the artwork. It enhances the fantasy and makes me wish that you could create animated video of this story. How crazy hot that would be.
One minor criticism, – I really don’t care for combining the art and the words onto the same page. It makes it harder to read because I have to zoom. My personal preference is to keep the dialog and the artwork on separate pages….make the artwork be full page. Why combine and compromise the quality?
Again, not a huge deal, just a preference. This is my favorite story. I love the story, the art, and the audio for this one.
Always a fan.
Mark
Loved chapter 18 story and artwork
Hi
Chapter 18 was great. I have the feeling though that Chris has not changed. He might only only said what he thought she wanted to hear.
Chapter 19 definitely has its charm. I mean, the way Nick reacted to his parents’ sex made sense. I think his reaction was more primal and instinctive with some emotions thrown in.
My goodness, Chapter 17 was incredible. Huge shoutout to Tendermindd, the artwork for that chapter specifically was just top tier. And a great time to do so in the story by the way because 17 is a huge milestone for Nick and Alyson.
I LOVE chapter 17; the way Allyson and Nick went all the way showed just how much they meant to each other. Sexy and loving in perfect combination.
How long does it usually take for a new illustrated chapter to be published?
It depends on the illustrator, but it’s usually ready one to two months after the chapter is written.
I love Allyson and Kate. 2 good women who appear to be taken for granted by their respective partners. I am actually hoping that Allyson sees the light and leaves Chris for good, the guy is too much of an a**h***.
Hi . I wounder when the Enki’s Puzzle will be completed and solved .
The text version of this story is complete if you want to find out what happens.
Chapter 15, huh. So, now Kate is being affected too? Wow, to be honest I did not think her breasts needed any improvements but whatever you have planned, I hope it works.
This is by far the best artist. Chapter 15 surprised me at the pure quality of the art. Holy shit lol
Chapter 14, definitely a surprise. The question, however, is if all of this is truly over?
Damn. The animations of Alyson in Ch. 14 are super hot. Particularly the one where she’s pulling her shirt up.
how do i see the animations?
Can you email me with the nature of the problem? rawls@rawlyrawls.com. You have an active Elite membership, so you should be able to see everything on the site.
Chapter 13 was amazing. I wonder if Enki wants Allyson and Nick to fuck?
In the two most recent chapters i cant help but notice the similarity to content form melkor mancin in his hearts comic. I like the art but it seems weird how similar it is.
I loved chapter 11; the illustrations are perfect. Kate looks just the right amount of sexy and cute. She had it all especially Alyson. Both women are perfect. Each unique.
It seems to me that Chris is being emotionally abusive.
The thing is that both women look sexy when they do not even look like they are even trying. The illustrations are flawless.
I can’t open chapters 11 and 12.
I can’t open 10, 11 and 12 on my iPhone
You can try a different browser. If you’re on mobile, desktop is recommended. If you’re still having trouble, send me an email at rawls@rawlyrawls.com or DM me on Discord. Thanks!
Illustrations aand drawings do not give this great story any justice. Rawlyrawls have you considered hiring someoone to do 3DX animation for your stories. This would be phenomenal as a 3D animation like sitcom story with 30 minute episodes. I would pay anything to see that.
Producing an animation of the quality I’d be happy with is out of my range at the moment. I am happy with TenderMinDD’s work on this story in the meantime.
I think we’re figuring out the problem. Try a different PDF reader on your phone. It should work that way.
TenderMinDD did great with this chapter, how many more are we getting this month?
Chapter 12 tomorrow. Chapter 13 should be out at the end of the month, or early March.
If anyone has trouble with the download, try a different browser. If you’re on mobile, desktop is recommended. If you’re still having trouble, send me an email at rawls@rawlyrawls.com or DM me on Discord. Thanks!
Did this story ended?
No, it’s still going. TenderMindd is doing two chapters at once, so it’s taking longer than usual.
Any news on when we can expect those chapter, this is really on of your best story’s with the best build up. And the art of tendermind just makes it even better.
Chapter 11 will be today or tomorrow.
Can’t open chapter 10
Hello! Try downloading with a different browser or desktop. If you left click on the link, it should download.
Chapter 10 is wonderful. Hey…is the cube thing effecting Chris or is he always an asshole.
Thanks for the feedback. Chris has always been an asshole ?
Story is great! Perfect amount of character development. You can tell that the illustrator (tendermidd) put in a lot of effort into details.
Will we see any of the consequences of the male MC’s school habbits?
Chapter 10 isn’t opening for me
Try a different browser. If that doesn’t work, let me know what browser and format (mobile or desktop) you’ve tried and we’ll figure it out.
Tried DuckDuckGo and Chrome on mobile and download wasn’t able to open from either. Seems to be a formatting issue.
Okay, contact me on Discord or rawls@rawlyrawls.com. I’ll get it to work for you. Thanks!
Switched to desktop view in chrome and it worked.
Okay, great! Thank you for the update.
Chapter 8 isn’t opening for me
I just checked it and it works for me. I recommend trying a different browser. Are you on mobile?
Very, very well done. Nice play on the time loop conventions and an excellent pace.
This may be a weird compliment, but you are a far, far better writer than I expected.
