The Andersons move into an old Victorian mansion with a plan to restore it to its former glory. One by one, the family falls to the power of the mansion as nightmares that lurk behind every corner seek to erode the family’s innocence.
Illustrations by TenderMinDD: https://patreon.com/tendermindd
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I love how each issue because my favorite art done by Tender. It’s always so good!
This was the story that drew me to all of your work!! the art work here is perfect.
Again, I LOVE HIS ART. I hope that TenderMindd will consider completing “New Aztec Dynasty” when he is finished with this series. I would love to see his renderings of those gorgeous bronze breeding hips. The original artist is probably permanently MIA.
I really love this series, and it was already top tier w/ JD Seal doing the illustrations. But I’ve gotta say, it’s somehow even hotter under TenderMindd’s artistry.
I don’t want to disparage Seal and his work (he is great), but this guy’s artwork is so much better for this particular story.
Gotta say 6.3 you really turned things around for me. Thank you for the close up shot of her face. It wasn’t ahegao like the way JD did it but it was still hot and close enough. Thank you for taking feedback I appreciate that and will definitely come back quicker for this one. Please more close ups like that. Especially since Brittany is next. Like I said before this especially this chapter now go well with JDs just keeps up the good work and please more of this.
I love this story. This along with “The Dark Stone” and “The Pleistocene Ring” have got to be my personal all-time favorites. Many thanks to you and the illustrators for all the hard work.
Thanks for the kind words!
It would be great to have the audios of this story.
I’ll let Silvermoon choose her next story after Enki. It might be this one.
Hey, just a bit of feedback for Chapter 6.1 – On page 7, the image is set in the middle of the page so that it breaks up the text.
Here’s an example of what I mean if that wasn’t clear:
[Beginning of sentence][Image][middle of sentence]
[continuation of sentence][Image][End of sentence].
That was a mistake. I’ll fix this and post an updated version today. Thanks for the catch!
More cap please I lo that story.
Thank you Tendermind your artwork is excellant. I try to check daily for up-dates.
As this has been one of my favorite stories for a long time, I have to admit I’m disappointed with the moments that were selected to show as art in 5.2 – Julie giving in to the deal and her body expansion is a top 3 Rawly moment and to not show anything regarding that was a let down. I understand that is difficult to do (I love TenderMinDD’s work in Enki’s puzzle with my only criticism being the inconsistent breast sizes relative to the story changes). I also understand the challenge of making it your own art story when there is a previously existing version.
Other than that I am loving the new version and am excited to see it finish the story.
Yeah I kinda agree there is a wonderful shot of full view of the mom in JDs but not here and it’s incredibly disappointing. I wish Tender did the same thing but his own way. So far this was the most disappointing chapter for me unfortunately. The art is still incredible.
I appreciate the feedback!
Can I make a suggestion? To the artist, You are a good artist! But to make a differance from mother an daughter. Give the daughter freckles or a nose ring or a tattoo on the neck area. Maybe cupid tat or a pink breast cancer heart or something that stands out from mom. Make sure to show wedding ring on mother only. This is just my own thoughts…….If I was doing the artwork. Every one would bitch at my stick figures. LoL
action gets good about 5.2 so cant wait
Was surprised to see complaints about how old Julie looks – I think it’s basically perfect. Art overall is amazing. I was a little disappointed with how the load size was depicted (ch. 3.2 pg. 12) considering the description of her being “paint”ed .
When will the next chapter come out?
I don’t set deadlines for my illustrators. But Tendermindd is very consistent with a chapter every month or so.
Love to see a favorite series return with a fresh new look. Enki’s Puzzle is your best completed illustrated work so I am stoked to see the team up here again. My biggest feedback for TenderMinDD from EP is that the character designs and body proportions (especially representing pre and post breast expansion) were inconsistent. This so far is already much more consistent which I really appreciate. That gives this the potential to be your goat work. Excited to see Julie’s changes and how it’s handled – hoping that the devil deal lands on the side of “massive”.
Honestly your work has inspired me to try writing something, so thank you. Easiest subscription of my life.
