You can find the chapter here. Married neighbors get into trouble at a party.
The illustrated version of Erato’s Mirror Chapter 3 is live.
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The illustrated version of Erato’s Mirror Chapter 3 is live.
Just a couple quick bits of feedback – The 2nd and 3rd paragraphs mention that Ellen is wearing a blue dress and Jessica (the blond) is wearing a sparkling silver necklace. On the last page, Ellen is wearing a green dress, and Jessica’s silver necklace isn’t in any of the illustrations.
Thanks for the feedback. I would like to go back and do a rewrite to match illustrations, but I don’t always have the time for that. Sometimes small details will be off.
Understood. I just thought I’d bring it to your attention so that when and if either you or Calicomoss has the leisure to address the discrepancy, it’s on your radar.
It’s appreciated. I wouldn’t have noticed without your pointing it out.