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Let me see … as I remember, Gail is Pam’s daughter, and her father is … Monty! She’s Monty’s favorite daughter! When her child is born, it will be Monty’s grandchild.
I love this series. So hot, so good!
It’s a weird anachronism that the titular ring is supposed to be from the Pleistocene but the family is a bunch of blonde and ginger white people. The family obviously practices inbreeding, meaning their genetics would be rather closed. While this might make recessive traits like blond or ginger hair and blue eyes more common, it would also prevent much genetic variance; which I suppose is the point. The problem is there weren’t really blond-haired, blue-eyed, white people in the Pleistocene. Blond hair emerged around eighteen thousand years ago towards the end of the Pleistocene. Blond hair only entered what is now considered Europe circa eleven thousand years ago; this was well after the end of the Pleistocene. It is thought to have spread concurrently with the spread of the domestication of cattle and horses.
This is interesting, and I didn’t even think about it when I started this story all those years ago. It looks like the mutation for blond hair happened in the ice age around 11,000 years ago, and the Pleistocene ended around 11,700 years ago. So there is a gap.
Blue eyes are possibly even younger. They first appeared 6-10kYA. Again, long after the Pleistocene. It was probably spread through Europe first by the Sea People during the Bronze Age Collapse. Then by the proto-Aryan peoples. Though there is a recent study that suggests it dates back to a humans leaving Africa. All humans in what is now Europe during the Pleistocene were derived from a single familial linage.
Light skin occurred much more recently than that, as recently as five thousand years ago. Those original European populations were all wiped out by successive waves of invasion. They were dark-skinned, with straight black hair, and blue eyes. The portrayal of cavemen as white is a product of both the modernist bias as well as scientific racism popular amongst Europeans until very recently.
(https://www.science.org/do/10.1126/science.adh4071/files/_20230303_nid_paleo_gravettians.jpg)
(https://www.reddit.com/r/pleistocene/comments/qhv1ko/europes_earliest_cultures_the_aurignacian_people/)
(https://www.science.org/content/article/ancient-dna-upends-european-prehistory)
If you want a modern person for reference, the actor Michael Ealy is a reasonable approximation.
I’m looking forward to seeing chapter 17 and future chapters
This is a funny and well done story
hello Rawls, I have a question about how you keep yourself on track writing several different stories at a time? I enjoy this site, waiting for up-dates on marooned, haunting palmer mansion, plestone ring, and others. I enjoy the slow build up of how son ask mom about father. like the dark stone, fathers on the phone while son pounds moms pussy. Son keeps trying to push her over the edge. Rawls, the next beer is on me. PS Thank the girls that do the audio.
Thanks for the feedback. I’m not sure how I jump from story to story, but somehow my brain manages it 🙂
wow its just you writing all of this? i thought you had a team like JAB. amazing
It’s mostly just me. 🙂 CrazyDorian co-writes a few stories with me, you can find his credits on McAllister Method, Inevitable, Mother Returned, and the recent JDseal collaborations.
When is chapter 13 going to be released?
I don’t set deadlines for illustrators. But I’ll put the chapter together and publish as soon as I get the illustrations.
Do we know if Uncle Monty had kids with the mom and aunt Pam? If so, which of Billy’s siblings and cousins belong to uncle Monty? A family tree if possible would be nice.
It’s not stated anywhere in the story. A family tree would be complicated. I don’t plan to put one together. I would rather used my writing time on new chapters.
Will Aunt Pam be making an appearance again?
Yes, we’ll see her again.
Great story! she’ll never be the same.
it’s been 3 months since last update , any news
Disarten’s schedule always moves much slower than most illustrators. I don’t have any news other than it’s to be expected with this series.
Why can‘t i read this story with pictures?
You have the right membership level. You just need to click on the chapter you want to read and it will open the pdf. You can email me if you’re still having trouble. rawls@rawlyrawls.com
Chapter 10 seems like page 7 & 8 pictures are the wrong way round. She has her top of then on then off as well as bra. Minor thing , but this is a story I wait to see illustrated and it stands out to me.