The original story ended chapter 15, will this story version complete the story and go further than that?
The text for this story has been complete for a long time: https://rawlyrawls.com/haunting-of-palmer-mansion-chapters-1-through-26/
The plan for the new illustrated version is to complete the whole story.
Holy fuck that last chapter. Oh almost had a heart attack well done sir. Also thank you for the close up shots I feel a lot artist here don’t do that enough so thank you for showing the faces keep doing that. Also would like to say it’s interesting seeing this new art done compared to JD’s at times it looks like the same scene but in a different angle it’s trippy to me but I love it. Plus the new details to the story and art like wow. my God man this is awesome. Can’t wait for more. Also I love how it’s formatted it’s easier to read.
Damn man your art style is through the roof. Good job. Also you have greatly improved the faces. Thank you for that. Also when you finally get to the chapters of them having sex please copy Jd a bit in those panels. Like the position and most importantly the ahegao faces.
This series needs to come faster
Great story, and great illustrations! This was the second story of yours i ever read, first being “Something in the Water” and im glad it is getting such a great artist to showcase the beauty!
Love it! Tender has improved at illustrating mature women. I still think they look too young and could pass for 25 but it’s gotten better. Here’s a gripe not just for Tender but for most artists: pregnant and postnatal women have darker nipples/areola’s. I think it looks sexy (am I weird? Yes!) but it’s almost never drawn correctly.
Thank you for the feedback! That is a good point about pregnant and postnatal breasts.
Trust Me… Finding THAT sexy is common, not weird.
Please work faster on these one of my fav out of your collection
The artist is working very quickly and consistently on these. It’s about a month turn around for each chapter, which is great!
Sorry, took me a minute to figure out you ate subdividing chapters?
Yes, TenderMindd wanted to do about ten or eleven illustrations at a time, so we cut the chapters in half. This story wasn’t written with illustrations in mind.
I must have missed something. Is this haunting of Palmer a different story? Chapter 2 is definitely different between the two versions?
When will the mom look like an actual mother?
Illustrations are beautiful as always by tender. But I will continue to write and post this until something changes (it’s all I can do). Julie looks 20 years old and there is absolutely no difference besides cup size In appearance with the daughter. JDS was and is so great bc in his illustrations the mothers look like mothers, not a 20 year old girl called a “mother”. After rereading the OG story with JDS art, the first chapter images of Julie holding/pumping Daniel’s cock are so much hotter and way better than this new version. Doing a repeat story like this is going to inevitably draw comparisons so I don’t feel bad saying this. The first chapter is slow in terms of Julie but at least in the OG we had those few hot images unlike this new one with a floating hand grazing his cock. I’m obv not the only one with this complaint and, like others, I voiced it during Enki and absolutely nothing has changed. I get it, you took a shot and went with Tender for Enki. Many people had the same issue with Enki: the guy can’t draw older women (mothers). This is kind of a problem considering that is the reason we’re all here (and your terrific writing of course). Not sure why you would continue to forge ahead with Tender after it’s been established he doesn’t know how to draw milfs.
TenderMindd is one of the most popular illustrators on my site. Check out the past illustrator polls. I agree that there is room for improvement on drawing mature women. That aspect will continue to improve.
JDS also draws EVERY single woman with zeppelins on their chest regardless of the written description. It’s kind of immersion breaking when a character is described as having smallish breasts with a trim figure and in the illustration she’s sporting double Zs with a curvy mom bod.
There needs to be room for the transformation and they all seem to start at the end body state.
And then there’s the penis. Just once I wish either of them read the description. 9 out of 10 in these stories it’s 13 inches long and too thick for the women’s forefinger to touch her thumb. Tender’s just look like decently hung guys, meanwhile JDS draws them at like 18″ and too slender.
I’m here (and aren’t we all) for the freaks dicking down their family members with absurd penises. I really wish Owusyr or SatanicFruitcake could take on more projects. I think both have a great style and draw the characters with fat more accuracy from the text. Owusyr in particular makes the moms look like moms. JDS draws huge tits on model bodies. Not an ounce of fat except for the aforementioned zeppelins and absolute dump trucks on the rear. Meanwhile Tender (as you said) has everyone looking the same age.
