The illustrated version of Erato’s Mirror Chapter 3 is live.

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You can find the chapter here. Married neighbors get into trouble at a party.

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  1. JTass

    Just a couple quick bits of feedback – The 2nd and 3rd paragraphs mention that Ellen is wearing a blue dress and Jessica (the blond) is wearing a sparkling silver necklace. On the last page, Ellen is wearing a green dress, and Jessica’s silver necklace isn’t in any of the illustrations.

    1. Rawls

      Thanks for the feedback. I would like to go back and do a rewrite to match illustrations, but I don’t always have the time for that. Sometimes small details will be off.

      1. JTass

        Understood. I just thought I’d bring it to your attention so that when and if either you or Calicomoss has the leisure to address the discrepancy, it’s on your radar.

        1. Rawls

          It’s appreciated. I wouldn’t have noticed without your pointing it out.

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