Having trawled through various fan-fic-anyone-can-submit style story sites for ages I was prepared for these tales to show only slightly elevated skill from the amateurs. The illustrations were what got me to pony up the subscription money but I’m now all in for the legitimately well crafted narratives. You balance characterization, plot, and hot action with a very deft touch. The pacing is so spot on I keep getting drawn from one chapter to the next, finding it difficult to put down a story until I’ve consumed every chapter.
Plus the amount of available stories and the regular, well communicated updates make the cost one hell of a bargain.
I’m working my way through the archives (almost caught up!) and while I was impressed by the earliest stories your writing has notably improved. I keep thinking “damn, Rawls is fucking legit!”
Cheers!
I feel like framing this comment 🙂 Thanks so much for the kind words. Your support is appreciated!
Chapter 8 was great, I loved how easy it was for Alyson to expose herself to Nick as well cuddle with him.
Chapter 9 is amazing, the way Kate and Nick enjoyed their day was both sweet and later on HOT.
This story is excellent. I love the slow build, and I hope that this one has a long story arc. We’re at Chapter 9 and there are some many ways this could develop from here that there could be dozens of new chapters hint hint. Lots of potential. Does Jess get pulled back in? When does the family open up to each other? Does a domination element develop like that in Jealous girlfriend? What is Enki’s true end game? Does he want to expand his sphere? Like many, I agree that TendrMinDD’s (sp) art adds so much. I’ll admit that this story and Coyote’s Trick are what pushed me over the edge to join. Finding lots of other goodies though. Rawls, love what you’re doing
Thanks for the feedback! Just in case you missed it, there are many more text-only chapters if you want to read ahead of the illustrated version: https://rawlyrawls.com/enkis-puzzle/
If the story is text ONLY, then I read it. But if it becomes illustrated, then I wait to see how it goes.
Chapter 9 Page 4 the image placement ends up with the last word of 8 sentences on the right… Nothing that stops understanding, but a little distracting.
I just fixed it. Redownload for a clean version.
shits bussin
Excellent story development! I absolutely love the slow burns in taboo stories. Can’t wait for the next chapter!
This is about Chapter 4&5
More then first base with Kate. Way to go Nicky.
I remember reading them interpreting the puzzle after it changed and them curious over the she gave you well being, you should give it back to her. From an outsider looking in it was easy to say, “Nick, you have been masturbating to orgasm thinking about your mom over and over, time to let her orgasm too.” Though it was fun seeing him figure it out more on his own.
Kate and Nick grinding each other to orgasm regardless of being clothed was an incredibly hot scene and TenderMinDD that art piece of that was incredible. Kate looks drunk and in a state of bliss and her reverse foot curled toes was a clear way to show her pleasure in that tender moment.
Another moment that was sweet was when Nick asked if they could get together again like that and Kate doesn’t say no.
A new day starting with Kate being soaked from her dream.
We can all imagine it is from the inner turmoil of what she did with her son and the orgasm she had probably had as much to do with it as her hero from the novel with the large member. Yet again another hot scene with her masturbating in the bathroom to a mind blowing orgasm and the humorous moment of covering the incident so her husband wouldn’t come in. I did feel bad that he wanted to be with his wife, she was highly aroused and still she turned him down. Just me.
Enki’s influence on Kate becomes more apparent even if it is not direct in the way she starts having wet dreams and fantasies about big dicked heroes taking her. Something that at the time I was thinking was a sign of things to come knowing other stories from the author.
Great chapters, I love seeing Kate have her own moments and time and the humor and frantic situation as her husband jiggled the door to the bathroom as she was dealing with coming down from her own finger and fantasy brought bit of heaven.
Of course maybe I am the only one who saw that moment as humorous. It was after all a panic and guilt ridden moment of embarrassment for poor Kate.
As always TenderMinDD, Rawly made an excellent choice in having you illustrate this story. Rawly your own art of prose is on high display here as well.
Humbled guys, humbled.
I love chapter 7, its only shame is when Fred interrupts the bonding siblings.
TenderMindD was an excellent choice for this. The scenery & colors are perfect.
But for chapter 7, there’s a whole blank page on page 14. Might have been a tab error.
Just a minor distraction.
Thanks for pointing out page 14. That was my mistake. I’ll fix it tomorrow and post a new version.
Chapter 6 is magnificent! I love how Enki’s clue was pointing to Allyson and not her mother. Great twist.
Now Nick can share his misadventures.
The illustrated ch. 6 turned out just as I imagined from reading the text version. Great work! Look forward to more illustrated chapters!!
Thanks for the feedback!
Another great story. Any consideration for the Dad every get involved? Although I can’t see that happening much in your other stories
That’s a no on the dad. That’s really not my thing.
In love with the art work, In love with the story.
Thank you Rawly for this warm candy of a story.
I love the realistic characters (even though you proved Rawly moms exist)
I still love the mom here.
Awesome! I am sure chapter 5 will be great.
I wonder if Nick will actually enter her next time or if Enki is going have go for the only other woman in the young man’s life. I look forward to 5.
I knew it! 5 is great, I wonder what will happen next? It sounds like fun, what ever it is.
Finally, a story where the characters are drawn as they are described. I like JD’s art, but way too often he starts every female character with zeplins and they have nowhere to go once physical changes start being introduced.
Thank you for the feedback. This was definitely a thought TenderMinDD and I had as we made the early chapters.