It’s not that I don’t like them. I just prefer it when illustrations match the source material more closely. If they’re going to veer off course so severely, I like it when they do adaptations like Pegasus.
Just my two cents.
Yeah I used to get hung up on source material not matching the art but I just don’t care that much about it. I, for one, appreciate the outsized proportions in my porn comics. I want (very) large breasts and big dicks. It just looks so much better, IMO. I know it’s obv not realistic but I’m not here for images representative of real women, I see enough of that everyday. Big cocks are just better in porn, no doubt about it. The comically gargantuan cocks like in many of RR’s stories are awesome – please don’t change this! Tender not being able to draw a woman older than 20? Now that should change.
Julie, the mother, still looks like she’s in the low twenties. Heck, even Penelope, her DIL looks older than her. The story is great, but the realistic age representation in the illustrations remains ‘off’
is there any plans of continuing this reboot? seems interesting enough
Yes, new parts come about once a month. Should publish chapter 1 part 2 tomorrow.
The Haunting of Palmer Mansion is assuredly one of your best. I was hoping you would have changed this one up some or will change it up to were its a complete different story. Either way was good so far.
Uggh so short. Must be half of the original illustrated version and I gotta say once again, as I said with Enki…the mother and daughter look the same (face). Same eye color, same mole placement and looks like same earrings etc. Great artist and illustrations and I’m not trying to criticize but please try to make the mother look like, ya know, a mother.
Hi Rawls,
Long time reader, first time commenter. I love the fact that this story is getting rebooted. I also love TenderMinD’s art.
The only issue I have with the chapter is that the faces of Eloise and the mother character need to look their age. I had the same issue with Enki’s puzzle. I found it a bit difficult to differentiate between the mother and the sister.
Especially since in later chapters, even the “younger” women are going to “develop” bigger breasts. There would be no difference between the MILF characters and the other characters.
The reason why we are connoisseurs of your stories, is because of the MILF fetish. Would love it if TenderMinD could make the corrections in the coming chapters.
Regards.
Thank you for the feedback and support! This is something we are aware of. It has more to do with TenderMindd’s style than anything else. His approach will continue to evolve.
Excellent! I’ve been waiting for this reboot, not that I didn’t like the old one. Character designs look amazing.
One chapter in and already I know this is going to be awesome!
TenderMindD art is the perfect choice for this reboot.
Very well done. That front face of Eloise awesome. I love jds faces but that one made more sense. Also from the person who said they don’t loom like there age. True and you can make them look there age. I wouldn’t mind someone try it. Though I think Redoxa did good with that in mothership. Something in the water I think was more of an issue. But wouldn’t mind someone else taking a Crack at it. I like this a lot. Its easier to read and the art is stellar. Keep it up you two.
From an illustration perspective: A middle-aged woman could be drawn as a middle-aged woman instead of the low-twenties that can almost be 1:1 exchanged with her daughter. That was the main draw-back of Enki’s Puzzle as well.
Great job, TenderminDD! Julie and Eloise in particular are looking fantastic 🙂
Thank you for this. Just making it available for iPhone users again will bring more toward your cause .
Aye noice, please do the whole series. JDseal never finished it (stopped at Chapter 15)
That is the plan. Tendermindd is very reliable. He finished Enki after all. 🙂
What happened with JDSeal? His artwork has been my favorite for your stories
He wants to focus on his own stories. We’re still collaborating on smaller projects.
Ok, this artist rocks. I can totally get behind this. Hopefully, this one sticks around for the whole thing. I’m starting to think this story is as cursed as the damned mansion.
🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣🤣 This time it has to be a success. The artwork is truly wonderful.
I certainly hope so…about the success, i mean. The artwork was wonderful the first time around, and we all know how that ended.
So happy this is back.
Damn, can’t wait for the Brittney scenes later on… Tendermindd really knows how to draw an alluring sister 😉
Okay nice! I was like “what story is this?” But its the OG. Really good story! So happy its getting such a great artist working on it!!! Cant wait for more