Never really paid attention to the picture at the top of this page before. The girl looking at the picture, being the picture to the left.. very apropos.
Page 28, bottom paragraph – Eddie probably stood before the new painting, not panting.
Hmm.. interesting to see the connections to the other stories taking hold.
Great chapter, definitely heating up. Great writing and imagination using the manifestation of spirits corrupting in a tailored plan each character while playing with the metaphysical and physical transformation journey each must take.
Never really paid attention to the picture at the top of this page before. The girl looking at the picture, being the picture to the left.. very apropos.
Page 28, bottom paragraph – Eddie probably stood before the new painting, not panting.
Hmm.. interesting to see the connections to the other stories taking hold.
Thanks, I’ll fix that typo.
Great chapter, definitely heating up. Great writing and imagination using the manifestation of spirits corrupting in a tailored plan each character while playing with the metaphysical and physical transformation journey each must take.