Enki’s Puzzle Ch. 1 to 33

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Eighteen-year-old Nick Dobson messes with a Sumerian puzzle. The lascivious god Enki traps him in the same, repeating day. The only way out is to solve the enigma of the puzzle. The solution keeps pushing him to get closer to his mother.

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  1. Paulverty

    Great achievement by both artist and author to see this to completion. I enjoyed the story and the illustrations. The evolution on TenderMinDD’s style in particular was fun to watch.

  2. pennsyneil

    Would love a postscript a year or two later to see if Nick and Maggie get back or if mom or sis have more kids

    1. Rawls

      That will have to live in your mind 🙂 I’m happy with where this story ended.

  3. kadrender

    FINALLY! some constructive feedback for tender: Kate and Allyson looked way too similar, especially when their bust sizes matched.

    1. Rawls

      Thank you for the feedback! Yes, this is something we were aware of 🙂 Tendermindd put a headband on Allison about halfway through so that it would be easier to tell the two apart.

  4. user96545325

    A long and awesome journey is completed. Thanks Rawly and Tender for such a great story.

  5. 7Myxzptlk

    I love TenderMindD’s preggo art & would love to see more of it in the future. Thankfully, he’s doing the Palmer Mansion reboot. I can’t wait to see those magical sexy mods, too.

  6. 7Myxzptlk

    Here’s hoping we see Nick & his wives again. I’d love an epilog or same-universe new story as extras.

  7. Anteater

    I LOVE this whole thing. Too bad about Maggie, though. She seemed very decent. I was going to wonder if she was going to have a place, but this is fine too.

    1. Thickdick

      Did you not finish reading? She does!

      1. Anteater

        When I typed that, only chapter 32 had put up. Never mind that chapter was finished like an ending. I thought it was the full story. Thank you for the UNNECESSARY spoiler (sarcasm is difficult without an actual voice and not tone)!

  8. HeliasAlun2488

    I would really love to see the Sumerian God continue and find another family to help in his adventures

    1. Rawls

      This is possible, but not super likely. I wouldn’t want to repeat the concept of this story.

  9. oryu

    Can’t wait for the final chapter to be released, my favorite story of all.

  10. Tony Strokes

    This is one of my favorite stories in recent times, and made even more awesome by the excellent illustrations that accompany it. I absolutely love this one & the Missus Ring. Will the illustrated version of Hauting of Palmer Mansion ever be finished? Cause I don’t think it’s been updated for a long while.

    1. Rawls

      JDseal could not continue on Palmer Mansion. TenderMindd will reboot Palmer Mansion after he finishes Enki.

  11. cmj15301

    So happy to see this one published!
    One more to go, then on to the reboot!
    Looking forward to completing one of my favorite stories – Enki, and the reboot of another great series!

    Thanks!
    Mark

    1. Tony Strokes

      There’s a reboot of this series planned?

      1. cmj15301

        Not this series. Illustrator is rebooting mansion story

  12. cmj15301

    Is this one still active? Can’t wait for next chapter!

    1. Rawls

      You can look at the monthly calendar to see what’s active. I don’t have set deadlines for any illustrated projects.

    2. cmj15301

      Chapter 31 will likely be my favorite chapter of my favorite story on this site so far. Now I need to find my new favorite…
      Things I really liked about Enki were…slow seduction of Kate…who really wanted to be good….chapter 12 when Allyson watched and masturbated was almost as hot as 31…but nothing can compete with Kate’s final seduction…
      Thanks for a fantastic story and exciting illustrations.

  13. Anteater

    Chapters 28 through 30 are great, it show cased Alyson and Kate’s seeing the how Chris and Fred treat others.

  14. DoesNotMatter

    Both the story, and the illustrations are just brilliant.

    1. Drksd6ix

      I love the art. The story is so well done. Bravo!

  15. 7Myxzptlk

    Will we get both Alyson and Kate pregnant together in the final chapter? Personally, that’s a payoff I’ve been anticipating for a year now. XD

  16. Lance

    Finished this story in text before the illustrated version was completed and loved it, Excellent and very page turning. The illustrations were perfect.

    1. 7Myxzptlk

      The illustrations were VERY perfect. TenderMindD is a top 3 artist with Rawls collab. Hoping for another title with him.

