The illustrated version of Erato’s Mirror Chapter 3 is live. Post author:Rawls Post published:October 15, 2021 You can find the chapter here. Married neighbors get into trouble at a party. Tags: CalicoMoss, Erato's Mirror Please Share This Share this content Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Opens in a new window Read more articles Previous PostErato’s Mirror Ch. 1 to 3 This Post Has 4 Comments JTass 15 Oct 2021 Log in to Reply Just a couple quick bits of feedback – The 2nd and 3rd paragraphs mention that Ellen is wearing a blue dress and Jessica (the blond) is wearing a sparkling silver necklace. On the last page, Ellen is wearing a green dress, and Jessica’s silver necklace isn’t in any of the illustrations. Rawls 16 Oct 2021 Log in to Reply Thanks for the feedback. I would like to go back and do a rewrite to match illustrations, but I don’t always have the time for that. Sometimes small details will be off. JTass 16 Oct 2021 Log in to Reply Understood. I just thought I’d bring it to your attention so that when and if either you or Calicomoss has the leisure to address the discrepancy, it’s on your radar. Rawls 17 Oct 2021 Log in to Reply It’s appreciated. I wouldn’t have noticed without your pointing it out. Leave a Reply Cancel replyYou must be logged in to post a comment. Don't subscribe All Replies to my comments Notify me of followup comments via e-mail. You can also subscribe without commenting.