Enki’s Puzzle Ch. 1 to 10

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Eighteen-year-old Nick Dobson messes with a Sumerian puzzle. The lascivious god Enki traps him in the same, repeating day. The only way out is to solve the enigma of the puzzle. The solution keeps pushing him to get closer to his mother.

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    1. Rawls

      Hello! Try downloading with a different browser or desktop. If you left click on the link, it should download.

  1. Anteater

    Chapter 10 is wonderful. Hey…is the cube thing effecting Chris or is he always an asshole.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for the feedback. Chris has always been an asshole 😋

    1. Rawls

      Try a different browser. If that doesn’t work, let me know what browser and format (mobile or desktop) you’ve tried and we’ll figure it out.

      1. Diesel

        Tried DuckDuckGo and Chrome on mobile and download wasn’t able to open from either. Seems to be a formatting issue.

          1. Diesel

            Switched to desktop view in chrome and it worked.

    1. Rawls

      I just checked it and it works for me. I recommend trying a different browser. Are you on mobile?

  2. Planet4

    Very, very well done. Nice play on the time loop conventions and an excellent pace.
    This may be a weird compliment, but you are a far, far better writer than I expected.

    Having trawled through various fan-fic-anyone-can-submit style story sites for ages I was prepared for these tales to show only slightly elevated skill from the amateurs. The illustrations were what got me to pony up the subscription money but I’m now all in for the legitimately well crafted narratives. You balance characterization, plot, and hot action with a very deft touch. The pacing is so spot on I keep getting drawn from one chapter to the next, finding it difficult to put down a story until I’ve consumed every chapter.

    Plus the amount of available stories and the regular, well communicated updates make the cost one hell of a bargain.

    I’m working my way through the archives (almost caught up!) and while I was impressed by the earliest stories your writing has notably improved. I keep thinking “damn, Rawls is fucking legit!”

    Cheers!

    1. Rawls

      I feel like framing this comment 🙂 Thanks so much for the kind words. Your support is appreciated!

  3. Anteater

    Chapter 8 was great, I loved how easy it was for Alyson to expose herself to Nick as well cuddle with him.

    Chapter 9 is amazing, the way Kate and Nick enjoyed their day was both sweet and later on HOT.

  4. Mountain Dan

    This story is excellent. I love the slow build, and I hope that this one has a long story arc. We’re at Chapter 9 and there are some many ways this could develop from here that there could be dozens of new chapters hint hint. Lots of potential. Does Jess get pulled back in? When does the family open up to each other? Does a domination element develop like that in Jealous girlfriend? What is Enki’s true end game? Does he want to expand his sphere? Like many, I agree that TendrMinDD’s (sp) art adds so much. I’ll admit that this story and Coyote’s Trick are what pushed me over the edge to join. Finding lots of other goodies though. Rawls, love what you’re doing

      1. Anteater

        If the story is text ONLY, then I read it. But if it becomes illustrated, then I wait to see how it goes.

  5. Kuanyang

    Chapter 9 Page 4 the image placement ends up with the last word of 8 sentences on the right… Nothing that stops understanding, but a little distracting.

    1. Rawls

      I just fixed it. Redownload for a clean version.

  6. KZsong99

    Excellent story development! I absolutely love the slow burns in taboo stories. Can’t wait for the next chapter!

  7. ChromeDragon

    This is about Chapter 4&5

    More then first base with Kate. Way to go Nicky.

    I remember reading them interpreting the puzzle after it changed and them curious over the she gave you well being, you should give it back to her. From an outsider looking in it was easy to say, “Nick, you have been masturbating to orgasm thinking about your mom over and over, time to let her orgasm too.” Though it was fun seeing him figure it out more on his own.

    Kate and Nick grinding each other to orgasm regardless of being clothed was an incredibly hot scene and TenderMinDD that art piece of that was incredible. Kate looks drunk and in a state of bliss and her reverse foot curled toes was a clear way to show her pleasure in that tender moment.

    Another moment that was sweet was when Nick asked if they could get together again like that and Kate doesn’t say no.

    A new day starting with Kate being soaked from her dream.
    We can all imagine it is from the inner turmoil of what she did with her son and the orgasm she had probably had as much to do with it as her hero from the novel with the large member. Yet again another hot scene with her masturbating in the bathroom to a mind blowing orgasm and the humorous moment of covering the incident so her husband wouldn’t come in. I did feel bad that he wanted to be with his wife, she was highly aroused and still she turned him down. Just me.

    Enki’s influence on Kate becomes more apparent even if it is not direct in the way she starts having wet dreams and fantasies about big dicked heroes taking her. Something that at the time I was thinking was a sign of things to come knowing other stories from the author.

    Great chapters, I love seeing Kate have her own moments and time and the humor and frantic situation as her husband jiggled the door to the bathroom as she was dealing with coming down from her own finger and fantasy brought bit of heaven.

    Of course maybe I am the only one who saw that moment as humorous. It was after all a panic and guilt ridden moment of embarrassment for poor Kate.

    As always TenderMinDD, Rawly made an excellent choice in having you illustrate this story. Rawly your own art of prose is on high display here as well.

    Humbled guys, humbled.

  8. Anteater

    I love chapter 7, its only shame is when Fred interrupts the bonding siblings.

  9. 7Myxzptlk

    TenderMindD was an excellent choice for this. The scenery & colors are perfect.
    But for chapter 7, there’s a whole blank page on page 14. Might have been a tab error.
    Just a minor distraction.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for pointing out page 14. That was my mistake. I’ll fix it tomorrow and post a new version.

  10. Anteater

    Chapter 6 is magnificent! I love how Enki’s clue was pointing to Allyson and not her mother. Great twist.

    Now Nick can share his misadventures.

  11. plcwiz

    The illustrated ch. 6 turned out just as I imagined from reading the text version. Great work! Look forward to more illustrated chapters!!

  12. anothereye94

    Another great story. Any consideration for the Dad every get involved? Although I can’t see that happening much in your other stories

    1. Rawls

      That’s a no on the dad. That’s really not my thing.

  13. ChromeDragon

    In love with the art work, In love with the story.
    Thank you Rawly for this warm candy of a story.
    I love the realistic characters (even though you proved Rawly moms exist)
    I still love the mom here.

  14. Anteater

    Awesome! I am sure chapter 5 will be great.
    I wonder if Nick will actually enter her next time or if Enki is going have go for the only other woman in the young man’s life. I look forward to 5.

    1. Anteater

      I knew it! 5 is great, I wonder what will happen next? It sounds like fun, what ever it is.

  15. Old-school Perv

    Finally, a story where the characters are drawn as they are described. I like JD’s art, but way too often he starts every female character with zeplins and they have nowhere to go once physical changes start being introduced.

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the feedback. This was definitely a thought TenderMinDD and I had as we made the early chapters.

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