    1. Rawls

      ??? We’re probably getting close 🙂

  17. Lance

    Joined 09012023 – Love the entire site the stories text is great, illustrated are even better. Enkis Puzzle story is arousing as all get up, and can I think provoke a dripping cascade of pleasure to the senses. Waiting for the illustrated chapters to catch up to the ending.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for the feedback and support!

  18. Latex

    Ivo Shandor? Someone call the Ghostbusters! 🤣

  19. Thickdick

    Learned a new word today… love these bathykolpian beauties

  20. DM1485

    after reading chapter 27, i gotta say…..Enki is a real bastard. I wouldn’t mind the story ending with Nick and Alyson roasting hot dogs over a campfire made of Enki, lol.

    1. Rawls

      Enki has his own way of doing things …

  21. cmj15301

    Looking back, paying more attention to the artwork. Just reread chapter 15.

    I have to say I’m a little disappointed in the pic that was drawn to end the chapter…

    The story goes:

    Back upstairs in her bedroom, Kate took off her clothes. She pulled the covers off the bed and lay on her back… Soon she had a nipple in her mouth, her left hand holding her boob. The fingers of her right hand moved in little circles on her clit.

    I wish the artist would have drawn that. Granted the pic drawn was sexy and hot….but not as sexy as the author had written.

  22. Anteater

    I tell you one thing, I really liked Maggie. I REALLY feel for Nick. Enki probably should have elaborated on what the punishment when he warned Nick.

  23. Cenny

    When are we getting illustrations for chapters 27-33? I’m sure it’s already been explained somewhere but I don’t know where🧐

    1. Rawls

      I don’t set deadlines for illustrators. But TenderMindd is very consistent with about one chapter per month.

  24. cmj15301

    Yay! My favorite series!!

    You know something I would have found hot AF? When Kate catches dad jerking off….that’s a hot detail for me…

    I would have loved a pic drawn of that scene…dad laying on the bed, pants around his ankles….and a sexy Kate, standing there looking at his sad little dick, smirking to herself….how did I ever think that he was big….maybe even include her imagining sons big cock in same pic…

  25. Anteater

    I love this story, Kate and Allyson are lovely women. I do not think Nick girlfriend deserves to be mocked. It would be interesting if she had a secret fetish for what Nick does to Kate and Allyson. Instead of having just 2, he could have 3.

    I AM wondering if Enki will show himself to Kate.

  26. cmj15301

    Dying for next Enki illustrated and audio.

  27. bruh6889

    Not enough Kate content on this chapter smh

    1. srv313526

      This is an awesome story Rawly. Thanks for creating it. Cheers to Tendermine also. My only complaint is how much of a bitch Kate is being to Alyson. I really hope she can stand up to her and call her out on her hypochrisy.

  28. Ali4779

    Hi there, how often does each illustrated chapter release ?

    1. Rawls

      TenderMindd tends to have chapters ready about once a month.

      1. Ali4779

        Hi really liking all your stories I think you should do your own version of oedipus rex story.

  29. TommyRayzer

    Well ill be honest, at around the Chapter 20 mark I was starting to get a little worried as to where the story was going. As with most stories like this we have the slow build up to the women in question eventually letting down that final barrier and that is the part of the story we are always waiting for. Now I know the author likes to maintain a sense of realism to the stories but as we seemed to be getting there it felt like everything was going off the rails.

    Given the nature of this story It seemed really ofd to me that A new non family character called Maggie was introduced who was taking our MC away from mother and sister Alyson seemed to do a complete 180 and go back to her fiancee after all the chapters of her becoming more distant and closer to her brother. Then we have the mother getting all hot and heavy with the father again. I don’t know maybe it’s just me but I felt like when things would finally get interesting all of a sudden we have taken about 10 steps backwards. Fortunately though things seems to be getting back on track.

  30. cmj15301

    Can’t wait for the next Enki illustrated !! And the next Enki audio

  31. Numben

    Tendermind’s art is another level wow

  32. Anteater

    Chapter 20 was pretty good, not much sex. But the story itself and the interaction between the characters was amazing. Now, I am wondering if Maggie is going to notice how Chris treats Allyson.

    I am also wondering if Maggie is going to be a part of Nick harem. “Harem” is the only word I can use to describe Kate and Allyson at this point.

