Sezlov and I worked out a template for each character that appears in the first chapter. I’m beyond pleased with the results.
If you have an opinion, please leave your feedback. Your comments are helpful in navigating the course of future projects.
Illustrations by Sezlov: https://www.hentai-foundry.com/user/sezlov/profile
This content is limited to (Rawly Rawls Member Plus) and (Rawly Rawls member Elite). To view this content please upgrade your Membership Plan.
Yeah it’d be good to expand the images. I think Sezlov will do a good job!
Thanks for the feedback! I fixed the gallery so that when you click on the image you can see it full size.
I honestly think you should’ve waited until he got more chapters in on the other story first before going into this. That way we could get use to it more and he can improve. Also I feel you should give us one more sketch update with them in motion sonar have a better idea of what they look. Also is there any way you can make were we can click on the image so we can see it in a larger size. I mostly look at your stuff on my phone and sometimes it’s hard to see. I honestly wished you waited till the story was done before you illustrated it. It feels a bit rushed. But I hope I’m wrong.
Thanks for the feedback! I fixed the gallery so that when you click on the image you can see it full size.
It probably won’t surprise you, but I disagree with you about these. I think they’re wonderful sketches, and I really look forward to this project. I have a ton of faith in Sezlov.
Yes, I will post sketches for the illustrations in each chapter for this story.
Question is it gonna look exactly like Chronicles. Because if yest I’m down, the sketches above don’t look anything like that though. They look like the cover of Chronicles but not the main story inside. I hope they look like what’s inside and now what we have here. If you can clarify that I would feel better about this. Thanks for responding Rawls.
These are sketches, not finished illustrations. The finished illustrations will look like what was in Abrollin Chapter 3. Sketches are much more rough.
Oh I don’t know about this. I’m not liking what I’m seeing here. Maybe it would work better in the story but these look weird too me.
This is far and away my current favourite story. Shame Rose didn’t survive long enough to get her kit off.! I didn’t envisage Mummy’s boy Roy being quite so ripped and I expected Delores dynamic body to be curvier below the waist. No nit picking though! Friday updates are eagerly awaited! Thank you Rawls!
Thanks for the feedback! I agree about Rose. I thought she was a wonderful, brave character. And she was hot! But such are the ways of horror stories.
George is an athlete, and a star on his tennis team. So, he’s in pretty good shape 🙂