Instead of such works, focus on works such as Enki Puzzle Palmer Mansion. Dark Stone, a new one can be made. The guide can continue. People do not want to deal with such a tree-sized penis.
Thank you for the feedback. I understand that you do not like this story. But that is different than “people” not liking this story. Check out the ratings. The good news is that I work on many different kinds of stories, so that there is something for everyone 🙂
I like the story very much and especially the artwork! So yes: there are definitely people out there that like dealing with a tree-sized penis.
we more chapters of this story !!!
Is there anymore chapters coming? It seems like this one is in limbo and I was really starting to like it 🙁
I just posted the sketches for the next chapter a week or two ago. This artist takes many months between chapters, he always has. So it goes slower.
It takes patience to really enjoy these stories.
i mean… unillustrated version can come up first no? surely i am not the first to suggest it but… yea
This is addressed here: https://rawlyrawls.com/an-update-on-what-i-will-write-after-3838-walnut-street/
disarten is top notch! great collaboration
Thanks for updating this one. Of all your current projects ‘The Pleistocene Ring’ is most likely my favorite. The combination of your writing and Disarten’s artwork is top notch!!
Great to hear! Thanks for the feedback 🙂
This one needs more chapters, in General
Disarten works on a lot of other projects, so the pace of this story is not all that fast.
the art in this gets better and better
The penis has gotten to ridiculous proportions this chapter. Needs to be toned down a little. I mean it’s always been drawn cartoonish big but I think this one turned it up. But overall still enjoyable.
So with this update, does that mean Disarten’s hiatus from. The story is over?
Yes, this project should move along at a good pace for the foreseeable future. Hopefully a chapter every month or two.
Love this story hopefully updates more often?
Probably not. Disarten is busy and this story runs on his schedule.
Yes, chapter 5 is what I was waiting for. Quick question, are the speech bubbles REALLY necessary?
Not necessary, but it’s how Disarten likes to do it, and I’ll defer to his choice.
Loved this, hope to see more.
Distarten has taken some time away, but I’m hoping he’ll be back soon.
Understandable.
I really love chapter 4. It looks like the djinn means business. I am looking forward to his mother finally surrendering.
I’m so curious about the ring’s history, was created, why the mom & aunt aren’t telling the whole story. It seems like he got the ring because his rich uncle knocked up his mom. None of the aunt’s kids are from the rich uncle. Was the uncle rich because he did what the djinn told him to do? I’m looking forward to the rest of the story.
Is there any chance of mother son incest marriage in this story?
Not all that likely.
Disarten, really hope you not only continue this project but take on some more. Love your beautiful long-legged large-breasted MILFs.
Billy is not the only 1 looking forward to his fucking Pam.
I love this story too! Your site is worth every penny 🙂 *drool*
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Great story so far!! I really like Disarten’s artwork.
Great story so far! I really like Disarten’s art work.
This story (I have read both 1 & 2) is going pretty good. I agree with ChromeDragon about the mother, especially in chapter 2. Although I did not see if she is enjoying the sex herself.
Not to be picky but where’s the ring on Billy in the last illustration? The story focus is on the ring and yet it’s missing? Aside from that, loved the Djinn unique appearance! Imagined a mean looking childlike character when I read the text but this is far better!!
Good point! We’ll make sure to include the ring if there’s a chapter 3.
I’m sure there’ll be chapter 3! This is a great story!
Loving the art work !
Finally getting to see the Djinn and seeing the mom in such a wonderfully seductive and seemingly caring role and less active poses is nice.
I like magic and a bit of the supernatural in these incest stories as the impetus for such couplings and a Djinn is perfectly in keeping with this.
Great work Rawly and Disarten.
I like your take on the Djinn !
Great feedback. Thanks!
I liked this since it presents this weird mystery that just left us hanging.
I too think this story deserves more exploration.
The artwork handled this story adequately I think trying perhaps to imitate an Archie comics style ? I liked the fact the mother knew what was going on but didn’t really explain it fully. Why he didn’t ask more of her we the audience want to strangle him for.
Great start, I hope there’s more to come