    1. Anteater

      Chapter 21 was great. Kate using the cucumber in her ass was hot.

  33. Pkacua

    I like 19 but I hope the girls start committing to Nick more. The dad and fiance have been built up as such dick heads, I felt like the previous chapters were leading to a harem situation but now its less clear. Hopefully the final riddle is a threesome that makes then finally realize Nick is their more important love, but maybe before they figure that out Nick can experiment with Maggie and give them a taste of jealousy too.

    1. cmj15301

      I love the artwork. It enhances the fantasy and makes me wish that you could create animated video of this story. How crazy hot that would be.

      One minor criticism, – I really don’t care for combining the art and the words onto the same page. It makes it harder to read because I have to zoom. My personal preference is to keep the dialog and the artwork on separate pages….make the artwork be full page. Why combine and compromise the quality?

      Again, not a huge deal, just a preference. This is my favorite story. I love the story, the art, and the audio for this one.

      Always a fan.
      Mark

  34. cmj15301

    Loved chapter 18 story and artwork

    1. Anteater

      Chapter 18 was great. I have the feeling though that Chris has not changed. He might only only said what he thought she wanted to hear.

    2. Anteater

      Chapter 19 definitely has its charm. I mean, the way Nick reacted to his parents’ sex made sense. I think his reaction was more primal and instinctive with some emotions thrown in.

  35. torisuchi

    My goodness, Chapter 17 was incredible. Huge shoutout to Tendermindd, the artwork for that chapter specifically was just top tier. And a great time to do so in the story by the way because 17 is a huge milestone for Nick and Alyson.

  36. Anteater

    I LOVE chapter 17; the way Allyson and Nick went all the way showed just how much they meant to each other. Sexy and loving in perfect combination.

  37. Kumquat

    How long does it usually take for a new illustrated chapter to be published?

    1. Rawls

      It depends on the illustrator, but it’s usually ready one to two months after the chapter is written.

  38. Anteater

    I love Allyson and Kate. 2 good women who appear to be taken for granted by their respective partners. I am actually hoping that Allyson sees the light and leaves Chris for good, the guy is too much of an a**h***.

  39. issa1361

    Hi . I wounder when the Enki’s Puzzle will be completed and solved .

    1. Rawls

      The text version of this story is complete if you want to find out what happens.

  40. Anteater

    Chapter 15, huh. So, now Kate is being affected too? Wow, to be honest I did not think her breasts needed any improvements but whatever you have planned, I hope it works.

  41. Swify42

    This is by far the best artist. Chapter 15 surprised me at the pure quality of the art. Holy shit lol

  42. Anteater

    Chapter 14, definitely a surprise. The question, however, is if all of this is truly over?

  43. dmiker

    Damn. The animations of Alyson in Ch. 14 are super hot. Particularly the one where she’s pulling her shirt up.

      1. Rawls

        Can you email me with the nature of the problem? rawls@rawlyrawls.com. You have an active Elite membership, so you should be able to see everything on the site.

  44. Anteater

    Chapter 13 was amazing. I wonder if Enki wants Allyson and Nick to fuck?

  45. hooperhap

    In the two most recent chapters i cant help but notice the similarity to content form melkor mancin in his hearts comic. I like the art but it seems weird how similar it is.

  46. Anteater

    I loved chapter 11; the illustrations are perfect. Kate looks just the right amount of sexy and cute. She had it all especially Alyson. Both women are perfect. Each unique.

    It seems to me that Chris is being emotionally abusive.

    1. Anteater

      The thing is that both women look sexy when they do not even look like they are even trying. The illustrations are flawless.

  47. Anteater

    I can’t open chapters 11 and 12.

    1. Italian10inch

      I can’t open 10, 11 and 12 on my iPhone

      1. Rawls

        You can try a different browser. If you’re on mobile, desktop is recommended. If you’re still having trouble, send me an email at rawls@rawlyrawls.com or DM me on Discord. Thanks!

      2. Brandx

        Illustrations aand drawings do not give this great story any justice. Rawlyrawls have you considered hiring someoone to do 3DX animation for your stories. This would be phenomenal as a 3D animation like sitcom story with 30 minute episodes. I would pay anything to see that.